TOPIC: Descriptiv

e Writing

SUBTOPIC: Describing people

OBJECTIVES:
01 02 03
- Clearly, identify the - Accurately, - Accurately, give a
purpose of identify description of a
descriptive writing characteristics used person.
in descriptive writing
Descriptive Writing - The primary purpose of
descriptive writing is to describe a person,
place or thing in such a way that a picture is
formed in the reader's mind. Capturing an
event through descriptive writing involves
paying close attention to the details by
using all of your five senses.
Characteristics of descriptive writing
1. Good descriptive writing includes many vivid sensory details that
paint a picture and appeals to all of the reader's senses of sight,
hearing, touch, smell and taste when appropriate. Descriptive
writing may also paint pictures of the feelings the person, place
or thing invokes in the writer.
2. Good descriptive writing often makes use of figurative language
such as analogies, similes and metaphors to help paint the picture
in the reader's mind.
3. Good descriptive writing uses precise language. General
adjectives, nouns, and passive verbs do not have a place in good
descriptive writing. Use specific adjectives and nouns and strong
action verbs to give life to the picture you are painting in the
reader's mind.
4. Good descriptive writing is organized. Some ways to organize
descriptive writing include: chronological (time), spatial
(location), and order of importance. When describing a person,
you might begin with a physical description, followed by how
that person thinks, feels and acts.
Describing people
Example: My Teen Sister
My favorite little sister is Belen. She is sixteen years old. She is short, 1 meter and 51 centimeters tall. She has long wavy, shiny, brown hair. Her skin is so
beautiful. It reminds me of the color of coffee with milk. Her face is a heart form. You can see her anger or happiness in her big expressive brown eyes.
She has a little nose, and her mouth looks like it was painted light pink. She can speak two thousand words, moving from hate to love and from love to
hate, change her opinion five times, start talking alone, forget what she was talking about at the beginning, all in one minute. It’s a little difficult to try
to talk to her, but it’s fun. She has a strong personality. She falls in love every year, and she is a little crazy, but I love her personality. Sometimes I
want to kill her, and she wants to kill me too. I think that is normal between sisters. She is like the song “Mystery Train” by Bon Jovi. She likes rap,
hip-hop and pop music. She likes reading romance and fantasy books. She enjoys horror movies (I know, she is crazy). She loves to go out with her
friends, paint her nails, and wear high heel

shoes. She is always dancing, studying, reading, working and going out. She is a very busy girl. The truth is that since childhood, she has danced, sung and
talked incessantly. She always knew what she wanted and never hesitated to say her opinion. She has lived happy and sad moments like everyone, but
she has continued with her life. She makes me feel very proud for that reason. She will continue to grow up to become “the best version of herself,” and
work hard to pay my bills (It’s a family joke). When she reads this part she will want to hit me. I love my teen sister.
Activity 1
Instructions: Look at the picture given and
write a brief physical description of the person
given.
Activity 2:

Instructions: Select a family member and

write a description of the person. Make
sure to include their physical and
character traits.
GOOD LUCK