(A) e205_emn080_0010

I know shots with all of the characters are tough, but I think there’s a few small
details we can work on here a bit further. Mainly, I feel like everyone is stopping
right at the same time. We can offset some characters to reduce this:
-Wendy and Omar could come a bit further from the back and take a couple more steps
before settling.
-Pryia, the focus of the action from the previous shot could take a couple more
steps adjusting her position and balancing her weight on her hips a little more,
mainly moving her screen right foot that’s a little stiff on the ground.
-Let’s try to give her a cleaner silhouette in her last pose, with a more puffed
chest, straight back and less bend in the knees. A bit like the drawing, keeping
her arms folded, of course.
-Priya should also eye dart around the wolves once or twice before setting her eyes
on Freddy and Batty too hook up with e205_emn080_0030.
-Two characters could blink to keep them alive.
-A couple more could do some eyedarts.
-Ivan could look up and down at Priya, moving his head slightly.
-We should also change the foot Ivan’s moving to break up the monotony with Winslow
and Wendy.

If you could prioritize this fix to have it ready for tomorrow’s delivery that
would be fantastic.

Thank you so much Gopal!!

(B) e205_emn080_0030

I was just thinking of getting rid of the second eyedart at frame F1129, to keep
her a little bit more focused.

Other than that you did a fantastic work on this one!!

If you could prioritize this fix to have it ready for tomorrow’s delivery that
would be fantastic.

Thank you!!