2 4.

5 6.5

5 4.5

2.5 6

3.5 5.5

0.5 4.5

5 -

4 6
1.5 5

3.5 6

32.5 48.5

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Contextual demand to the demand of the question was good. But
• wrt 1, 11 content for part of the answer was missing. Contextual
demand means addressing demand of the question in its entirety. Kindly
answer all parts of answers.

Content competence is good

• But wrt Q9 6 1316, there was scope for content enrichment

Language competence is good but

• At few places word “And” was not written legibly.

Structure and presentation

• Avoid using arrows like in between sentences and articulate instead
with words and present them in sentences. For eg in 19.
• Use proper heading 10.

Introduction and conclusion was good.

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All in all, it was a good attempt and you have good potential to score
good marks…
Try to complete the paper. And wrt Q9 6 13 16 and 17 where there is
scope to score marks don’t miss out on it. Make sure topics as such and
marks therefore are in your basket..
So Revise, Revise, Practice.
All the best..
 fair intro

valid points
Briefly write
about
contribution
towards literature

include appropriate conclusion

 Valid intro

good points
Express
clearly

Fair
conclusion
fair intro

Can be
clubbed
instead
can
include
CDM
would be
launched
whenever
deemed fit
under the
leadership
of Gandhi

Fair
conclusion
fair intro

can write
about wars
with
Anglo-Amer
ican and
impact on
DEMOCRA
TISATION..
 China

Can be Write legibly

clubbed
EASTWARD fair intro
moving
weather event

write about
characteristic
s of MJO

weakenin
g of
trade
winds

instead write instead

region of write
impact indian region of
and pacific impact
ocean pacific
ocean only

impact -ve
impact
+ve and -ve
Valid points

Fair
conclusion
 fair intro

can include
sudden
movements =
volcanism,
earthquakes

Highlight briefly the

various landforms
formed due to it.

include appropriate
conclusion
 fair intro

instead focus
on Himalayas

tropical
westerly jet
and its
bifurcation
by Himalaya
and its
impact etc...
 Valid
points

Elaborate

Fair conclusion
 fair intro

can write
Parts of
about
same
regulatory
argument
role of
can be
states in
clubbed
preserving
their self
interests +
aggressive
takeovers
pf domestic
firms etc..
instead write
about need
for
self-reliance
and
globalisation
etc..
 fair intro

can
write legibly include
"and" challenge
s in
access to
public
service
like
Police
content needs during
enrichment registratio
n of
complaint
s; Health
services
in
hospital...

include appropriate conclusion

 fair intro

use
proper
heading

mention
socio-econ
omic
impacts:
eg. due to
considerati
on of
menstruati
ons as
pollution
there is
inadequate
availability
of sanitary
methods
and use of
unsafe
sanitary
methods
esp in
rural india
with
consequent
impact on
health and
other
 good
point

through ads

Fair
conclusion
fair intro

briefly
write
about
origin
they are dramas

give
example
can write
about
VACHANAs
etc..

Satisfactor
y
conclusion
fair intro

instead write
about
decline of
trade and
contribution
in art and
architecture
etc...
Valid points
give
example
Sarojini
Naidu

give
example
of
harijan
yatra
avoid
repetitio
n
can write
about his
contribution in
religion =
popularized
sarva
dharma
sambhava,
sarvodaya,
panchayati raj
etc..

Valid conclusion
 fair intro

Valid points
can write
about Hindu
revivalism,
Aligarh
movement,
Simla
deputation,
secular claim
by congress
meant there
is no scope
for
congress-Lea
gue
accomodation
etc..

can be
clubbed
Fair
conclusion
fair intro

can include:
Availability
of
infrastructur
e,
Market,
favourable
government
policies,
etc..
can be
clubbed

can include
demands of
Sustainable
mining,
US-China
trade war,
etc..
 elaborate

can include
Modified
Special
Incentive
Package
Scheme
(M-SIPS) etc..

Fair conclusion
Valid intro
can include =
Decomposition
and
humification
etc..

include
appropria
te
conclusio
n
 it is
can introduce lightnin
about the g
pre-monsoon
season .

Explain the process of formation of

thunderstorms.

Mention the impact of

pre-monsoonal rainfall on different
parts of India.

include appropriate conclusion

 fair intro

Valid points
highlight
reasons for
need to
shift =
Future
proof,
climate
friendly
than coal
etc..
Fair
conclusion
fair intro
 can include
impact on
dilution of
Caste &
can be universal
part of Language of
1 English and
also counter
tendencies
of
Caste &
communal
mobilization
and linguistic
nationalism
etc..
can write about
AYUSH etc..

Fair conclusion
 fair intro

elaborate

can add
Population
increase etc..

elaborate
 expres
elabroate s
clearly
can include =
need to tap
resources
besides tax,
transit oriented
development
etc..

fair
conclusion