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Contextual demand to the demand of the question was good. But wrt Q7
context was partly not in context. Also, wrt Q15 answer was not in context
demanded. Kindly work on that.

Content competence is good but

• Avoid writing points in generalized way and instead establish points with
supporting details. For eg. In Q6 and Q9
• Also use space provided to best possible way and make your points
descriptive esp in 15m question. For eg in Q16, Q20 and few others.
• Also try to incorporate key issues or points that has more significance in
main content For eg. in Q12

Language is comprehendible.

Structure and presentation are good and reader can follow easily. But use
proper and complete heading.

Introduction is good.
• But keep intro simple for eg in Q4 and few others, also ignore any
unnecessary descriptions in intro as in Q7 and Q19 and keep introduction
short.

Conclusion is good. Make sure way forward is part of conclusion and not a
separate section before as in Q1, Q2, Q4 and few others.

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You have good potential to improve your marks.
All the best.
 Satisfactory
introduction

instead focus
on challenges
in access to
long term capital
and asset liability
mismatch in Banks

Briefly highlight
the functions of
NaBFID

can be part of
previous para

can include
1. resource raising
costlier
2. challenges in
maintaining
the cost
advantage
etc..
Satisfactory
intro

can include
value addition
increases
export
earnings
etc

instead can
focus on less
no of operational
MFPs than
sanctioned

instead include
does not to
promote
smaller or
individual
units etc..

instead of
issues in
general to
FPI need to
focus on issues
specific to
MFPs
Good conclusion
 can introduce
on need to
simplify and
modernise
labour
regulation.

Instead of
generic points
highlight
specific points
=
Reduce
compliance
burden,
provisions for
recognition of maximum limit at
unions etc... eight hours per
day

this can be mentioned as

part of importance

include way
forward as part
of conclusion
Fair conclusion
Satisfactory intro

include
heading:
PDS as an
antipoverty
measure:
Also include its
impact on
MPCE and
containing the
tendency of
price rise

can include
MDM scheme
and
Fortification

not in the
demand of
the
question
and can be
omitted

either write
way forward
or conclusion
good conclusion
fair intro

same point

Avoid writing Enrich content with

points in multiple dimensions
generalized = Essential
way and commodity act,
instead Issues in TPDS, etc..
establish
these points
with
supporting
details. Eg.
Red tapism
= APMCs do
can be part of red tapism
not allow the
traders to
buy from the
farmers
outside the
specified Excessive state
market intervention
yards.
Etc..
Conclusion
should
suggest need
for deregulation
and
liberalisation
 Ignore any
unnecessary
facts in intro

Instead
Define climate
resilient
agriculture

Write about how

Climate change
impacts
agriculture. Eg,
Increased
gamble in
monsoon etc..

Write about micro

irrigation

kindly
provide
relevant
points.
Eg,
Agro-Ad
visories,
Insuranc
e, etc..
Satisfactory conclusion
use proper heading

good point
write compete
sentence

instead can
avoid include key
repetition points:
inadequate
coordination in
hydel power,
flood control
navigation , low
draft etc...

way
forward
can be part
of
conclusion
Satisfactory intro

parts of
same
argument
can be
clubbed

Support your
views with
details. Eg.
Lack of
awareness
about health,
nutrition and
farm
management include key points =
etc.. strengthen
infrastructure for
production of quality
milk including cold
chain infrastructure,
etc..
Good
conclusion
Good intro

mention
reasons
why

Instead write
about
Legislative,
administrative
barriers

instead write
= when
women has
joint
ownership

Already
33%
reservation
provided
 express clearly

Good conclusion
fair intro

instead highlight
issues with
annual budget
cycles =
Overestimation
of income, and
under estimation
of expenditure,
Populism and
lack of Fiscal
Discipline, etc..

use proper
heading

can include:
Better resource
mobilization,
Efficient resource
allocation,
Long term policy
targeted,
etc..
Stick to
the
demand
of the
question
and
anything
extra can
be part of
conclusion

guillotine signifies
need to need to shift focus
conclude from
on viability mirco details in
of MTPF annual cycles
towards need to
focus on long term
vision in MTPF
Though valid
include key
points
Nature of
economic
growth = good point
Trickle-Down
Growth &
Service led;
Technological
change driving
up the skill
premium, Elaborate
Privatization
favoring
existing Social
Structure,
Crony
Capitalism etc..
Bring points
from
diverse
themes &
can include
progressive
taxation
etc..

Good
conclusion
parts of
same
argument
can be
clubbed
can include
Public
Procurement
Policy etc..

can include
Marketing
Assistance,
instead Outdated
focus on technology and
challenges innovation etc..
in access to
credit to
MSMEs

can instead
write about
need to
bring more
more
enterprises
into ambit of
Good conclusion
MSMEs to
get benefits
availed by
them
 Satisfactory intro

can include
competition

avoid repetition

can include
Corporate
parts of same governance
argument can issues and
be clubbed Systemic risk
etc..
Good
conclusion
Ignore any
unnecessary
facts or
descriptions
in intro

provide
relavent
definition =
key financial
markets and describe how it will
financial help in financial
institutional stability
system is
resistant to
economic
shocks

use proper heading

describe how Fiscal

policy can further
facilitate the financial
stability
eg. Facilitate = pro
cyclical and counter
cyclical policy, fbrma
etc..
undermine financial
stability =
demonetization,
excessive tax
concession etc..
fair conclusion
 Fair intro

Ignore any
descriptions
not
demanded
by the
question

can include
give example Unlimited
procurement and
its impact on
mention its impact buffer stock and
subsidy bill

express clearly
elaborate

elaborate can include key

points = Ceiling for
procurement for
each State, Private
Companies in
Procurement etc..

Satisfactory
conclusion
 Fair intro

write complete
heading

good points
can be clubbed

highlight some
initiatives
taken by the
government

Fair
conclusion
Satisfactory
intro

Briefly highlight
issues in
Present system

can include
information
sharing and
conversations
, exploring
the potential
mutual
benefits etc..
Fair conclusion
 intro
should
be kept
short

good points

can include
regulatory issues in
labour and industrial
laws etc...

avoid repetition
 highlight reasons

write complete
statement: in
skilling
programmes

can include Reset

education and
learning to meet
categorise 21st-century needs
points into each etc..
theme

Fair conclusion
 Fair intro

good points

Though can include

valid Foreign
support your investment caters
views with to the needs of the
descriptions upper middle and
and affluent classes,
examples may render any
efforts of monetary
management
ineffective etc..
Satisfactory
conclusion