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Task 1

After I considered myself, I am not eligible for that job vacancy qualification because I am
not a bachelor and doesn’t even have any experience in sales executive or similar position.
Although I have proficiency in both English and Indonesia also basic computer skills, I still
not eligible.

Task 2

Rut Nathasya Kustiyanti

Kapten Japa Street 92, Denpasar 85111

Mr. Feliks Diansyah

Aplika Plaza Ltd., A. Yani Street 25,

Sukamakmur 65126

Dear Mr. Feliks Diansyah,

I am writing to apply for the sales executive position advertised in Kompas, 15 September
2021. As requested,  I am enclosing a completed resume, curriculum vitae  and recent
scanned photograph  of mine.

The opportunity presented in this listing is very interesting. I believe that I have all of the
qualification needed for the job. I graduated from Universitas Indonesia, majoring
accountant. I can speak English and Indonesian fluently and I am very skilful in using
computer. My previous experience as a sales executive in a Kharisma company is suitable for
the position.

Please see my resume for additional information on my experience. I can be reached anytime
via email rnathasya9@gmail.com or 081234828772.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this
employment opportunity.

Sincerely yours,

Rut Nathasya Kustiyanti

 

Task 3

Reference: freeenglishcourse.info

Jakarta, January 21th 2020

(there is no applicant address)

(the address of the company)

Attention to: Human Resources

PT. Blue Ocean eTrade

Street Kemayoran No.77B

Jakarta

(salutation)

Dear Sir/Madam,

(opening paragraph)

I’ve read your job vacancy at Glints.com and I found your Company is looking for employees
for Graphic Designer position. I believe that position is fit with my speciality from my
education background as System Information. 

(middle paragraph/body)

My name is Akmal Hakim, and I’m 22 years old. I’m fresh graduated from System
Information Departemen Binus on November last year. My Specialization are grapich
designer (UI/UX) and product designer. I make sure I have qualification as your company
needs. I’ve good motivation, I can work together with the team, my communication really
good, and my english excellent both written and spoken.

I really confident can be able to contribute to the Company. Herewith I enclose my:

1. Copy of Bachelor Degree Certificate (S1)

2. Academic Transcript
3. Curriculum Vitae (CV)
4. Recent Photograph (size 4×6)

(there is no closing paragraph)

(thank you)

I hope I could be the part of your Company, and Thank you for your attention.

(signature)

Sincerely,

Akmal Hakim

Analyze:

 Text of the job vacancy above does not match with what I learned from school. At the
beginning there is no applicant address and the closing paragraph. Without closing paragraph,
the personnel department doesn’t know how to contact the applicant. Other than, what I have
mentioned everything is fine.

p.s. The bold word is to identify the structure