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I think that having a car depends very much on different situations but also could be a state of brags

between colleagues, friends or relatives.

If you have a car then you can travel in a lot of places where public transport doesn't exist. Also you can
travel on different hours, early or late doesn't matter.

With a car you can reach your destination quickly but not always. One more important factor is carrying
different heavy objects, animals or comfort for people.

But with these advantages also exist a lot of disadvantages, you need to pay taxes, car insurance, repair
the car, think about parking and pay attention on the road.

Here also we can add that we participate in traffic jams and from a time point of view we can arrive at
the same time like public transport, more or less.

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I think that having a car depends very much on different situations but also could be a state of brags
between colleagues, friends or relatives.

After:

I think that having a car depends very much on different situations but also could be a state of show-off
between colleagues, friends or relatives.

Before:

If you have a car then you can travel in a lot of places where public transport doesn't exist.

After:

If you have a car then you can travel to a lot of places there isn't public transport. (no subject)

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Also you can travel on different hours, early or late doesn't matter.

After:

Also you can travel on different hours doesn't matter early or late.

Before:

With a car you can reach your destination quickly but not always. (can’t end of the end)

After:

With a car you can reach your destination quickly through doesn’t happen all the time.(can be putted on
the end)
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One more important factor is carrying different heavy objects, animals or comfort for people.

After:

Some more important factor is carrying different heavy objects, animals and making people
comfortable.

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But with these advantages also exist a lot of disadvantages, you need to pay taxes, car insurance, repair
the car, think about parking and pay attention on the road.

After:

But with these advantages there are also a lot of disadvantages, you need to pay taxes, car insurance,
repair the car, think about parking and pay attention at the road.

Before:

Here also we can add that we participate in traffic jams and from a time point of view we can arrive at
the same time like public transport, more or less.

After:

Here we can also add that we are stuck in traffic jams and from the point of view of the time we can
arrive at the as time as public transport, more or less.

Like + noun (together)

Exemple: like a banker

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