What was good about your presentation?

Voice was very pronounced allowing people to hear me very clearly. Information was displayed very
clearly on the slide.

Which elements could be improved?

To stand in shot and slow down on my speaking as it made the information difficult to digest due to
the fast pace. I could also try and work on my suturing as it makes the presentation hard to follow.

How could you improve them using editing?

I Could do a voice over to try and make the stuttering not as obvious and there isn’t much that I can
do to fix me being out of shot as I cannot change the camera angle after filming.