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Morgan Wills
CO300
13 December 2021
The American Psychological Association found in a 2015 survey that money is the
number one cause of stress for adults in the United States (Scott). If this is the biggest stressor in
most Americans' lives, then why aren’t we taught more about it? I am proposing that the House
Education Committee of Colorado should vote to pass a bill requiring high school students to
pass a financial literacy class in order to graduate. For instance, in the United States today, 61%
of citizens do not have enough money to cover a $1,000 emergency (Rose). On top of that, 41%
of Millenials stated that they spend more on coffee in a single year than had invested into savings
and retirement (Housman). These mind blowing statistics are only a few of hundreds that make
Financial literacy is the ability to comprehend and demonstrate financial skills such as
saving, budgeting, and investing. Topics such as these are the basis of financial knowledge and
should be known to everyone. One way to introduce these skills is by teaching them in school.
As of 2021, there are only 21 states that require students to take personal finance in high school,
whether that is a single class or a unit incorporated into another class (Silver). Students who are
simply introduced to financial skills are already more financially secure than those who are not.
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In this essay, I will examine the reasons why a financial literacy class is important for students to
participate in.
First of all, financial literacy largely impacts your physical, mental, and emotional
wellbeing whether that be positive or negative. It has been shown that there is a continuous cycle
of money and mental health problems that is hard to break. The Money and Mental Health Policy
Institute found that 46% of people who are struggling from debt have also been diagnosed with a
mental health issue and that 86% of these people share that their debt makes their mental health
problems worse (Data Show Strong Link). Included below is an infographic of the cycle of
The same data shows that people experiencing debt are three times more likely to contemplate
suicide. Another interesting study on assessing financial insecurity among common eye
conditions found that many demographics with eye diseases, such as glaucoma, reported being
financially insecure (Hom). Patients who examined their underlying health problems traced many
of them back to financial insecurity. With so many Americans stating that their number one stress
in life is money, we have seen that this stress can cause anxiety, depression, fatigue, diabetes,
heart disease, and many other problems. Simply learning about personal finance can help
Secondly, there is a large disparity in financial literacy rates among different racial and
ethnic communities. Black, Hispanic, and Native American populations tend to have lower rates
of financial literacy (Mollenkamp). Members of these communities use more money orders, bill
payment services, and check cashing - all of which are bound with financial insecurity
(Mollenkamp). Christian Sherill from Next Gen Personal Finance shares that there is a huge
equity problem within personal finance instruction. Every single kid deserves the opportunity to
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explore the financial world. Finances are a problem for most people and they impact everyone
differently, but they particularly hit various ethnic and racial communities harder. Native
Americans experience the highest level of financial insecurity and fragility in the United States
(Mollenkamp). Not only is this due to poor choices, but also a lack of knowledge. Financial
assets are typically intangible assets that have value such as bank deposits, stock equity, cash,
bonds, etc. One-third of African American and Latino populations have no financial assets at all
Sherraden and Benjamin E. Youngdahl, reported that the median net worth of whites vs. African
Americans is 11 to 1, largely due to differences in assets. Financial literacy rates also vary among
socioeconomic statuses. In a report done by Standard & Poor’s Global Financial Literacy Survey,
the team found that only 4% of kids who come from low-income families will break the cycle
and move into the upper-middle class (Li). It is said that the ability to accumulate assets can
decide whether families and individuals can leave poverty and become financially secure
(Breaking the Cycle). Closing the racial and socioeconomic wealth gap in America is an ongoing
problem and I believe that taking a step to fixing this problem starts in the classroom.
Financial literacy rates are seen varying between men and women, predominantly due to
a lack of confidence in themselves. In a study done by the TIAA Institute, women answered “I
don’t know” to more than 25% of questions on a financial literacy survey while men answered “I
don’t know” to less than 20% of questions (Buchwald). There is a negative stigma in society that
finances and money are a man’s job and women are seen as inferior when it comes to these skills.
This drives women away from something as important as personal finance. In another research
University, and the Dutch Central Bank, they found that women are more likely to answer “I
don’t know” if they are given the option, but are more likely to circle the correct answer if they
are not given that option (Buchwald). All of these surveys show that women aren’t scoring well
not entirely because they don’t know the subject, but because they would rather not be wrong.
This is just another reason for implementing financial literacy classes in schools. It opens a door
for women into the world of finance in hopes of attracting more into this career and for simply
instilling more confidence in women that they can handle their own financial situations.
There are a few reasons why more schools don’t provide financial literacy classes and that
is because there is a lack of funding as well as a lack of teachers. The COVID-19 pandemic
particularly has affected teacher shortages and many schools nationwide have had to shutdown
due to these shortages. So, how are we going to find money and staff to implement these
important classes? Many school districts have found partnerships with financial institutions to
bring personal finance education into schools (Zingg, et al.). For example, advisors at High Point
Financial Group voluntarily hold financial literacy seminars at high schools and colleges.
Introducing personal finance at a younger age could inspire students to someday want to teach
this subject as well. There are also many resources available for free educator training such as a
one week course from Champlain College and other materials from websites like Next Gen
Personal Finance and National Education Association. States have even gone as far as enacting
policies that require high-cost loan providers to help fund financial literacy education through
annual fees (Zingg, et al.). Addressing companies such as these can hugely shift the financial
literacy dynamic in the United States. In 2013, $17 billion was spent in the U.S. on marketing
financial services such as payday loans, while only $670 million was spent on financial education
re-evaluation of the federal and state budgets can help provide funding for financial literacy
A great deal of financial problems that we see as a country can be reduced if Americans
are introduced to financial literacy at a younger age. The number of financial decisions students
make are becoming more and more. Kids receive no financial education, yet they are expected to
make big financial decisions. One example of the positive outcomes financial literacy classes
bring is shown in the graph below. Three years after Texas, Georgia, and Idaho set a requirement
in place for a personal finance class in high schools, the states saw a rise in their credit scores
(Fox).
The U.S. is facing over $890 billion credit card debt and student loan debt in the U.S. alone is
$890 billion more than that (Hanson). As recorded above, without basic financial literacy skills,
people are financially insecure, live paycheck to paycheck, and face large amounts of stress. A
Rowe Prince Survey from 2017 found that 69% of parents are reluctant to discuss financial
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business with their children (T. Rowe). If parents aren’t willing to talk to their kids about money,
then who is? That is why I am asking you, as members of the House of Education Committee, to
take a great step forward in achieving financial security for generations to come by requiring the
Works Cited
Brown, Christopher and Robinson, Lisa. “Breaking the Cycle: From Poverty to Financial
https://www.policylink.org/sites/default/files/BreakingTheCycle_0.pdf
www.marketwatch.com/story/whats-behind-the-financial-literacy-gender-gap-these-acade
mics-both-male-and-female-found-one-answer-11620068977.
“The Case for High School Financial Literacy | High School Financial Literacy Report: Making
www.champlain.edu/centers-of-experience/center-for-financial-literacy/report-national-hi
gh-school-financial-literacy/the-case-for-high-school-financial-literacy.
Dr. Joanne Li, Dean, professor of finance at Florida International University College of Business.
www.cnbc.com/2021/05/02/op-ed-why-financial-literacy-needs-to-be-a-national-priority.
html.
Fox, Michelle. “To Combat Financial Illiteracy, Education Needs to Start Early in the Classroom,
www.cnbc.com/2021/04/05/state-of-personal-finance-education-in-the-us.html.
Hanson, Melanie. “Student Loan Debts vs Other Debts.” Education Data Initiative, 12 Oct.
2021, educationdata.org/student-loan-debt-vs-other-debts.
Hom, Grant. “Assessing Financial Insecurity among Common Eye Conditions: A 2016â 2017
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2bacc-5be6-44f6-8046-50fa119784fa.
Housman, Drew. “Millions of Millennials Spend More on Coffee (and Other Things) Than
www.thesimpledollar.com/save-money/millions-of-millennials-spend-more-on-coffee-an
d-other-things-than-retirement/.
Mollenkamp, Daniel T. “What Is the Racial Gap in Financial Literacy, and Why Does It Matter?”
www.investopedia.com/the-racial-gap-in-financial-literacy-5119258.
Rose, Samantha. “4 Scary Financial Facts: How to Avoid Becoming A Statistic.” OppLoans, 11
Scott, Elizabeth. “What Are the Main Causes of Stress?” Verywell Mind, 29 June 2020,
www.verywellmind.com/what-are-the-main-causes-of-stress-3145063.
Sherraden, Michael and Youngdahl, Benjamin E. “Assets and the Poor: Implications for
https://www.ssa.gov/history/reports/pcsss/Sherraden_Testimony.pdf
Silver, Caleb. “Studying Personal Finance May Become Legally Required.” Investopedia, 30
July 2021,
www.investopedia.com/the-push-to-make-financial-literacy-into-law-4628372.
“T. Rowe Price Insights - T. Rowe Price: Parents Are Likely To Pass Down Good And Bad
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www.troweprice.com/corporate/us/en/press/t--rowe-price--parents-are-likely-to-pass-dow
n-good-and-bad-fina0.html.
Zingg, Laura, et al. “Closing the Financial Literacy Gap.” Teach For America, 17 Apr. 2021,
www.teachforamerica.org/one-day/ideas-and-solutions/closing-the-financial-literacy-gap.
“Data Shows Strong Link Between Financial Wellness and Mental Health.” Enrich, 24 Mar.
2021,
www.enrich.org/blog/data-shows-strong-link-between-financial-wellness-and-mental-hea
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Self-Assessment
Process
What I did well: What I did well throughout my process was finding sources that are relevant in
timing and that will also impact my audience. I found a lot of resources, almost too many,
because it was hard to figure out what information to keep and cut. I felt as though I needed to
include all of it to help get my point across. It was also timely information that was up to date
What I could improve on: I could improve on keeping track of my resources since I had so many.
Sometimes I had information and left the citation blank because I accidentally got rid of the tab
Product
What went well: What went well was my ethos (credibility) because a lot of my information
came from good sources/journals. I also thought I added good emotion to it because of how
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many people this problem impacts. I believe that my audience was specific enough to make a
What I could improve: I think that I could improve my introduction and where my thesis goes. I
changed my entire introduction last minute because I heard during class that it should get straight
Purpose: Integrate Quality Sources, Use Compelling and Convincing Evidence - 46/50