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7 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING

7 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING


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MỤC LỤC
FORMAT BÀI THI ............................................................................................................................ 4
TEST 1 - DAY 1 ............................................................................................................................... 5
WRITING TASK 1..................................................................................................................................... 5
WRITING TASK 2..................................................................................................................................... 7
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+................................................................................................................................ 9
TASK 1 ................................................................................................................................................. 9
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 10
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 11
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 11
TEST 2 - DAY 2 ............................................................................................................................. 14
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 14
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 16
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 18
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 18
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 19
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 20
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 20
TEST 3 - DAY 3 ............................................................................................................................. 23
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 23
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 25
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 27
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 27
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 28
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 29
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 29
TEST 4 - DAY 4 ............................................................................................................................. 32
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 32
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 34
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 36
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 36
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Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 37


TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 38
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 38
TEST 5 - DAY 5 ............................................................................................................................. 41
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 41
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 43
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 45
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 45
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 46
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 47
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 47
TEST 6 - DAY 6 ............................................................................................................................. 50
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 50
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 52
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 54
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 54
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 55
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 56
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 56
TEST 7 - DAY 7 ............................................................................................................................. 59
WRITING TASK 1................................................................................................................................... 59
WRITING TASK 2................................................................................................................................... 61
SAMPLE BAND 8.0+.............................................................................................................................. 64
TASK 1 ............................................................................................................................................... 64
Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm ................................................................................................................... 65
TASK 2 ............................................................................................................................................... 66
Mindmap ............................................................................................................................................ 66

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FORMAT BÀI THI


(Thời gian: 60 phút)
Viết – hình thức Học thuật

Phần thi môn Viết Học thuật bao gồm hai phần. Các chủ đề môn viết là mối quan tâm
chung về và thích hợp với mọi người vào học đại học hoặc cao học.

Phần 1

Bạn sẽ được đưa ra một đồ thị, bảng, đồ thị hay biểu đồ và được yêu cầu miêu tả, tóm tắt
hay so sánh thông tin bằng từ ngữ của chính mình. Bạn cũng có thể được yêu cầu mô tả
các bước của quá trình, cách thức hoạt động của một đối tượng/sự kiện.

Bạn nên hoàn thành phần 1 trong khoảng 20 phút

Phần 2

Bạn sẽ được yêu cầu viết một bài luận về 1 chủ điểm, một lập luận hay một vấn đề xã hội.
Không có yêu cầu cụ thể về phong cách viết (informal, neutral, semi-formal, formal). Tuy
nhiên các bài luận được điểm cao thường là các bài mang hơi hướng semi-formal hoặc
formal/academic.

Bạn nên hoàn thành phần 2 trong khoảng 40 phút.

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TEST 1 - DAY 1

WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK
who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006

Write at least 150 words

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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:

The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do
you agree or disagree

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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1

The bar chart given provides an insight into the percentage TỪ VỰNG
change in UK citizens who used the Internet. The figures are
given from 2003 to 2006 and across five different age groups. figures (n): số liệu

By and large, it is noticeable that 16 to 24 -year-old U.K. By and large: nhìn


citizens used the Internet the most, while the age group with the chung
lowest percentage of Internet use is senior citizens. There was
a general upward trend for Internet popularity in all age groups noticeable (adj): dễ
from 2003 to 2005. thấy

The proportion of people from the age group of 16 to 24 years senior citizens (n):
old was highest among all age groups and years in 2003 at người cao tuổi
80%, followed by the data of the residents in the age group of
25 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 at 50 % respectively. respectively (adv):
Meanwhile, no figure was given for people at 65 year olds and lần lượt
above in 2003. From 2003 to 2004, the data of 16 to 24-year-old
citizens remained the same, whereas a steady increase was steady (adj): đều,
witnessed in the figure for other age groups . In 2004, the rate of không thay đổi
Internet users from 45 to 54 years old reached its peak at 60%,
while the data of inhabitants at 65 years old and above surged surge: tăng mạnh và
from approximately 0 to 10%. đột ngột

In the period from 2004 to 2006, the number of people from 25 it is of note that: đáng
to 44 and 55 to 65 years old who went online rose gradually and chú ý rằng
reached 80% and 50% respectively in 2006. Similarly, the data

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for both young adults (ranging from 16 to 24) and the senior demographic (n):
citizens initially increased to 90% and 15% respectively in 2005, nhân khẩu học
but then dropped slightly in 2006. After experiencing a
significant drop of 10% from 2004 to 2005, there was a slow the gap...narrowed:
growth in the percentage of Internet users from 45 to 64 years khoảng cách giữa hai
old in 2006. Finally, it is of note that the group with the most con số/đại lượng được
significant number of Internet users in 2006 remained in the 16- thu hẹp lại
24 demographic, but the gap between the figure for 16 to 24
and 25 to 44 age groups had been significantly narrowed.

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

provide an The bar chart given provides an Thường sử dụng trong câu
insight into insight into … and … Introduction, nêu thông tin về
bài

upward/downw There was a general Thường sử dụng trong câu


ard trend upward/downward trend for …. overview, nêu xu hướng
chung của đồ thị

followed by The proportion of people from the age Miêu tả thông tin chi tiết: số
group of 16 to 24 years old was liệu cao nhất, followed by số
highest .., followed by the data of the liệu thứ cao thứ 2...
residents in the ...

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Similarly rose gradually and reached 80% and Dùng khi có sự tương đồng
50% respectively in 2006. Similarly, (cùng tăng, cùng giảm)
the data for .. increased to ...,

After After experiencing a significant drop Dùng để đưa 2 sự thay đổi


experiencing/u of..., there was a slow growth ... của cùng 1 loại thông tin (VD
ndergoing a …, giảm mạnh, giảm nhẹ)
there + be a….

TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

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In this age of massive media coverage, the media is believed to media coverage: Độ
exert a profound impact on people’s perception of current phủ sóng trên
affairs. Given this pivotal role, I am convinced that it should phương tiện truyền
feature more accounts of positive news. thông

One of the primary reasons, in my view, is the disproportionate profound (adj): sâu
reporting of disheartening news on various media platforms that sắc
can arouse negative emotions in viewers. The majority of these
are naturally drawn to the most shocking and sensational news, disproportionate
which explains why these news stories tend to be over-reported (adj): không cân đối,
by broadcasters for self-serving purposes. Surrounded by mất cân bằng
these traumatic events, it is only natural for the viewership to take
a gloomy view of the world around them. Over time, this could disheartening news:
translate into self-doubt, mistrust or anxiety, morbid feelings that tin xấu (làm mất niềm
can take a heavy toll on people’s well-being. tin)

More heartening stories, therefore, deserve wider coverage. The sensational news:
main justification is, as opposed to bad news, good news can tin giật gân (giật tít)
evoke positive emotions, and these sentiments, however subtle,
can bring positive changes to people’s lives. It can be as simple over-reported: đưa
as the story about a firefighter putting his life at stake to rescue tin một cách quá
a senior citizen trapped in a blazing building that can trigger a nhiều
sense of compassion in people. Or it could be something as
inspiring as the story about a Vietnamese athletic shooter, an self-serving
underdog who had, against all odds, become an Olympic gold purposes: mục đích
medalist. Since the news took the whole country by storm, it has tư lợi
inspired thousands of people from various backgrounds to

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persevere with their goals. Were more accounts as such to make morbid feelings:
headlines, they would prompt more people to create positive cảm xúc không lành
changes. mạnh

In conclusion, more encouraging news should be incorporated in justification (n): lý


news broadcast to keep viewers at bay from negative feelings do để giải thích/biện
inherent in bad news. At the same time, this should also minh..
encourage more commendable changes.
put sth at stake
(ngữ cảnh): đặt vào
tình trạng nguy hiểm

underdog (n): người


ở cửa dưới/kèo dưới
(bị đánh giá là thua
thiệt/bất lợi hơn)

commendable
changes: sự thay đổi
đáng khích lệ

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TEST 2 - DAY 2

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population
who were overweight in four different countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

Write at least 150 words

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend 40 minutes on this task


Write about the following topic:

International tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately,


international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people
from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The chart provides a glimpse of the proportion of overweight TỪ VỰNG
adults in Japan, Finland, Australia, and the USA over a two- a glimpse of the
decade period. proportion: cái nhìn
sơ lược về việc gì đấy
Overall, while Japan was the country with the lowest rates of
overweight grown-ups in the 3 years, the USA had the highest surge (v): tăng mạnh
figures in this category. Also, the rates in the four countries all và đột ngột
underwent a surge after 20 years.
shift (n): sự thay đổi
The percentage of overweight adults in Japan and Finland
increased slightly from 1980 to 1990. However, the shift in noticeable (adj): dễ
Japan’s figures is barely noticeable while that in Finland was thấy
around 1 percent. Between 1990 and 2000, there were wider
percentage gaps in both Japan and Finland, but the overall gap (n): khoảng cách
figures for Japan never exceeded 5% while Finland’s reached
10% at the end of the period surveyed. exceed (v): trội hơn/
vượt quá
There were more significant changes in Australia and the USA.
The two countries experienced a sharp rise in corpulent adults, survey (v): khảo sát
with the figures for both Australia and the USA almost doubling
over the period of 20 years, from around 10 percent in 1980 to overweight grown-
more than 20 percent in 2000 for Australia, and around 15 ups = corpulent
percent in 1980 to over 30 percent for the USA. It is notable adults (formal): người
that the percentage of overweight adults in the USA in 1990 was lớn vị thừa cân

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already higher than the highest figure for any other country in all notable (adj): đáng
three years observed. chú ý - tương đương
“noticeable”

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

provide a glimpse The chart provides a glimpse of Thường sử dụng trong câu
of ….. Introduction, nêu thông tin sơ
lược về bài

undergo a surge The rates in the four countries all Miêu tả xu hướng tăng mạnh
underwent a surge và đột ngột của biểu đồ

experience a rise The two countries experienced a Miêu tả thông tin chi tiết: Xu
in…., with the sharp rise in corpulent adults, with hướng tăng lên, với số liệu chi
figures for the figures for both Australia and tiết tăng lên như thế nào
the USA almost doubling over the
period of 20 years….

wider percentage there were wider percentage gaps Dùng khi không muốn lặp lại
gaps in both Japan and Finland cấu trúc “sự thay đổi này”
nhiều hơn “sự thay đổi khác”

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TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

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It is indisputable that international tourism is now one of the TỪ VỰNG


leading businesses in the world. Some people, however, put indisputable (adj):
forward the view that this development would heighten the không thể bàn cãi
existing friction between people from different cultural
backgrounds. I disagree with this view for the following reasons. leading businesses:
doanh nghiệp đi đầu
The first one is that even though there are culture clashes when
people from different countries come into contact, these clashes friction (n): xích mích,
can be resolved with ease, and are therefore likely to have no mâu thuẫn
detrimental impact. Most, if not all, of these incidents result from
cross-cultural misunderstandings, which can be attributed cross-cultural
more to a lack of pre-departure research about the host misunderstandings:
country than to deliberate disregard. Even with some research hiểu nhầm giữa các
done, it would still be challenging for tourists to grasp every nền văn hóa
intrinsic element of a well-established culture. Their failure to
conform to these sorts of cultural norms, as a result, can be pre-departure
empathized with. It is also sometimes suggested that since research: nghiên cứu
tourists come and go, their stay at the home country is just trước khi khởi hành
temporary, which means any offence made by tourists would
then be forgotten and would not be taken too seriously. offence (n): sự xúc
phạm
Another significant reason is that cross-border tourism is more
likely to foster harmony between people from different cultural cross-border
roots. First-hand experience with a culture would render a tourism: du lịch nước
more holistic and unbiased view towards its people, which ngoài
may be far from what we are often led to believe by the mass
media. For example, upon making a visit to Vietnam, many

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American tourists are astonished by the warm hospitality of the First-hand


locals, who, to some individuals’ misconception, should be experience: trải
bearing a grudge over their war enemies in the past. Another nghiệm thực tế
illustration is a visit to a mosque would enlighten foreign tourists
about the good cause of Islam, which is sometimes mistaken as holistic and unbiased
extremism. view: cái nhìn tổng thể
và không phiến diện
To conclude, although conflicts as a result of inter-country
tourism do exist, they can be successfully managed, and more bearing a grudge: ôm
often than not, international tourism is a contributing factor to an mối thù (để trong lòng)
enhanced understanding of people from different cultures.
extremism (n): chủ
nghĩa cực đoan

inter-country
tourism: du lịch nước
ngoài (tương tự cross-
border tourism ở trên)

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TEST 3 - DAY 3

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go
to Parker University

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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:

Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies,


factories and their employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The bar charts report on why students, both at university/tertiary TỪ VỰNG
level and at higher levels of education, attend Parker University. university’s
standing/status: vị thế
In general, the university’s standing/status and tuition fees của trường đại học
are the primary determinants for the selection of the majority
of students in both groups, (and the most substantial recorded tuition fees: học phí
lies in the source of recommendation).
primary
From the charts, it is evident that the university’s prestige is determinants: yếu tố
by far the most important driver of students’ preference, as quyết định đầu tiên
evidenced by 35% of undergraduates and 42% of
postgraduates in the sample. The cost incurred is ranked university’s prestige:
second in the order of importance, which accounts for roughly danh tiếng của trường
one fourth of students in the first group and almost one third of đại học
students in the second group. It can be seen that these two
factors are far more significant to postgraduates’ choice of undergraduates: sinh
school (almost three fourth) than undergraduates’ (56%). viên đang học đại học

While university status and costs are more prevalent among postgraduates: sinh
postgraduates as reasons for school selection, the reverse is viên đang theo học
true for the remaining factors. In fact, university students are chương trình sau đại
three times more likely to apply for Parker University through the học
recommendation of a friend than their postgraduate
counterparts (at 18% and 6% respectively). Location, availability accounts for: chiếm
of accommodation and others are also of minor concern to (bao nhiêu %)

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Parker University students, regardless of their levels, at around


6% to 8% for each. prevalent (adj): tràn
lan

reverse (n): điều trái


ngược

accommodation (n):
nhà ở

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

be ranked The cost incurred is ranked second in the Sử dụng thay cho cấu trúc
(first, second, order of importance. “the second highest”
third)

three times In fact, university students are three times Sử dụng khi muốn diễn tả
more likely to apply for Parker University “gấp ba lần”
through the recommendation of a friend
than their postgraduate counterparts

counterparts In fact, university students are three times Sử dụng để thay thế cho
more likely to apply for Parker University đối tượng có cùng mục
through the recommendation of a friend đích nhưng khác biệt
than their postgraduate counterparts trong một số khía cạnh. Ví

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dụ: male - female

While...the While university status and costs are more Dùng khi miêu tả sự thay
reverse is... prevalent among postgraduates as reasons đổi của 2 đại lượng trái
for school selection, the reverse is true for ngược nhau
the remaining factors.

TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

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Thân bài 2

Since traffic gridlock and housing shortage in big cities are TỪ VỰNG
becoming more pressing issues than ever, it has been traffic gridlock: ùn tắc
suggested that large firms should be relocated to the rural giao thông
areas. I believe this measure would help mitigate the problems
to a large extent. housing shortage:
thiếu hụt nhà ở
One merit of such a measure is that it would help ease the
strain on the traffic infrastructure in many megacities. An pressing issues: vấn
existing issue common among these cities is the failure to đề nhức nhối
accommodate an every-increasing volume of traffic to and from
the workplace. In response, the geographical redistribution of mitigate (v): giảm nhẹ,
large companies would mean a lower need for daily commute to dịu bớt vấn đề
the downtown area and a corresponding reduction in the usage
of not just privately owned vehicles but also public transports. traffic infrastructure:
Not only would traffic congestion along with its associated hạ tầng giao thông
issues, namely road rage and road accidents, be relieved, but

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the currently overloaded public transport system, which is geographical


subject to frequent delays and breakdowns, would be more redistribution: di
adequate and reliable. chuyển sang khu vực
khác
The problems accompanied by housing can also be addressed.
It can be argued that the incessant flow of migrants to overloaded public
metropolises has made the demand far exceed the supply, transport system:
leading to a severe shortage of accommodation and a resulting phương tiện công cộng
surge in property prices. If enterprises move their headquarters quá tải
and factories to satellite towns, there is a fair possibility that
their staff will choose to settle down in the neighborhood for the incessant flow of
convenience of proximity to their workplace. This will ease the migrants: dòng người
enormous demand for shelters in urban areas, and in turn the nhập cư không ngừng
ongoing housing affordability crisis will no longer be a matter of
concern. headquarters: trụ sở
chính
In conclusion, my view is that given the expected benefits of
relocating large firms to the countryside, it is highly satellite towns: thành
recommended that the authorities in charge deliberate on this phố vệ tinh
course of action.
shelters: chỗ trú

deliberate (v): cố ý,
chủ tâm

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TEST 4 - DAY 4

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The table below shows the change in the percentages of people joining in seven
different sports in an European country from 1999 to 2009

1999 2004 2009

Tennis 25% 30% 33%

Swimming 32% 34% 34%

Football 57% 52% 48%

Golf 8% 13% 17%

Volleyball 17% 20% 18%

Basketball 26% 25% 24%

Yoga 10% 10% 13%

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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:

In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly and this affects family
relationships. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the
disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The table indicates how preference for 7 different sports TỪ VỰNG
changed over the course of 10 years, measured in percentage preference (n): sự ưa
terms. In general, the three favourite sports remain unchanged thích
in terms of popularity ranking, while the remaining four sports
underwent changes of different magnitudes. over the course of:
xuyên suốt một khoảng
It is immediately evident that football remained by some thời gian
distance the most popular athletic activity during the whole
decade, with football players accounting for around half of the popularity ranking:
population. Second and third in the list were swimming and bảng xếp hạng đo sự
tennis, whose figures approximately one third of the population ưa thích
base for both categories. It is also noteworthy that football saw a
noticeable decrease of 9% in the proportion of participants, athletic activity: hoạt
and the opposite trend was observed in the other two sports động thể thao
mentioned.
the proportion of:
Among the less popular sports in the list, a remarkable twofold phần trăm của thứ gì
growth in the percentage of golf players was recorded, making đó
it more preferred than yoga in 2010, at 17% and 13%
respectively. At the same time, the proportion of people taking the opposite trend:
part in volleyball ended the period with 1% more participants xu hướng trái ngược
than the beginning figure despite the 1% dip in the latter half of
the phase. By contrast, basketball players declined slightly by twofold growth: việc
1% every 5 years. tăng lên gấp hai lần

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respectively (adv):
theo thứ tự lần lượt

participants (n):
người chơi, người
tham gia

dip (v): giảm sâu

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm


Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

remain unchanged the three favourite sports remain Miêu tả xu hướng không thay
unchanged in terms of popularity đổi của số liệu
ranking

Second and third Second and third in the list were Miêu tả so sánh giữa các số
in the list swimming and tennis, whose liệu, thay cho việc sử dụng
figures approximately one third of “the second/third highest”
the population base for both
categories

see a noticeable It is also noteworthy that football Miêu tả xu hướng giảm rõ rệt
decrease saw a noticeable decrease of 9% của số liệu, thay cho cấu trúc

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quen thuộc “decrease”.

respectively A remarkable twofold growth in the Miêu tả lần lượt số liệu chi tiết
percentage of golf players was của hai đại lượng.
recorded, making it more preferred
than yoga in 2010, at 17% and 13%
respectively.

By contrast…. By contrast, basketball players Miêu tả xu hướng ngược lại


declined slightly by 1% every 5 với xu hướng trước đó vừa
years. miêu tả

TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

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Thân bài 2

It is true that the speedy change in people’s lifestyle exerts TỪ VỰNG


certain impacts on family life. Most of these impacts, in my speedy change: sự thay
view, are negative, prevailing over the positive ones. đổi nhanh chóng

On the downside, the bond between family members is prevail (v): chiếm ưu thế,
being compromised as a result of the hectic life that many chiếm đa số
people are leading. With both parents working and children
spending a large part of their day at school, many would compromise (v): làm tổn
settle for a quick meal rather than a family meal which often hại
involves the time-consuming process of cooking, setting
the table and cleaning. It follows that the chance for these time-consuming process:
individuals to bond with their family members is harder to quá trình tốn thời gian
come by. Even when they do have time together, some are
still occupied with checking emails and keeping up with

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work progress, tasks that are no longer confined to the conventional office
conventional office hours. Interaction among family hours: giờ làm việc hành
members diminishes accordingly, which leads to a chính
weakened family bond in many instances.
weakened family bond:
However, a positive side to this development is that two- mối quan hệ với gia đình bị
income families can usually generate more wealth than lung lay
the traditional breadwinner model. The higher income
yielded would in turn go to covering the basic costs of two-income families: gia
necessities and even some luxuries, thereby alleviating đình với 2 nguồn thu nhập
problems associated with an insufficient income stream,
those that mostly confront lower or middle class families. breadwinner (n): người
Since financial difficulty is the cause of family quarrels in kiếm tiền chính cho gia
many cases, the absence of it is likely to facilitate a more đình
harmonious relationship among family members.
However, this is not meant to say all the domestic upheaval alleviate (v): làm giảm sự
would be kept at bay, for if the parents were not able to nghiêm trọng của vấn đề
strike a balance between work and family, the problem
detailed in the first paragraph would overshadow the harmonious relationship:
aforementioned benefit of a higher flow of income. mối quan hệ hài hòa

In conclusion, the changes in modern lifestyles can be seen overshadow: che mờ


to do more harm than good to domestic lives.
do more harm than good:
gây ra nhiều điểm hại hơn
điểm lợi

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TEST 5 - DAY 5

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population
who were overweight in four different countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend 40 minutes on this task


Write about the following topic:

Many people say that universities should only offer entry to young students with
highest marks, others think they should accept people of all ages even if they did
not do well. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The line graph puts in comparison the variations in electrical TỪ VỰNG
usage throughout a conventional summer and that of a winter variations (n): sự biến
day, while the pie chart illustrates the allocation of electricity đổi
in everyday use in a standard English household in percentage
terms. electrical usage: sử
dụng điện
In general, there exists a much higher demand for power during
winter times than in summer times, and power usage in both allocation of
seasons fluctuates during the day, but of different magnitudes. electricity: chia điện
The primary/principal use of domestic energy goes to heating
purposes. power consumption:
tiêu thụ điện
From the line graph, it is evident that power consumption in a
winter’s day doubles that in a summer's day. However, the
patterns recorded in both seasons showed some similarities in room heating: máy
the better half of the day. They both undergo an initial fall as the sưởi phòng
day progresses, reaching a low of 15,000 in the summer and
30,000 in the winter, before resuming to 20,000 and 30,000 water heating: máy
respectively at around 3.00 p.m. From then on, demand đun nước nóng
continues to rise during the rest of a winter day and peaks at
nearly 50,000 energy units at about 10 p.m. Meanwhile, during power-intensive: tiết
the hotter months, electricity consumption reaches the kiệm năng lượng
highest points both in the early afternoon and late at night with
around 20000 units. electrical tools: công
cụ điện

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According to the pie chart, room heating and water heating,


which account for more than half (52%) of the domestic electricity
electricity consumption, are by far the most power-consuming consumption = power
activities in a conventional English home. The second most consumption
power-intensive group are cooking and washing, with ovens,
kettles and washing machines together taking up 18% of the power-consuming
total energy usage. The remaining 30% of electricity is equally (adj): tiêu tốn điện
distributed between lighting, TV, radio as a group/ on the one
hand and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electrical tools as a
group/on the other hand.

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm


Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

put in comparison The line graph puts in Có nghĩa là so sánh giữa các
comparison the variations in đại lượng khác nhau. Thường
electrical usage sử dụng ở câu Introduction,
thay cho các cấu trúc
“illustrate” hay “show” quen
thuộc.

showed some The patterns recorded in both Miêu tả sự tương đồng trong
similarities seasons showed some xu hướng của một đại lượng
similarities in the better half of the so với các đại lượng được
day miêu tả trước đó.

undergo a They both undergo an initial fall Dùng để đưa 2 sự thay đổi
fall….before as the day progresses, reaching a của cùng 1 loại thông tin (VD

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low of 15,000 in the summer and giảm mạnh, giảm nhẹ)


30,000 in the winter, before
resuming to 20,000 and 30,000
respectively at around 3.00 p.m

TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

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Many people believe that college admission should be TỪ VỰNG


reserved for high-school graduates with good academic college admission:
records, whereas others put forward the opinion that every nhập học đại học
person, regardless of age and intellectual level, should be
eligible for higher education. Although there are justifications for academic records:
both sides, I personally think the former is more viable. kết quả học tập

On the one hand, there are certain merits of rendering tertiary intellectual level: mức
education available to everyone. Among these is a more độ thông minh
educated and productive workforce that the country can benefit
from. With all the necessary skill sets and expertise acquired tertiary education:
at universities, graduates stand a good chance of enhancing các cấp giáo dục cao
their productivity at work. Another benefit can be a reduced hơn (đại học trở lên)
unemployment rate. This is particularly true in the face of the
ongoing automation that has displaced thousands of workers. necessary skill sets
These workers would enjoy a better chance at securing a and expertise: kỹ
sustainable job were they to be given access to higher năng cần thiết và sự
education. Promising as it may sound, such a proposal, in my thông thạo
opinion, is far from feasible, for it would entail customizing all
the current curriculums and training programs to suit a broad sustainable job: công
spectrum of levels, a task that would undoubtedly come at việc có tuổi thọ cao
tremendous effort and expense.
feasible (adj): có thể
On the other hand, I gravitate towards the view that the privilege thực hiện được
of higher education should be exclusive to young individuals
with outstanding academic records. Age is an important factor curriculums: chương
since young students would be less burdened with the trình học

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everyday concerns that a typical mature student is subject to. It


follows that these young individuals can give their undivided burdened (adj): gánh
attention to schoolwork, which is likely to yield better results. nặng
Another reason is that since the highly intensive coursework
offered by most universities could be intellectually demanding, intensive
only those that have what it takes, proven through a spotless coursework: khóa học
academic record in high school, should be qualified. chuyên sâu

In conclusion, although both arguments have their merits, I am spotless (adj): tinh
more inclined to believe that universities should be selective in tươm (bảng điểm
its recruitment process due to the impracticality of granting sạch, có thành tích tốt)
admission to everyone.
recruitment process:
quy trình tuyển dụng

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TEST 6 - DAY 6

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The flowchart below shows how banana chips are made. Summarize the
information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons
where relevant

Write at least 150 words

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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:

Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and
hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should
stop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The diagram gives an illustration of how banana chips are TỪ VỰNG
produced & packaged & distributed. produced &
packaged &
As can be seen from the graph, it takes 10 steps in total from distributed: được sản
raw banana to packaged banana chips ready for consumption, xuất, đóng gói và phân
starting with peeling the bananas and ending with distributing phối
sachets of chips to stores worldwide.
raw banana: chuối
In the first stage of the process, bananas are peeled by a tươi
special machine before being soaked in water to remain in good
condition. In the following step, the soaked bananas are put into peeling the bananas:
a chipping machine where they are cut crosswire evenly into bóc vỏ chuối
thin slices. After being entered a drying lamp to dry, these
banana slices would be fried in hot oil in a large fryer until they sachets of chips: bọc
turn crispy. socola chip

The process continues with using a special sieve to remove the a chipping machine:
cooked chips from the fryer and also to drain the oil from the máy băm nhỏ
chips. This step is followed by a cooling process, and then by
flavouring, in which seasoning is added to the chips for extra crispy (adj): giòn
taste. Finally, the banana chips are packaged and ready to be
delivered and distributed to stores throughout the world. special sieve: cái giá

drain the oil: làm ráo


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Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

gives an illustration The diagram gives an Thường dùng trong câu


illustration... Introduction, mang nghĩa minh
họa, đưa ra cái nhìn tổng
quan về biểu đồ

starting It takes 10 steps in total from raw Miêu tả bước đầu tiên và
with….ending banana to packaged banana chips bước cuối cùng của một
with... ready for consumption, starting process
with peeling the bananas and
ending with distributing sachets of
chips to stores worldwide.

In the following In the following step, the soaked Sử dụng để nối khi miêu tả
step,... bananas are put into a chipping các bước tiếp theo
machine where they are cut
crosswire evenly into thin slices

After being…,it... After being entered a drying lamp Dùng để miêu tả các hành
to dry, these banana slices would động lần lượt trong bài
be fried in hot oil in a large fryer process
until they turn crispy.

be followed by... This step is followed by a cooling Dùng để miêu tả các hành
process, and then by flavouring động lần lượt trong bài
process

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TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

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In many parts of the world, economic development has been of TỪ VỰNG


great importance in solving famine and raising living famine (n): nạn đói
standards. While some people believe that the economic
progress itself could eventually put an end to poverty and living standards: điều
hunger, others are more wary of the associated threats posed kiện sống
to the environment. This essay will discuss both sides of the
argument before a conclusion is drawn. put an end to
poverty: chấm dứt đói
On the one hand, it is true that economic development has a nghèo
crucial part to play in eliminating famine and poverty. A strong
economy, at its simplest, means a high employment rate for wary (adj): thận trọng,
the people, which provides them with a good income to feed đề phòng, cảnh giác
themselves and their families. In the long run, as the economy
thrives, living conditions can be improved, and people will no employment rate: tỷ
longer suffer from the lack of basic necessities. This can be lệ người lao động có
seen in the case of Viet Nam, an under-developed country in việc làm
Asia in the early 2000s. After joining the WTO in 2007, the
country’s economy was given a strong boost from trading goods economy thrives: nền
and services with many more developed countries, which lead kinh tế phát triển
to the people’s living standards being greatly raised and millions
of people escaping poverty and hunger successfully. basic necessities: đồ
Nevertheless, economic progress is probably not the solely way dùng thiết yếu
to fight poverty as there remain other alternatives such as
investing in the education system or encouraging poor people to under-developed
fight poverty themselves country: đất nước
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On the other hand, the side effects that an economy developing industrial wastes: rác
too rapidly has on the environment can be tremendous. As more thải công nghiệp
industries and factories are needed to produce goods, the
discharge of industrial wastes of various kinds would soar the degradation of
accordingly. This could result in the degradation of natural natural habitats: sự
habitats such as rivers, the seas and air. Another major threat suy tàn của môi trường
is over-exploitation of natural resources for industrial purposes, sống tự nhiên
which could lead to irreversible damage to the ecosystem
since some species may never recover and develop. Therefore, irreversible damage:
it is extremely necessary for the authority to impose stricter thương tổn không thể
laws regarding industrial activities in order to protect the sửa chữa, bù đắp
environment. Economic growth is undeniably important, but it
should not come at the expense of the environment. impose stricter laws:
ban hành những điều
My opinion is that there must be harmony between the luật nghiêm khắc hơn
environment and the proliferation of economic activities. Despite
the obvious benefits that a strong economy could bring about in
terms of solving the issue of poverty and raising people’s living
conditions, I do not believe that it can make up for the
environmental consequences mentioned above.

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TEST 7 - DAY 7

WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The pictures below show the differences in the layout of a conference centre
between its present and its future plan. Summarise the information by selecting
and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend 40 minutes on this task


Write about the following topic:

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via
the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or
negative development in your opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
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SAMPLE BAND 8.0+

TASK 1
The plans compare the present-day layout of a Conference TỪ VỰNG
Center with that in the future, following some proposed layout: tổng quan
changes.
functionality (n): công
Generally, most of the changes will take place in the centre and dụng
the right side of the map of the Center, while the western part
will remain mostly the same in functionality as well as layout. catering for: phục vụ
The new Center will feature several new facilities, including a
fitness center, a kitchen and a reference. separate block of
rooms running
The two meeting rooms at the upper left corner catering for the parallely to/alongside
main function of the Conference Center will remain the same the road: các phòng
both in terms of their functionality/purpose and room design. To tách biệt chạy dọc theo
the east of the meeting rooms , a toilet can be found in a con đường
separate block of rooms running parallely to/alongside the
road. This block of rooms remain unchanged in their exterior, exterior: bề mặt
but the toilet is the only room of the three that stays the same in
its function. adjoining: bên cạnh

The other two rooms in the chain of blocks, namely the current turned
reception and café (adjoining to the toilet ), are planned to be into/remodelled: biến
turned into/remodelled into a reference room and fitness thành
center respectively. The hall in the central area, which takes
up/occupies the most space, is expected to be halved in size to oval-shaped garden:
make room for an additional cafe and kitchen, which together vườn hình bầu dục

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would take up the other half of the current hall area. In the right-
hand area of the Center, the oval-shaped garden in the north reshape (v): thay đổi
will be expanded without changing inshape. On the other hand, hình dạng
the rounded car park below the garden will be reshaped into a
rectangular one, and instead of having only one entrance, it is rectangular (adj): hình
expected to have two separate enter and exit from the road. chữ nhật

Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm

Cấu trúc Câu trong bài: Sử dụng

compare the The plans compare the present- Sử dụng trong câu
present-day layout day layout Introduction của dạng Map,
mang nghĩa so sánh tổng
quan chung của 2 bản đồ/sơ
đồ

stays the same in The toilet is the only room of the Miêu tả sự không thay đổi
its function. three that stays the same in its trong chức năng sử dụng.
function.

…., namely... The other two rooms in the chain of Sử dụng để liệt kê chi tiết số
blocks, namely the current đại lượng được nêu ra trước
reception and café đó

It is expected to.. it is expected to have two Sử dụng khi miêu tả sự thay


separate enter and exit from the đổi của bản đồ/sơ đồ trong
road. tương lai.

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TASK 2

Mindmap
Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

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The vigorous growth of the Internet in the early 21st century has TỪ VỰNG
paved the way for the prevalence of online shopping, distant paved the way for:
working and online communication, all of which seem to have dọn đường/ tạo điều
rendered interpersonal interaction superfluous in many kiện
instances. Contrary to popular belief, this trend has done more distant working: làm
harm than good, as will be proven in this essay. việc từ xa

On the one hand, the rise of the Internet, together with its broad do more harm than
range/array of associated activities, has done wonders for good: có hại hơn là có
mankind. Those with an access to the Internet could save a lợi
great deal of time that would be otherwise dedicated to
commuting back and forth to physical stores or their done wonders for: có
workplace, which in turn brings about an unprecedented level tác dụng, ảnh hưởng
of comfort and convenience. This lower demand for tốt đến với điều gì đó
transportation subsequently helps with easing traffic congestion
(on the road). Better still, being in the comfort of their own home back and forth: đi tới
affords people the time it takes to make an informed purchasing đi lui
decision. These shoppers, equipped with a massive pool of
information readily available online, could stack up attributes of unprecedented (adj):
each alternative (against one another), before arriving at a chưa hề thấy, chưa hề
sound decision of what to buy. This is unlikely the case with in- xuất hiện, chưa từng
store shopping, where shoppers are often pressured into buying có
certain products against their will.
level of comfort and
Albeit the good intentions of the Internet, its wide coverage convenience: mức độ
comes with a variety of pitfalls in reality, presumably thoải mái và tiện nghi
overshadowing the said benefits. One of such shortcomings is

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the impairment of crucial social skills, which could be attributed pool of information:
to a severe lack of social interactions. The time many chronic rất nhiều thông tin
Internet users once spent on daily exchanges is taken away in
favour of online activities, which, if sustained, could lead to a pitfall (n): cạm bẫy
reluctance to communicate with others. Though it could be said
that this shortage in communication could be made up for with impairment: việc làm
the abundance of online communication tools and platforms, suy yếu, suy giảm đi
this is a questionable statement per se/in itself. Research has
indicated that eye contact and body gestures, factors inherent in chronic Internet
a physical encounter, have a critical part to play in forging a users: người dùng
close bond, without which we humans are more prone to feel a Internet trong khoảng
sense of isolation, and by association, depression. thời gian dài

In conclusion, after a thorough examination of both sides of the online


issue, it is safe to say that the benefits the Internet has to offer communication
would be outweighed by the potential dangers it poses to the tools: công cụ giao
netizens. tiếp trực tuyến

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