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Find the errors in the sentences given below and correct them.

1. Please accept our sincere apologies for all the negative experience that you have encountered
during your stay with us
Please accept our sincere apologies for all the negative experiences that you have encountered
during your stay with us.
Please accept our sincere apologies for all the negative experiences that you have
encountered during your stay with us.

2. Well noted on all your valuable feedback and we have actually taken all notes seriously and have
already escalated these issues.
Well noted for all your valuable feedback and we have actually taken all the notes seriously and
have already escalated these issues.
Well noted on all your valuable feedback. We have actually taken all these notes seriously
and have already escalated these issues.

3. Please note that we are always wish to bring the best service to you and we truly sorry for the
negative experience that you have encountered.
Please note that we always wishing to bring the best service to you and we are truly sorry for the
negative experience that you have encountered.
Please note that we always wish to bring the best service to you and we are truly sorry for
the negative experience that you have encountered.

4. We value your support and feedback, rest ensure that we will share your feedback to the
respective department.
We value your support and feedback. The rest ensure that we will share your feedback with the
respective department
We value your support and feedback. Rest assured that we will share your feedback with
the respective department.

5. Mr. Ganesh, give us the second chance to serve you better in the future.
Mr. Ganesh, give us the second chance to serve you better in the future.
Mr. Ganesh, give us a second chance to serve you better in the future.

6. Firstly thank you very much for leaving us with a review following your most recent stay.
Firstly, thank you very much for leaving us with a review following your most recent stay.
Firstly, thank you very much for leaving us with a review following your most recent stay.

7. However, please rest assured this will be addressed to the team in general.
However, please rest assured this will be addressed to the team in general.
However, please rest assured this will be addressed to the team in general.

8. It is our sincerest wish that you will consider returning for another stay so that we may again your
confidence in our Hilton hospitality and reaffirm your trust in our Hilton Clean Stay program.
It is our sincerest wish that you will consider returning for another stay so that we may your again
confidence in our Hilton hospitality and reaffirm your trust in our Hilton Clean Stay program.
It is our sincerest wish that you will consider returning for another stay so that we may
again demonstrate your confidence in our Hilton hospitality and reaffirm your trust in our
Hilton Clean Stay program.
9. Refer to the letter date 24th May 2022 regarding the complaint for pool service in hotel. We
apologies for your stay in our hotel. We will check for the issues with our team member.
Refer to the letter date 24th May 2022 regarding the complaint about pool service in a hotel. Our
apologies for your stay in our hotel. We will check for the issues with our team members.
Refer to the letter dated May 24th, 2022, regarding the hotel's pool service complaint. We
apologise for your stay in our hotel. We will investigate the problems with our team
member.

10. Firstly I'm apologies on behalf our hotel. Sorry for the inconvenience during your stay in our
hotel . In future, we will make sure everythings in good condition.
Firstly, I apologies on behalf of our hotel. Sorry for the inconvenience during your stay at our
hotel. In the future, we will make sure everything is in good condition.
Firstly, I'm apologising on behalf of our hotel. Sorry for the inconvenience during your stay
at our hotel. In the future, we will make sure everything is in good condition.

11. I am sorry you had an unpleasant experience with your room and our service. I will raise your
feedback to my head of departments.
I am sorry you had an unpleasant experience with your room and our services. I will raise your
feedback to my head of department.
I am sorry you had an unpleasant experience with your room and our service. I will pass
your feedback on to my head of department.

12. Thank you very much for sharing us your feedback that you have experience during your stay.
Thank you very much for sharing with us your feedback that you have experienced during your
stay.
Thank you very much for sharing with us your experience during your stay.

13. We hope you will pardon the mistake on our part this time.
We hope you will pardon the mistake on our part this time.
We hope you will pardon the mistake on our part this time.

14 Looking forward to see you soon and let me know for your next booking.
Looking forward to seeing you soon and letting me know about your next booking.
I hope to see you soon and please let me know when your next booking is.

15. First of all, I and my team would like to apologise inconvenience cause that you had been
throught.
First of all, I and my team would like to apologise for the inconvenience cause that you had been
through.
First of all, I and my team would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused because
that you have been through.
16. I will take this issues as our main priority to investigate further.
I will take this issue as our main priority to investigate further.
I will take this issue as our main priority to investigate further.

17. We will look into the issue and have a review with my team on the area concern.
We will look into the issue and have a review with my team on the area concerned.
We will look into the issue and have a review with my team on the area of concern.

18. Thank you for sharing your unpleasant stay feedback with us. We are sincerely apologise for the
inconvenience and disappointment caused by the lapses in service standard during you stayed.
Thank you for sharing your unpleasant stay feedback with us. We sincerely apologise for the
inconvenience and disappointment caused by the lapses in service standards during your stay.
Thank you for sharing your unpleasant stay feedback with us. We sincerely apologise for
the inconvenience and disappointment caused by the lapses in service standards during
your stay.

19. Kindly be assured that, we were reviewed this feedback with our team for future improvement
as we are consistently working on improve our service and to looking forward to provided the best
service and experiences for all of our guest.
Kindly be assured, we by reviewed this feedback with our team for future improving as we are
consistently working on improving our service and looking forward to providing the best service
and experience for all of our guest.
Kindly be assured that we reviewed this feedback with our team for future improvement
as we are consistently working on improving our service and are looking forward to
providing the best service and experience for all of our guests.

20. Thank you for writing this email to me on your recent stay at our hotel.
Thank you for writing this email to me during your recent stay at our hotel.
Thank you for writing this email to me about your recent stay at our hotel.

21. First of all I would like to thank you for your time contacting us. The room that you were check in
was 1419 which is the same category that you booked.
First of all, I would like to thank you for your time contacting us. The room that you checking in
was 1419, which is in the same category that you booked.
First of all, I would like to thank you for your time contacting us. The room that you
checked into was 1419, which is the same category that you booked.

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