WRITE AN ESSAY

In many places, people’s lifestyle is

changing rapidly and this affects family
relationships. Do you think the advantages
of this development outweigh the
disadvantages?

intro + advantages
v + adv
change rapidly/quickly/ dramatically/
substantially
adj + noun
undergo/ witness/experience rapid changes
lifestyle/ ways of life/ aspects of life
How have human lifestyles changed?
(changes)
How do these changes affect family
relationship in a positive way?
- the proliferation of advanced tech
(devices/ gadgets)
facilitate communication among family
members – geographically seperated
connect fast + conveniently
 tighten the bond
- globalization – cultural exchange –
positive mindset
modern parents – opend-minded/
easygoing
chidren can speak their mind/ make
their own decision
 (career path)
 independence – maturity
 boost mutual understanding

essay 2’
disadvantages + conclusion
body 2
Nevertheless, main topic + drawbacks ->
family relationship
- 1. overuse of technological devices
(too immersed in one’s own phone
 neglect other family members
 (separate pp in a mental way
deter them from connecting with each other
mentally
erode/undermine/weaken family relationship
- 2. hectic shechule - work overtime = overwork ->
work-life imbalance
-> no quality time for family
(divorce – broken string)

- 3. the prevalence of fast food (convenience

-timesaving -> the disappearance of traditional
meals
 no family time – drift apart
choose 2 out of 3 = a 5 sentence para
Extra essay 2

INTRO + 1 BODY