"The future belongs to those who have visions to materialize their dreams," is a principle that I always

believe in. I consider myself energetic as well as highly motivated. Since my school days, I have engaged
myself in various activities and and, I have won many titles.God has been kind to help me in winning
different titles. Besides, my leadership quality has always prevailed in my supervisionsupervision, and I
have also remained my team captain in sports.

I believe without a sense of caring and sharing, a community cannot be maintained harmonious. Proudly,
I have been chosen as a counselor and have organized various sessions. I am a regular student and I have
won Ehsaas Scholarship that is aimed at helping meritorious and deserving students in their studies.

I am doing Computer Science degree and want to master my work by learning more about technological
advancements so that I may will efficiently serve my community. the humanity as culture influences the
evolution of science and technology and helps comprehend the challenges faced by the state and its
people. A technology changes the culture that gave it birth. Science is seen as trustworthy and important
in the most modern cultures around the world.

Consequently, If I got selected, Being a participant of this program would help me I have intention to
learn about the rich culture, public finance, law, foreign policy, health reforms, history, and values of the
United States. In the future, I am optimistic sure to materialisematerialize my dreams through this
unique program. Ugrad would truly providewould provide me with the opportunities that are essential
for my future career. I have always been curious to avail.

Overall, this personal statement is quite good, and this PS has the guts to get a place in the program.

I have made some changes in it, and these are a few other suggestions from my side that you can
consider:

1. Make opening lines compelling and more impressive. Try to compel the reader with your biggest
achievement. This program is looking for extraordinary people.

2. Talk more about the impact that you have created through your activities and engagements if you did
anything for your community. Is there any significant impact that you've created so far?

3. Your statement should follow the same pace and every line should be interlinked to each other. Make
relevancy in the paragraphs.

4. Don’t do self-praising. Let them decide what you are!

5. Remove the last line from your statement. It's unnecessary.

6. Specially talk about what you wanted to be in future. As a professional how you can bring change in
your community.