Tên: Dương Thị Kiều Linh

Lớp: A1-018

Dear Mr. Michael,

Good morning. How are you today? I hope you are well.

Today, I will introduce my family to you.

My family has 4 people. They’re my father, my mother, my young (young màn

nghĩa là trẻ, younger mới là trẻ hơn) younger brother and me.

My full name is Duong Thi Kieu Linh, but you can call me Linh for short. I’m 21
years old, but I will turn 2 22 next week. I’m from Viet Nam, which is a beautiful
country. Today, I feeling  am / am feeling hungry because I don’t eat breakfast. I
am most keen on Mr. Bean beacause it’s interesting. Moreover, it helps me relax
after a busy day. I’m doing homework in my bedroom. In my bedroom, I’ve got a
bed, a desk, a chair, a window and a wardrobe. I’ve also got a ceiling fan. On the
desk, I’ve got a computer, books, a lamp and pens. In the wardrobe, I’ve got
clothes. My bedroom has also got blue walls. I love it most because I spend most
of my time there. Moreover, I always feel comfortable there.

I love my mother most. Because she’s very kind and helpful. Moreover, she always
helps me when I have difficulties. My mother’s name is Hoa. She’s 48 years old,
but she will turns (will là trợ động từ rồi nên turn không cần chia)  turn 49 next 2
month. She’s Chinese (thầy sẽ giải thích rõ ở trên lớp) from China, which is a
beautiful country. She is happy because she just buy buys dress new (sai trật tự từ)
a new dress. She is most keen on dog (khi nói về 1 cái gì đó chung chung nên
dùng dạng số nhiều) dogs because it’s they’re cute. Moreover, it’s they’re loyal.
She is cooking in the kitchen. In the kitchen, she’s got a fridge, a microwave, an
oven, chairs and a table. In the fridge, she’s got apples, oranges, meat, milk and ice
creams (danh từ không đếm được nên không thêm “s”)cream. On the table, she’s
got a bottle of (1 chai) water, a bunch of banana (1 nải chuối thì phải chia số nhiều
chứ e)  bananas , scissors and chopsticks.
Next, my dad’s name is Tien. He’s 49 years old, but he will turn 50 next week.
He’s from Greece, it’s very beautiful. He’s very strict and he never smile smiles
but I love my dad so much. Today, he is hot because weather it is the summer now.
He love loves car (khi nói về 1 cái gì đó chung chung nên dùng dạng số nhiều) 
cars most because it’s they’re fast. Besides, it’s they’re convenient and very easy to
drive. He is watching TV in the living room. In the living room, he’s got a TV, a
table, chairs, fish in his aquarium and a fan. He’s also got a clock on the wall. On
the table, he’s got DVDs, magazine and a remote control (điều khiển từ xa).

Finally, my young younger brother’s name is Duong Thanh Tu, but you can call he
him Tu for short. He’s 16 years old, but he will turn 17 next 2 days week. He’s
from Russia, which is a big country. He is sad because he gets a bad grade on the
test. He love loves game most because it’s interesting. Besides, it’s helps he him
relax after lesson (nên dùng dạng số nhiều) lessons in the class. He’s taking a
shower in the bathroom. In the bathroom, he’s got a shower, a bath, a sink and a
mirror. He’s also got a white floor.

Tell me about your family. I’m really looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Linh

Nhận xét:

E chú ý khi nói về một cái gì đó chung chung nên dùng dạng danh từ số nhiều “ I
love dogs, cars” ,”it helps him relax after lessons in the class”

A bunch of bananas , a pair of + N số nhiều.

Nhớ chia động từ cho chủ ngữ ngôi 3 số ít (he,she,it)