07/03/2019: Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished.

Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been
punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
1. PARAPHRASE
2. YOUR ANSWER

Many convicts re-commit numerous crimes after receiving their

punishment.

In my opinion, this problem can be attributed to/ ascribed to their cruel

nature and social prejudice. In order to improve the situation, the local
government should support these ex-criminals with job opportinies and
psychological therapy.
Many convicts re-commit numerous crimes after receiving their
punishment. Personally/ From my perspective/From my point of view, cruel
nature and social prejudice are two major explanations/ reasons for this
situation. I believe that job opportinies and psychological therapy are two
feasible/workable approaches/measures/actions to deal with it.

this problem can be attributed to/ ascribed to their cruel nature and
social prejudice. In order to improve the situation, the local government
should support these ex-criminals with job opportinies and
psychological therapy.
BODY 1:
- Cruel nature
- Prejudice
BODY 2:
- Creat job opportunities
- Therapy

10-04-2021: Many students find it difficult to concentrate or

pay attention in school. What are the reasons? What could be
done to solve this problem?
The majority
A large number of
BODY 1: Causes
- Boring/Tedious/ Monotonous lessons
- Over-use of technology
BODY 2: Reasons
- Improve lessons’ quality
- Restrict phone use
An increasing number of students have difficulties in
focusing on lessons at school. I personally think that
monotonous lessons and technology overuse may account for
this matter. Therefore, so as to tackle it, teachers should
revise their teaching methods and put a limit on phone usage.

The majority of students have difficulties in staying focused

during lessons. From my perspective, this is largely due to
tedious lessons and over-use of technology. I therefore
recommend that improving teching quality and banning
phone use would be feasible approaches to tackle the
problem.

18/6/2020: In some countries around the world men and

women are having children late in life. What are the reasons
for this development? What are the effects on society and
family life?
Body 1: reasons
- Prioritize job/career/
- financial matter/conditions
Body 2: effects on society and family life
- Workforce/ aging population
- Generation gap / health problems
20/03/2021: Many people are working longer and longer
hours. What are the reasons and effects?
People ~ workers/ employees
Spend time at workplace/ devote time to
Extended hours
Overtime/ extra hours
BODY 1: REASONS
- Financial matter/pressure
- Promotion
BODY 2: EFFECTS

- Physical health
- Mental health
2/12/2021: The major cities in the world are growing fast,
as well as their problems. What are the problems that young
people living in cities are facing? Give solutions to this.

BODY 1: PROBLEMS
- Fierce competition
- Cost of livings / living expenses/
BODY 2: SOLUTIONS
- Migrate to the countryside