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CRUSH
YOUR
COLLEGE
APPLICATION
to the top U.S. universities
Your application And how do you do that?
has been accepted. One of the ways to get accepted is to demonstrate your
ability to impact others outside of the classroom.
Imagine this. You’re opening a letter from your dream By the end of this e-book, you’re going to be equipped
college. Think of the anticipation, the anxiety, the with the tools to build and exemplify your excellent
excitement. Now imagine it says, “Congratulations. You’re extracurricular and leadership skills, make your
in.” application stand out, and make your extracurricular
profile pop!
This isn’t an unrealistic goal for you. Yes, getting accepted
into top universities is becoming more competitive
and more difficult every year. But, there is a surefire way
of getting the attention of admissions
officers.
And guess what? It isn’t your grades alone. You could get
a perfect SAT score and excellent grades and it won’t be a
guarantee that you will be accepted to a top university.
43,330
Stanford’s applicants (69%) with SATs of 2400 – the
highest possible score at the time – were not offered a
place.
applicants,
with...
Read that again. If you had a perfect – not good, not
great, but perfect – test score, more often than not, it
was not enough to get you into Stanford. But if you’re
academically the best, surely you should be able to
attend the best academic institutions, right? Well, no.
1950
students
accepted =
The number of applications to the eight Ivy League
Harvard 4.5%
universities almost doubled in the past decade. In fact,
in 1999–2000, Ivy League schools received 121,948
applications – and they rejected 80% of them. More Admissions admission
recently, the Ivy League class of 2023 had 311,948
applicants, and just 21,168 were accepted. That’s an Statistics - rate
acceptance rate of a 6.72%. Class of 2023
The nation’s best schools have the luxury of hand selecting the
world’s best students. They can decide between a first-chair cellist
with a 1550 SAT, and a state basketball player with a 1450 SAT, both
of whom were school captains.
“In fact, these schools’ selection lists are so long, they rarely have
How this
eBook was
under-qualified applications. It is typical for every applicant to be a
strong student. Everyone who applies has strong academics.
But there is light at the end of the tunnel. You just need to know built
how to shine in the cluttered application environment and know
what admissions officers are looking for in each application.
Drawing knowledge from our experienced team here at
Crimson (from former admissions officers to this cycle’s most
Whether you dream of living and learning near New York City or
successful applicants), we’ve built this guide to share our
being a part of a sports team in sunny California, your dreams are
insights to help you create a competitive application to your
achievable. Make your application stand out to admissions officers
dream school!
by improving both your academics and extracurriculars under the
guidance of a personalized Crimson team!”
The Crimson team has helped students to broaden their
horizons and open their minds to schools they never thought
were possible - all because they were given the tools and
expert advice key to building the perfect application for you.
The stuff you really need to know:
Throughout this eBook, you will see a lot of references to the Ivy
• A perfect SAT score doesn’t mean you’ll get into your dream school.
League schools; however, the information contained in this
eBook is not specific to these schools. These universities are
• A growing number of applicants and a stagnant number of seats
used as benchmarks – they have the highest number of
available at top universities means the competition for admissions is
getting tougher. applications and traditionally low acceptance rates.
• Achieving your dreams is not only your priority, but ours as well.
We will teach you what you need to know in order to make your
application stand out from the other thousands submitted.
What the top
In short a well-lopsided student is one who:
universities are
• Can do everything expected of them in the classroom and on
campus (horizontal)
looking for • Has an in-depth passion or skill that goes far deeper than their
peers (vertical)
Step one:
Context and Theory Essentially, these are students who possess a combination
of intelligence, creativity, empathy, and initiative, while
illustrating authentic, passionate interest in an area special
Well-lopsided vs. well-rounded candidate: which do universities
to their personality.
prefer?
Quality over quantity With that in mind, here are our recommendations:
Want to know how most people sabotage their applications? You should aim for 2–3 main activities.
By thinking well-lopsided means throwing in a bunch of
extracurriculars on their application, saying leadership a few times, These activities should all have a cohesive theme – an underlying
and bang! Application done, right? Nope. current that exemplifies you. For example:
They want to see that you can work in a group and solve a
community’s problems.
These innovations demonstrate your ability to make positive • Target two or three main activities
change within an existing organization or community -
otherwise known as intrapreneurship! • Have a cohesive theme throughtout your extracurriculars.
So, a student should think about what really excites them, and
should build this passion into something truly substantial that The three safest extracurriculars for
makes a difference in the larger community. any college application
• Go through the list and identify So, your extracurriculars can include:
everything that could be used to
enhance others’ lives.
This extracurricular shows that you give up your time to help the
community or people in need. It shows admissions officers you
proactively care and want to make changes in the world.
passionate about their field. You need to show that your field isn’t
just for the money or prestige; you’re going for it because without The longer you participate, the more you contribute and your
that degree, you couldn’t be you. Examples: progress will strengthen your application. Working in community
service reinforces what you’ve already learned and develops
valuable college-level skills, such as critical thinking and problem
Journalism: Applied solving.
Work for or Mathematics:
start the Become a A simple search on Google regarding your interests is the easiest
school Mathlete way to get started. Examples:
newspaper
Computer Medicine:
Science: Volunteer at Animal Shelters – Schools – Hospitals –
Build an app a hospital Love animals Working with children To study medicine,
and considering and teenagers, and enjoy fast paced
a career in animal enjoying creativity and work
care teaching
This extracurricular should either:
Examples:
Or, it can completely divert from the narrative in your other
activities to give a better picture of you as a whole. For example,
You’re a maths whiz, but you also dance competi-
you create YouTube videos in your spare time (which you also tively in a different cultural scenario to your own.
use as a platform to promote your community activity).
Here is an example of one student’s extracurricular activities that Are you worried about your extracurriculars and whether they’re
they put on an application. telling your personal story?
Here are the key qualities that make extracurriculars effective. They
Community Activity – I speak English as can be any hobby or activity as long as they show these qualities.
a second language and tutor others in
English to improve their confidence and their
ability to find opportunities in the English Quality Shows
speaking world.
Practicing a hobby or activity for Commitment, passion
several years
Career / Personal Activity – Built a Taking the initiative, getting Leadership, gets results
prototype mobile app (because I want things done
to study computer science). This app
connects people to ‘on-call’ psychologists Increasing your responsibility, Work ethic, passion, initiative
(I want to improve the community’s mental expanding your role
health, which affects my close personal friends).
Mentoring other people Positivity, you have peer respect,
you can foster relationships
This candidate has shown:
Making something from scratch Entrepreneurial spirit, self-starter,
• Passion for using their talent to improve community’s mental health
leadership
• Initiative in tutoring others in English
• Empathy for those who suffer from mental illness
your extracurriculars What actually gets you off the couch? Are
you an aspiring actor? Then get out there
Start with people you already know and chat to them about
wanting to push your personal brand more. Then try striking
up conversations with people at school or work whom you
don’t normally talk to, and nurture those fledgling contacts. It is
important to extend this to your teachers and your school principal.
They can provide valuable recommendations.
Remember:
So, you really enjoy writing and joined the school • Position description = 50 characters maximum
newspaper? You wrote two articles a week, which
your parents very much enjoyed. Why should an • Activity description = 150 characters maximum
admissions officer care?
• Honours title = 100 characters maximum
The Stuff You Really Need To Know
For example:
• Numbers are everything. Data demonstrates success. Include
Activity type: (Choose relevant drop down)
positive statistics in your application wherever possible.
General tips
• Emphasise numbers Now you have a feel for what universities are looking for and
• Abbreviate, use symbols how to represent them in your common application.
• Small phrases
• Do NOT lie To get an idea about what it takes to succeed and be offered a
• Re-read, preview, continuously edit spot at one of the colleges, below are a few case studies from
• Link it back to your personal narrative and brand some our successful students.
• Use words that demonstrate your personal brand
You can gain insight from their journey and apply the pieces
of their information to your own application. Remember,
there is no formula! What worked for them is an individual
and unique experience to them.
Case Studies Summary
Check out three recent examples of our students and their
extracurricular engagement, using their passions to make
Even after all this, don’t I still need
an impact and gain entry into the the world’s top universities: to be a genius? The conclusion
Elaine to University of Chicago; Dafi to University of California
- Berkeley; and Tien to Haverford College with a full No.
scholarship!
Some schools are always looking for elite academics, but there
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BA in History and African American Studies from
Princeton University and a Masters in Education
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