Unit 6: Cause-and-Effect Essays Page 146

Writing Task Peer Editing a First Draft

Date: 03/07/2022
Writer: Phạm Minh Ngọc
Peer Editor: Phạm Thị Nhung
Title: Cause-efect

1. What is your favorite part of the essay?

“People will change in many different ways, especially in personality.”

2. What effect does the writer introduce in the background information?

The writer does not about introduce the effect.

3. What causes does the writer present in the thesis statement?

4. How does the writer explain the causes in the body paragraphs?

“Firstly, about your family and parent. You grow up in your family and have to affect by the rearing,

personality, and behavior of your parent.”

“Moreover, coworker pressure makes you have to alter yourself.”

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5. What parts of the essay could be supported with more details?

The introduction should give reasons for the results.

6. Write down any information from the essay that does not support the writer’s thesis.

“In this society always exists many struggles. Your jobs affect fashioning your character; in dealing with

coworkers and boss.”

7. Why is this topic important to the writer? How do you know?

“Personality transforms over time because of the influence of parents, peers, coworkers, and other

variables.”

The author has explained parental and social influences in the body paragraph.

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