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Internet is a big problem that everyone is concerned about.

Some people argue that internet helps


we are mailing, contacting, banking and communication much faster. Although these issues have
some positives impacts, its negative influences are remarkable.

On the one hand, most people have some exposure to a wide variety of sources of internet, which is
some drawbacks in people's life. The development of internet lead to youngster usually plays a lot
computer games very late. Therefore, the young will be lazy to study and affect to physical health.
Moreover, there will be a lot of people taking advantage of the internet to deceive others. For
example, criminals have scammed money and taken other people's personal information.

On the other hand, besides the negative sides it can still have a few positives sides. Many people can
communicate with each other faster. For instance, we contact with each other by video calling on
messenger, zalo, telegram... Furthermore, we can transfer money without going to the bank so we
have a smartphone connecting with internet. We transfers money through a bank app in your phone.

In conclusion, the development of internet, which has brought about many changes to our daily life.
In my point of view, internet brings more advantages than disadvantages.

Dear, Mary

How are you? How are things? I hope you are well. I am glad to receive your letter. Today, I am
writing to respond you that I look forward to inviting you to travel with me next time.

I am very delighted to see the photos we took in Đà Lạt, it makes me remind reminds me of happy
times with you. On the way home I encountered a heavy rain, but after that I got home very safely.
Next month, I will invite you to travel in to Vietnam with me. That special place is Sam Son beach,
which is very mesmerizing and famous. Specifically at the end of this month, I want to go there with
you in my car, we will go for a walk and see the scenery together.

Do you want to travel with me? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Have a nice day.

Yours faithfully,

Lam

Task fulfilment: 6.75

Vocabulary and Grammar: 6.75

Coherence: 7

Grade: 7

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