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Description
Description is a static narrative-compositional form that supplies the details of the
appearance of people and things “populating” the book, of the place and time of
action.
Description is used to depict nature (landscape), premises (interior), appearance
(portrait), and urban scenery (townscape).
Landscapes, townscapes and descriptions of dwellings play a considerable role in the
interpretation of the subject matter.
Description
Description is used to depict nature (landscape), premises (interior), appearance
(portrait), and urban scenery (townscape).
Landscapes, townscapes and descriptions of dwellings play a considerable role in the
interpretation of the subject matter.
e.g. in the works of E.A. Poe, T. Hardy
Description
Portrayal of human appearances
Characters that are tall and thin are often associated with intellectual and aesthetic
types who are withdrawn and introspective (like Arthur Dimmesdale and Roger
Chillingsworth in the Scarlet Letter by N. Hawthorne).
Portly and fat characters suggest an opposite kind of personality, one characterized by
a degree of laziness, self-indulgence, and congeniality, as in the case of Ch.
Dickens’s Tony Weller
Argumentation
The author could appear on his own pages as a commentator and moralist, revealing
directly his own thoughts, ideas, attitude to his characters and other matters he
portrayed.
Such auctorial digressions may fall into:
(1) philosophical and publicist
(2) lyrical digressions
In argumentation of any kind, be it
philosophical (expressing author’s outlook),
publicist (denouncing social vices and evils of modern life)
or
lyrical digressions (revealing the author’s aesthetic feelings and emotions),
the writer interrupts the narrative to offer his comments, explanations or evaluations
of what he depicts at the moment.
Auctorial digressions
The main distinctive features of auctorial digressions of various kinds are:
(1) the tense-shift (the of the present tenses against the background of the Past tenses
of the narration);
(2) the shift from the third to the first person singular or plural;
(3) the shift from the Indicative Mood to the Imperative or Subjunctive Moods,
usually combined with direct addresses to the reader or the hero, or some other
prominent person, e.g.
Oh, Shakespeare! Had I thy pen!
O, Hogarth! Had I thy pencil!
Then would I draw the picture of the poor serving man …
(H. Fielding)
The character’s discourse
The character’s speech may be monological, dialogical, or take the form of a
polylogue.
This may be realized through the use of uttered speech (i.e. dialogue) or inner speech
(in the form of the so-called interior (inner) monologue and/or short in-sets of
interior speech).
Stream-of-consciousness technique
In this case the writer tries to present the most accurate almost exact portrayal and
reflection of the purely associative manner of human thinking, which may result in
completely incomprehensible passages.
e.g.: J. Joyce’s Ulysses (1922);
the novels by J. Conrad, H. James, E. Forster,
F.M. Ford, D. Lawrence, D. Richardson,
V. Woolf.
Dialogue
Dialogue in a work of prose is considered to be an essential method of indirect
characterization by showing (not telling), which has become predominant in modern
fiction.
All this is revealed in and through the personage’s idiolect, i.e. the language s/he
uses.
The author’s remarks
The character’s speech parties are usually introduced into the text by the author’s
remarks “containing indication of the personage (his name or the name-substitute)
and of the act of speaking (thinking) expressed by such verbs as to say, to think and
their numerous synonyms”.
Represented speech
Represented ((half-) reported) speech may be of two types – inner (imitating the
character’s thoughts and conveying feelings) and uttered (representing insertions of
the character’s fragments of speech).
There exist a number of terms used to describe various types of represented speech,
e.g.:
free indirect discourse / speech
free indirect style
represented speech and thought
narrated monologue
“coloured” discourse
… by which scholars understand a piece of (normally but not necessarily) third
person narrative with words, phrases, expressions which the reader associates with
the verbal habits of a particular character.
e.g.: J. Austen, V. Woolf
The essence of this type of narrative is in this peculiar blend of the viewpoints and
language spheres of both the author and the character.
Interior speech vs Represented inner speech
Represented inner speech is rendered in the third person singular and may have the
author’s qualitative words, while interior speech belongs to the personage
completely.
V.A. Kukharenko
Inner represented speech
- The well-known shrill voice startled Almayer from his dream of splendid future
into the unpleasant realities of the present hours. An unpleasant voice too. He
had heard it for many years and with every year he liked it less. No matter,
there would be an end to all this soon.
extract from
J. Conrad’s novel Almayer’s Folly
Telling vs Showing
Showing is indirect, dramatic type of characterization – through dialogue and action.
Telling is based on direct auctorial portrayal, evaluation and commentary.
P. Lubbock
The Craft of Fiction
1921