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Application Assignment 1
Ryan McClain
Mansfield University
Application Assignment 1
Antila, H., Arola, R., Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L. (2017). Bullying
https://doi.org/10.1007/s00787-017-0946-6
Oulu University Hospital, in Oulu Finland (Helinä Hakko, Liisa Kantojärvi), and
Helsinki, Finland (Kaisa Riala). Antila Henna is a general practioner who cares
for people dealing with a medical emergency. Rikka Arola was interested in
with the Department of Psychiatry, Helina study’s adolescent psychiatry and how
o The research was conducted between April of 2001 and March 2006, with a
bullying in childhood and adolescence. At the time of the study, very little data
exhisted on the correlation. Most data involving PD development at the time held
regard to childhood abuse and neglect. This research cites 4 earlier studies
regarding childhood trauma and PD development (Tomko RL, Trull TJ, Wood
(2012) The course of anxiety disorders other than PTSD in patients with
(Baldry AC, Farrington DP (1999) Brief report: types of bullying among Italian
attitudes, family history, and birth risk factors in patients with borderline
Was this research pertinent only within the authors’ geographic locale, or did it
explain the sudden rise of Borderline Personality Disorder in young females. The
research did conclude that “being a victim of bullying during childhood and
females.” (Antila, H., Arola, R., Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi,
26(7), 779–789.) Same study states that “In our study, the vast majority of
females with PD had borderline PD.” (Antila, H., Arola, R., Hakko, H., Riala, K.,
On what prior observations was the research based? What was known and not
o As stated earlier, the data available to the researchers at the time mostly involved
childhood trauma. The study does discuss early data involving being a perpetrator
with bullying victimization with Borderline PD, but there were no studies
o Incredibly Important. There is still very little work done on personality disorders
even today due to heavy stigma surrounding PD’s, especially cluster B PD’s.
People with Cluster B are often seen as “abusive” and people who should be
avoided and any research done show’s that individuals with personality disorders
Introduction
Read the statement of purpose at the end of the introduction. What was the
objective of the study? Provide a direct quote and then paraphrase it to show your
understanding of it
disorder (PD) diagnosed in early adulthood.” (Antila, H., Arola, R., Hakko, H.,
Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L. (2017). Bullying involvement in relation
https://doi.org/10.1007/s00787-017-0946-6)
o The authors evaluated adolescent psych patients with a history of severe bullying
Consider the title. Does it precisely state the subject of the paper?
o Yes. The paper lists the independent variable (bullying), the dependent Variable
Check the sequence of statements in the introduction. Does all the information lead
coherently to the purpose of the study? Does it follow the “funnel” design (broad in
o Yes, the study is very coherent. The study does great in finding a sample size.
The study also does a good job in excluding members of the sample for having
under the age of 16). Eventually the study was left with just 57 participants out of
type (two biological parents, one biological parent, child welfare placement,
(yes/no) and mother or father unemployed (yes/no).” (Antila, H., Arola, R.,
Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L. (2017). Bullying
time of conduction, there wasn’t much gender specific data on the development
At the end of the introduction, you usually can find the author’s hypotheses. List at
least one but no more than three of them. You can directly quote them, but make
diagnosed in early adulthood (under the age of 30).” (Antila, H., Arola, R.,
Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L et al. p.780)
Method
Review all methods in relation to the objective(s) of the study. Are the
o Yes, the methods are valid. They gathered a sample size of 508
adolescents and followed the adolescents from April 2001 – March 2006.
Check the methods for essential information. Could the study be duplicated
o Yes, the study could be duplicated and repeated if the same data is secured
by another party
Check the methods for flaws. Is the sample selection adequate? Is the
o They started with 508 participants and ended with 57 participants, and I
think this sample size is rather low. That said, it’s hard to find people
They also accounted for external factors that may make the study invalid.
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Results
Examine the tables and figures. Does the title accurately describe the content? Are
they clear and easy to understand? Choose one and explain what it is telling you. If
o Tables are laid out in the study, and they do describe the content. Although the
tables could be made more clear to the average reader, they do accurately explain
the results of the study. Table 3 of the study found on page 786 (Antila, H.,
Arola, R., Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L et al. p.780) shows
that the chance of developing a PD nearly triples in girls who are bullied vs girls
Review the results as presented in the text while referring to the data in the tables
and diagrams. Does the text complement, and not simple repeat, data? Are there
discrepancies between the results in the text and those in the tables? If there are no
tables, simply discuss whether or not the results are presented clearly.
o The data does not repeat and the text is very clear as to what’s in the data
Refer back to the hypothesis or hypotheses you listed above. Were they supported?
o Partially yes, but not completely. The study did find that girls, especially those
with an anxiety disorder, were at most risk for developing a PD vs boys. The
study also found that bullying didn’t seem to increase PD risk in boys. So yes and
no.
o One question I would ask was sexism out of the equation? As a male who has
received a PD diagnosis (BPD/ AvPD), it took forever to get there. I kept getting
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free of bias
Discussion
Check the interpretation against the results. Does the discussion merely repeat the
results? Does the interpretation arise logically from the data or is it too far-fetched?
o The beginning of the discussion seems to repeat the results, however the
discussion then delves into how the study connects with other past studies. They
discuss their findings again, and then proceed to discuss a Finish follow-up study
that discusses increased risk of anxiety for boys who receive frequent bullying
Is the interpretation supported by other research cited in the study? In other words,
do they connect their results to those that they mentioned in their literature review?
o Yes, this study cites 51 other studies most of which are related to this study in
question.
Success of Research
Did the research reported in your article result in the formulation of new questions
o Yes. We now have an understanding that bullying seems to increase the risk of
formation of BPD into adulthood. Thus, the author’s hypothesized that anxiety,
o Yes, this research absolutely contributes to human knowledge. This provides new
data (besides the general childhood trauma) into the formation of personality
disorders into adulthood. Instead of stigmatizing all PD’s as resulting from child
abuse via a guardian, we now understand that bullying maybe a risk factor and
What are the social, political, technological, medical implications of this research?
o The social impact is that we now have more information in a field that to this day
BPD, NPD, ASPD, and HPD traits. Politically, this brings awareness to the
forefront of mental health issue and a possible reason to place “end bullying” as a
disorders, especially since 10% of those with BPD will complete suicide.
o This study’s strengths lie in its ability to question things that are left untouched.
Few people are willing to work in the field of PD’s, only the aftermath of those in
o The study involved a sample size of 508 participants, to which they excluded
participants based on outlying factors eventually narrowing the sample size down
o The discussion section is rather shaky. They repeat the data at least twice while
citing a couple of studies that have nothing to do with their own study.
Fortunately, as their saving grace, the studies they cite do connect with their
BPD.
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References
Antila, H., Arola, R., Hakko, H., Riala, K., Riipinen, P., & Kantojärvi, L. (2017). Bullying
Tomko RL, Trull TJ, Wood PK, Sher KJ (2014) Characteristics of borderline personality
Silverman MH, Frankenburg FR, Reich DB, Fitzmaurice G, Zanarini MC (2012) The
course of anxiety disorders other than PTSD in patients with borderline personality
disorder and Axis II comparison subjects: a 10-year follow-up study. J Pers Disord 26:804–814.
doi:10.1521/pedi.2012.26.5.804
Baldry AC, Farrington DP (1999) Brief report: types of bullying among Italian school children.
J Adolesc 22:423–426
traumatic life events, parental attitudes, family history, and birth risk factors in patients
with borderline personality disorder and healthy controls. Psychiatry Res 134:169–179