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3.

5
4.5
5
5.5
7

25.5
Contextual demand to the demand of the question is good. But
• But limit content to the demand of the question and stick to the
keyword. In Q3 4, content included few dimensions which were not in
contextual demand. No extra marks are awarded for this. Kindly only
provide points demanded by the question.

Content competence is good but


• Don’t just highlight points also establish these points with supporting
details, build on sentences to contextualize the point to bring it to the
significance of the demand of the question. This was broadly seen in
all questions.

Language competence was good


• Points can be expressed clearly and, in few places, where relevant
points are mentioned, points could have been articulated better
• Also at few places words were not written legibly.
• Also write completing sentences to contextualise points this with
question

Structure and presentation was good but


• write complete heading and proper heading

Introduction and Conclusion was good and no major issues were


found
• Also Conclusion’s wayforward should follow premise of the question.
That is wrt Q3. Since the question asks Why did India decide not to
join and its impact, conclusion instead of suggesting joining newer
FTAs should instead suggest way forward to address challenges in
FTA and prevailing realities of external trade to create fairer FTA to
all.

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All in all it was a good attempt.
You have good potential to score good marks.
Revise, Practice, Improve. Repeat.

ALL THE BEST...


Elaborate

write legibly

Elaborate
write legibly

Express
clearly
on what
resources
are available

Substantiate
can also
write about
security
issues like
maoist,
terrorism
etc..

Support
your views
with
explanations

Elaborate

mention its
impact
write about rules of
origin and its impact
Support
contextualise your views
these points for with
india not explanation
joining RCEP s
or singnificane
of RCEP

Parts of
same
argument
can be
clubbed
instead write
about growing
protectionism
or decline of
influence of
multilateral
institutions

not in the demand of


the question and can
be omitted and
anything extra can be
included in conclusion

instead
conclude on
need to
address above
issues to create
fair FTA
write
complete
heading

natural gas pipeline

Natural Highlight its


Gas significance

Express
clearly

Highlight its
significance

focus on significance for india


Can be clubbed

Highlight its
significance
Highlight
its
significance
in
developme
nt of
relationship

good point
Express
clearly

not in the
demand
of the
question
and can
be
omitted
and
anything
extra can
be
included
in
conclusion
council did not
authorize the
United States
or any other
country to use
military force
against
Afghanistan
good point
briefly Elaborate

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