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Changes For The Sketch Drawing Style
Changes For The Sketch Drawing Style
I want to go quickly through a few things which we can improve on the drawing.
1. I like the changes made to the font size. Its perfect like this seeing the current orders!
2. Itseems like the drawing style changed a little bit which I don’t like. As you can see in the
following picture it feels like you are just trying to use a photoshop action. I think they need
to look more detailed.
As you can see there are many black parts. I think the drawing needs to be more like a line
art. Of course you can still black out some parts but most of the time just use lines.
The dog has some black parts which you can show of like this. This is perfect! Especially the
orders from this week do have a different style which does not fit well:
Today I received an email about an unsatisfied customer. It made me think that we need to
change something else as well. This will look way better for future orders. Let me explain first
hat problem she had with her drawing. Here you also used too much black on the left cat as
she describes it in the following text.
Here is what she exactly said in German:
Auf dem Schlüsselanhänger sind ihr Katzen die Vorlage näher zusammen, der Kragen der Katzen ist
besser dargestellt.
Auf der Kette ist viel Schattierung im linken Gesicht, sodass es nicht so einfach ist zu erkennen, ob es
eine Katze ist. Auch das zweite Gesicht ist meiner Meinung nach nicht richtig schattiert.
You already draw the right one a few weeks ago which looks AMAZING! Let me say it again,
AMAZINGGGG! This is exactly how we need to draw future orders. We need to make the gap
between the pets smaller like the right drawing.
This is one example where the pets are NOT together enough:
Solution: For future orders I want you to draw the neck part a little bit as well. For my old orders for
example, the neck was always drawn as well.
Please let us try it like this for future ones. If you do it like this you can also put 2 pets more closer.
Summary
1. The names are good like this! You made a good
improvement on this
2. Draw it more like a line art and don’t make it look like
an action on Photoshop
3. Draw the neck of the pets as well (If 2 pets need to be
drawn put them more closer)