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SBA 24/24 Model Script (P4 SBA 5**)

Question: You are the class teacher of a group of students. Some of the parents think that their

children should not spend time watching movies. You are going to meet them on parent’s day.

Introduce to them a film that you’ve recently watched and tell them what things their kids can

learn from the movie.

P4 說話 x SBA 之星 完整版 更詳細內容包括:

● Opening 公式化開首: Formulaic Opening
● Introduction 開首段口訣: QUEENS
● Content 四大內容精粹: 4 Pillars of Essence - 1. Character 主角 + 2. Desire 理想 + …
● Main Paragraph 防禦離題陷阱: SEAL 扣題 Formula (送上扣題罐頭句)
● Conclusion 高分結尾: Conclusion 首尾呼應 Formula

Good morning parents of class 6D, welcome to attend Formulaic* Opening 公式化開首
our school's parent's day. I'm your class teacher Mr (並無需要過分花巧)
Tsang. Thank you for taking time out of your busy
schedules to join us today. Before I start my sharing, I
would like to draw your attention by asking you a 可以用我哋皇牌 Intro 開首段口訣

question. What does watching movie mean to you? QUEENS* (其中的 Q 就係

Perhaps some of you may think that watching movies is Questions - 意思係問一個問題)

not beneficial to your children, or they shouldn't spend

Keyword + Background
too much time on it. But for me, watching movies is
背景資料和重點字眼 lol
often deemed (as) an excellent form of food of thoughts
to all walks of life, especially students nowadays.
Unsurprisingly, it also brings numerous benefits to
分享 Script Outline 簡單大綱, 更
children's lives, which is what I'm going to share with
加容易 manage audience
you. I sincerely hope that all of you can encourage your
expectations
children to incorporate watching movies as a pursuit for
intellectual excellence.

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First and foremost, movies allow students to extend Topic Sentence 主題句
their learning beyond textbooks. Sometimes it isn't an 雙重 Negative: is “not” + “less”

effortless task for students to fully realise how a

historical situation would have felt by reading textbooks
solely. Films can engage the senses of our brains by Elaboration 解釋

visual images, background music, and the emotions of

Add Examples / Support
acting, which can help students to immerse themselves
支持論點 (1)
in a specific era or historical event deeply. I want to cite
Green Book - the movie I watched to demonstrate this
四大內容精粹* (1): Character 主
point. The film captured the story of a prominent
角 [Four Pillars of Essence]
African-American pianist Dr Don Shirley, who was
about to begin his concert tour in Southern America
四大內容精粹* (2): Desire理想
during the period of racial segregation in 1962. He was
[Four Pillars of Essence]
eager to hire a driver and a butler to give him
protection. Shirley hired Tony Vallelonga, a
tough-talking bouncer from an Italian-American
community in the Bronx, New York. John Vallelonga is a
racist and a hard-nosed person, while Don Shirley is a
snobbish, polite, and mild-mannered concert pianist.
Despite their polarised differences, after a wave of 提及主角遇上 Difficulty (1) 遇上當
unfortunate events triggered by severe racism that they 初的難關
had encountered. The two men had successfully
developed an unforeseen bond while confronting
racism and danger in an era of segregation.

As the famous quote from Mahatma Gandhi says "An Quotes 引用名言 ㊙️ 但係我自己
eye for an eye makes the world blind." If people hated 覺得呢一句名言字面上意思不太

each other; everyone took revenge base on the idea of 清晰, 同學最好口語上解釋一下

racial supremacy, there would be no ethical diversity for (不要覺得老師是萬能, 咩都聽得

us to be proud of. In the movie, as Don and John 明)

started entering the South, they began to see the

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effects of segregation. In Louisville, Kentucky, Don must + this means: a person who
stay at a beat-up motel that was only for black people, has been injured by another
and he was scolded by the other black men there. He person returns the offending to

wanted to get some drinks at a local bar nearby. the originator in compensation

Misfortunes never come singly, and he got beaten up at

a local bar not long after. In North Carolina, a group of Difficulty (2) 遇上難關,

well-off white people forced Don to use a composting “Misfortunes never come singly”

toilet, despite enjoying his music-making. The South is 形容禍不單行, 非常適合喺 SBA
Script 使用
not as amenable as the North, and with segregation
comes higher tensions between the races.

It is miserable that an elite musician had to suffer unfair

treatments caused by segregation just because he is
coloured. Although racial segregation in the US was
ended in 1964, discrimination still exists in all the
civilisations. Take an example of our society, Hong
論據方面, 除咗引用以上 Gandhi
Kong. Hong Kong, which is one of the renowned
名言, 再加多一個 Example /
international cities in the world. Yet, the phenomenon of
Support支持論點 (2)
discrimination is still prevalent. In school campuses,
students with special needs are often excluded and
sneered at or even bullied by normal students; Trim Down! 呢度嘅例子其實可以
ethical minorities often face various unfair 更簡潔, 或者刪減少少, 令到文章
treatments such as getting teased when they are 結構更加嚴謹
wearing traditional clothing, and local people will
give them the cold shoulder based on skin colours.
These kinds of incorrect concepts should be abolished.
After watching Green Book, I learned that people
should put away all the prejudice of vulnerable
communities. This one again showcases that watching SEAL* 扣題 Formula! 可以用扣

movies can let us be more sympathetic and further 題罐頭句子, 免費筆記下方有, 完

enhance our awareness of the unfairness of personal 整版課程當然有海量句式 🌊

rights. Likewise, as students have received a train of

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knowledge from textbooks, watching movies allows

them to extend their learning outside textbooks by
acting, sounds, scripts etc. Students can understand a
specific era or event more comprehensively and thus
consolidate what they've learnt from textbooks.

Do you know that watching movies can also help us

Topic Sentence 主題句
process difficult life lessons? Watching movies provides
(Elaboration 解釋) 本人覺得可以
students with a golden opportunity to recognise
寫多少少解釋, 例如係: the
themselves in a character or some part of a film's
audience tend to look for
narrative in order to undergo change. Let's take a closer
characters that they can easily
look at Green Book to substantiate this point.
resonate with / associate
themselves with
In the movie, it harnessed the wavy shortcomings of
Add Examples / Support
human emotions, and successfully depicted a
支持論點 (2)
conversation between feelings and thoughts. This fills
the whole picture with richer emotions, making the story
more relatable. I could feel as if Don was really painting
his story next to me and vividly see how John reacted
to his story. If we dive deeper into the movie, we can
actually find many examples where conversations Quoting Conversations
between characters shine through. As Don said, "So if 直接引用話語
I'm not black enough, and if I'm not white enough, and if
I'm not man enough, then tell me Tony, what am I?!."
The sentence patterns used in this quote make the
scene more dramatic. This quote illustrates how Don
wanted to confess to Tony the ways that he felt
marginalised in the world, and it marked a unique
moment of vulnerability for him.

Discussion 討論 + 反思

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These various scenarios helped me build a deeper

connection to the movie and its characters because SEAL* 扣題 Formula! 可以用扣
we are all naturally drawn to what the characters say 題罐頭句子, 免費筆記下方有, 完

and think. As a teacher, I believe that movies bring 整版課程當然有海量句式 🌊

more good than harm to students' lives. Students can
find alternative role models to identify with, and observe
characters' behaviours as they tackle challenges similar Quoting Conversations
直接引用話
to their own through watching movies. For example,
when Don and John were detained in jail, Don said this
to John. " You never win with violence. You only win
when you maintain your dignity.” This quote sends a
positive message to students that the key to moving
SEAL* 扣題 Formula! 可以用扣題
forward and thriving is by keeping cool and not
罐頭句子, 免費筆記下方有, 完整
succumbing to violence or unbridled anger. It can
educate students on how to deal with multiple
版課程當然有海量句式 🌊
difficulties when they step into the society and thus
prove that watching movies can hone student's ability to
overcome adversity.
Reiterate points 重申論點

Watching movies is vital because students not only can Positive Wish 盼望, 帶出正面訊
deepen what they have learnt from textbooks but also 息, 同事如果想額外攞分可以做埋
help them to equip adequate abilities to overcome 首尾呼應 ❤️
obstacles in the future. Now, I believe all of you should
be familiar with the benefits of watching movies inside
out-so what are you waiting for? Why don't you Conclusion 公式: Taking Action
encourage your children to embrace movies more 立即行動 + Recommendation 推
often? Your children's next favourite character is 介
awaiting them to befriend him/her. Your children's
journey starts today. Thank you, and have a good day.

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組織公式 A must-have formula for good SBA scripts

1. 開首 Introduction : arouse readers’ interests 引起讀者注意 + outline 文章會講咩

2. 正文 Main Paragraph 1 : Topic Sentence 主題句 + Elaboration 解釋 + Examples / Evidence

引用書中例子 (用一件主要 + 重點既事 + Mini Summary (扣題)

3. 正文 Main Paragraph 2 : Topic Sentence 主題句 + Elaboration 解釋 + Examples / Evidence

引用書中例子 (用一件主要 + 重點既事 + Mini Summary (扣題)

4 Conclusion 總結 : restate stance / arguments 重申論點 + positive wish正面信息

Unfortunate Things 不幸的事

● A series / train / wave (一連串的) of + tragic / unfortunate / ill-fated (不幸運) events OR

misfortunes / mishaps (不幸).

● Misfortunes never come singly (禍不單行)

● It never rains but it pours (禍不單行)

● Bad things come in threes (壞事三件上)

Fortunate Things 好幸的事

● A series / array / set / chain (一連串的) of delightful (快樂的) / fortunate / auspicious (幸

運的) / providential (幸運的) events.

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● Good things come in pairs (好事成雙)

● Good luck comes hand in hand (好事成雙)

Mini Summary 扣題句式

● XXX from the book confirms / reinforces (重申) the fact that

● XX from the book echoes (回應) with / is in line with / perfectly matches / is inextricably

linked to our original topic.

● XXX is a lesson we should all take from the book.

● XXX is the key to / the secret of / the recipe for / the formula for … (e.g. 記住要用

gerund 👉 understanding why reading is prioritized over other learning activities)

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Book Recommendations - Bon Lam 友好推薦 (鍾意睇 Non-Fiction)

The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho (Fiction) Deep work by Cal Newport

(Non Fiction)
As an allegorical novel, The Alchemist follows
a young Andalusian shepherd in his journey This book is an indispensable guide to
to the pyramids of Egypt, after having a anyone seeking focused success in a
recurring dream of finding a treasure there. distracted world. If you master the skill of
staying focused,you'll achieve extraordinary
results.

The Monk Who Sold His Ferrari

Atomic habits by James Clear
(Fiction)
(Non Fiction)
A Fable About Fulfilling Your Dreams and
This book reveals practical strategies that will
Reaching Your Destiny by motivational
teach you exactly
speaker and author Robin Sharma is an
how to form good habits, break bad ones,
inspiring tale that provides a step-by-step
and master the tiny behaviors
approach to living with greater courage,
that lead to remarkable results.
balance, abundance and joy.

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Marquis 的友好推薦 (鍾意睇 Fiction / 二戰有關)

Going Solo by Roald Dahl (Fiction)
It is a continuation of Roald Dahl's
autobiography describing his childhood, and
detailed his travel to Africa and exploits as a
World War II pilot.
And then there were none by Agatha
Christie (Fiction)
This crime novel follows 10 strangers who
receive an unusual invitation to a solitary
mansion based remotely off Britain's Devon
Coast.

The Giver by Lois Lowry (Fiction)

The story is set in a society which at first appears to be utopian but is revealed to be ／
dystopian as the story progresses. It's about Sameness, a plan that has eradicated emotional
depth from people's lives.

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