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Question
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Answer
It is sometimes believed that living in schools will be more beneficial for college students than living with their
parents. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reasons.
The first argument gives to support my opinion is that living in dormitories gives students chances to broaden
communication. This is because there are students coming from several regions and different religions in school's
dormitories, and thus they can get exposed to a wide range of cultural and communicate with peers on their daily
life. As a result, these students can improve interpersonal skills; therefore it is beneficial to their future career. This
can be seen in international schools where students come from various countries across the world, so that
students who live in dormitories can strike up friendship with foreigners, thereby developing language and
communication skills. This is why I believe that these students can gain more experiences, and therefore LẶP TỪ
it is helpful for students to live in schools.
Another point behind my belief is that dormitory life can give these students a sense of independence. The reason
is that they have to live away from their parents and thus organize everything by their own. This can result in that
they can develop problem-solving s KHÔNG TRIỂN KHAI ĐỦ Ý NÀY
In conclusion, I totally agree that university students live in schools given then aforementioned arguments. KẾT
GENERIC
This is because there are students coming from (1) several regions and different religions in school's dormitories,
and thus they can get exposed to a wide range of (2) cultural and communicate with peers (3) on their daily life.
(1) LR: several và differnt chưa hẳn là từ đồng nghĩa với nhau. Several thường mang nghĩa trung lập, liệt kê.
Different nhấn mạnh sự khác biệt nhiều hơn >> mình dùng different regions & religions hoặc different regions and
diverse religious backgrounds.
(2) LR: ta có a range of N. Cultural là adj nên mình cần tìm noun cho nó nhé >> cultural background
(3) LR: cụm từ này chưa hay (và đúng). Ta dùng in their life thì đúng giới từ hơn >> ta dùng on a daily basis với
nghĩa hằng ngày nhé.
Back then, children (1) joins some traditional boardgame or running in the field and hang out with friends. But
nowadays, children (2) be attracted by some video games and they stay home all day and they have to study so
much.
(1) GR: Vì ở đây thể hiện sự kiện trong quá khứ, mình nhớ chia động từ thì quá khứ nhé >> joined in - ran - hang
out with
(2) GR: Ở thì hiện tại, động từ "to be" mình cần chia thành are nhé.
(3) LR: Ngoài ra, linking words và cấu trúc câu phức mình sử dụng chưa thực sự tốt nhé. Các vế câu liên kết bằng
and hơi mang tính liệt kê >> mình có thể dùng while S-V, S-V để diễn tả so sánh: while some children are addicted
to games, others are under the pressure of too much school work.
Correct Answer Correct
LR 7 GR 7 TA 6 CC 6
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