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by Antonio Monteiro

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1,815 310 9 1 min 14 sec 2 min 23 sec
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Score Writing Issues

59 24 13 11
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Writing Issues
14 Correctness
4 Misspelled words
2 Incorrect noun number
2 Pronoun use
1 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
1 Wrong or missing prepositions
1 Punctuation in compound/complex
sentences
1 Comma misuse within clauses
2 Mixed dialects of english

6 Clarity
3 Hard-to-read text
1 Unclear sentences
1 Wordy sentences
1 Intricate text

4 Engagement
4 Word choice

Unique Words 56%

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Rare Words 27%

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that are not among the 5,000 most common English
words.

Word Length 4.7

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Sentence Length 34.4

Measures average sentence length words per sentence

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Elvis and Madonna: Queer life in Brazil. Elvis and Madonna is a movie about two
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working class women living in Rio de Janeiro in the late 90's. One night, Elvis, a
photographer by day and pizza delivery driver by night, has her lifepath crossed
by Madonna's, a nightclub performer transgender woman, when in delivering a
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pizza, she nds Madonna, whom had been robbed and assaulted in her own
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home, the destination of the delivery. Released in 2010, the movie depicts not
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only stories of working class people but also shows a realistic representation of
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queer life and love, which was rarely seen on big screens at the time. The
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feature also has a very distinct aesthetic of movies with low to medium budget
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made here around that time. Alongside with that, throughout the movie you get
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a glimpse of the different struggles lived by the different women, somewhat
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well played by the main actors. Which is what makes it clear that the director
was not aiming to squeeze out breathtaking performances from them, but
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rather for the overall and speci c messages portrayed through important
moments in scenes and sequences to shine through: from Elvis and Madonna's
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rst encounter, to their trip to Elvis'parents house to reveal their pregnancy, to
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the nal moments when they're faced with danger and have to face truths.
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Though not being what most people would like to watch on a sunday evening to
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relax, and also having its technical aws, the movie shows a sensiblity and
straightforwardness that overcomes all its mistakes, therefore inviting the
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viewers to empathise with the characters, since they could well be someone
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you take the bus with, a neighbour or a long lost member of your family in real
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life. It shows that, even after all the years to its release, queer life and art are
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not so different after all.

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1. working class → working-class Misspelled words Correctness

2. 90's → '90s Incorrect noun number Correctness

3. whom → who Pronoun use Correctness

4. One night, Elvis, a photographer by day Hard-to-read text Clarity

and pizza delivery driver by night, has her
lifepath crossed by Madonna's, a
nightclub performer transgender woman,
when in delivering a pizza, she nds
Madonna, whom had been robbed and
assaulted in her own home, the
destination of the delivery.

5. working class → working-class Misspelled words Correctness

6. Released in 2010, the movie depicts not Unclear sentences Clarity

only stories of working class people but
also shows a realistic representation of
queer life and love, which was rarely seen
on big screens at the time.

7. the medium Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

8. budget → budgets Incorrect noun number Correctness

9. with Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

10. with Wordy sentences Clarity

11. movie → lm Word choice Engagement

12. movie, Punctuation in Correctness

compound/complex
sentences

13. different → other, foreign, various Word choice Engagement

14. main → leading Word choice Engagement

15. Which is → This is Pronoun use Correctness

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16. important → essential Word choice Engagement

17. encounter, Comma misuse within Correctness

clauses

18. Which is what makes it clear that the Hard-to-read text Clarity
director was not aiming to squeeze out
breathtaking performances from them,
but rather for the overall and speci c
messages portrayed through important
moments in scenes and sequences to
shine through: from Elvis and Madonna's
rst encounter, to their trip to…

19. sunday → Sunday Misspelled words Correctness

20. sensiblity → sensibility Misspelled words Correctness

21. empathise → empathize Mixed dialects of English Correctness

22. neighbour → neighbor Mixed dialects of English Correctness

23. Though not being what most people Hard-to-read text Clarity
would like to watch on a sunday evening
to relax, and also having its technical
aws, the movie shows a sensiblity and
straightforwardness that overcomes all
its mistakes, therefore inviting the
viewers to empathise with the
characters, since they could well be so…

24. It shows that, even after all the years to Intricate text Clarity
its release, queer life and art are not so
different after all.

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