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1999, Vol. 5, No. 1, pp. 70-78 © Swets & Zeitlinger
ABSTRACT
This article offers a proposal to keep reports on pediatric neuropsychological assessments succinct and
specific. A format is recommended that emphasizes interpretation and implications of assessment data, as
opposed to detailed review of numeric test results. Practical applications and ramifications are discussed
and are illustrated with case examples.
Report writing is an important part of the clini- chologists may have had the time to write
cal neuropsychological assessment of children. lengthy reports, and at least some readers may
Reports are the common format for documenting have had the time to read them. However, most
one’s findings and recommendations in response professionals are under increased time pressure
to a referral question. Because of differences in to obtain and distribute information as effi-
the training of the clinician, differences in the ciently as possible. Shorter reports that do not
target audience, and differences in the purpose sacrifice accuracy, integrity, or clarity may be
of the assessment, there is substantial variability helpful in this respect to both the writer and the
in how neuropsychological reports are written. reader.
Often, however, neuropsychological reports tend
to be fairly lengthy, sometimes running in ex- Organization
cess of 10 pages. In most instances, a large por- It could be argued that extended reports force
tion is dedicated to a description of quantitative the writer (particularly if this is a predoctoral
test results. I suggest that neuropsychological intern or postdoctoral resident) to explain his or
reports can be made more meaningful and user- her awareness of patterns or inconsistencies in
friendly by making them brief and by focusing the data, and to present an organized framework
on interpretations and implications of all the that shows how the various conclusions flow
available data, rather than on formal test scores. from the findings. However, it could also be ar-
gued that it is not necessary to go into minute
detail for this purpose, let alone to burden the
BENEFITS OF SHORT REPORTS reader for that reason. Psychologists-in-training
are supposed to work under close supervision,
Efficiency and the face-to-face discussion with the super-
Before the advent of managed care, many psy- vising neuropsychologist (as well as subsequent
*
Address correspondence to: Jacques Donders, Psychology Service, Mary Free Bed Hospital, 235 Wealthy S.E.,
Grand Rapids, MI 49503, USA. E-mail: jdonders@mfbrc.com
Accepted for publication: December 5, 1997.
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editorial comments on the first draft of the re- pertinent to the issues involved in the neuropsy-
port) may be a more appropriate place to exam- chological evaluation, in a manner that mini-
ine and modify the writer’s thought processes. If mizes not only intrusion on privacy but also re-
the writer starts with the goal of keeping the re- dundancy. For example, a prior history of sexual
port limited to one or two pages, it might force abuse should probably be mentioned in a work-
him or her to be more focused and organized in up for learning disability but it is not necessary
the write-up. to include all the specific details or circum-
stances. If it is known in advance that specific
Utility information is already available to the reader
Readers other than fellow psychologists may not (e.g., a premorbid history that was described in
be interested in the amount of detail (particu- a previous neuropsychological report), refer-
larly when describing test results) that is often ences to prior documents may sometimes be
provided in neuropsychological reports. Physi- more appropriate than repeating the same infor-
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fied as the main, authoritative source of infor- receiving the seven-page report) how to imple-
mation. The ‘‘Results’’ section of the report can ment them. After review of the entire report and
then focus on the validity, meaning, and impli- school and medical records, I was able to reword
cations of the data, followed by specific recom- the available data and the associated implica-
mendations, the level of detail of which may tions for him as follows:
need to vary with the level of understanding of
the reader. Of course, this approach does not The findings reflect a significant decline from
eliminate the risk of misinterpretation of the test her apparent average functioning before her
data by others who chose to ignore the caution- stroke, as documented in the school records.
ary disclaimer. However, it does strike a balance She is frustrated but not depressed. She has
between including an extended description of particular difficulties with both the under-
test results in the report, thereby lengthening it standing and the expression of spoken lan-
considerably, and supplying the data, but not guage, in which areas she is performing at a
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clarifying that it is only for use by appropriate level that would typically be exceeded by
professionals. about 95% of her peers (best exemplified by
An alternative solution to the issue of report the Token Test, WISC-III Verbal Compre-
length could be to write the customary ‘‘long’’ hension , and WIAT Oral Expression scores).
report but to add a separate cover letter high- Reading is slightly better but still laborious,
lighting the main points. However, that may not and she has problems with getting to the
be time-efficient for most professionals. If the ‘‘gist’’ of complex written information. Be-
main findings, implications, and recommenda- cause of the weakness and slowness of her
tions can be summarized in a one-page cover right hand, and because she has about as
letter, why not make this part of the actual re- much difficulty expressing herself in writing
port? as by mouth, note-taking and writing assign-
ments may not be realistic at this time. How-
ever, she can still learn new things under the
CASE EXAMPLES right conditions (best exemplified by the
Halstead Category Test score, which is aver-
I recently had an opportunity to review, at the age for her age). Oral or written instructions
request of a school principal, a seven-page re- should be very concise and concrete, with
port pertaining to the data presented in Table 1. particular avoidance of shifting topics, need
The data were obtained by a self-proclaimed for subtle inferences, or recall of detailed
neuropsychologist during an examination of an facts. Simply repeating the same verbal infor-
11-year-old, right-handed girl who had sustained mation is not going to be helpful. Instead, she
an infarction (of unclear etiology) of the left may profit from having the task requirements
middle cerebral artery 6 weeks earlier. More demonstrated. She will also need extended
than five pages of the report were dedicated to a time to complete tasks; rushing her is likely
description of test findings, whereas the para- to lead to more errors. She may do much
graph-length ‘‘Conclusions & Recommenda- better under a format that is interactive (with
tions’’ section included little more than that the ample use of visual reminders such as picture
child had ‘‘fronto-temporal left cerebral dys- cards, hands-on experience without concern
function’’ and a general endorsement that she about ‘‘neatness’’, and immediate brief redi-
needed ‘‘special education placement’’ with rection as soon as she starts getting ‘‘off-
‘‘nonverbal instruction methods’’. The principal track’’). It is also important to make sure that
was exasperated by the report because he al- her work space is not cluttered and that im-
ready knew that the child had sustained a left portant things are not ‘‘hidden’’ on her far
hemisphere stroke. The school district was more right side, because she is aware of only about
than willing to provide adapted services for her; 50% of the visual information there. Evaluat-
they did just not know (neither before nor after ing her learning by having her demonstrate
PEDIATRIC REPORTS 73
how to do a certain task is going to be more dren with stroke, one might consider the book
informative than asking her to describe facts ‘‘Educational dimensions of acquired brain
or details. A combination of teacher-consul- injury’’ by Savage and Wolcott (published by
tant and resource room interventions might Pro-Ed in Austin in 1994).
allow some limited mainstreaming. These
special education supports could be consid- The school principal found this feedback very
ered under the ‘‘Physical & Otherwise Health useful. The purpose of this illustration is not to
Impaired’’ qualification because her physical argue the ‘‘best’’ interpretation of the available
and mental difficulties are the direct result of test scores, but to offer an alternative and more
a brain infarction. For further information user-friendly way of communicating the results
about classroom accommodations for chil- of a neuropsychological evaluation. This half-
Age-based norms
Measure TS M (SD)
WISC-III Full Scale IQ 74 100 (15)
WISC-III Verbal IQ 72 100 (15)
WISC-III Performance IQ 80 100 (15)
WISC-III Verbal Comprehension 73 100 (15)
WISC-III Perceptual Organization 87 100 (15)
WISC-III Freedom from Distractibility 78 100 (15)
WISC-III Processing Speed 67 100 (15)
WIAT Reading Comprehension 81 100 (15)
WIAT Numerical Operations 89 100 (15)
WIAT Listening Comprehension 75 100 (15)
WIAT Oral Expression 75 100 (15)
WIAT Written Expression 70 100 (15)
WRAML Verbal Learning 5 10 (3)
WRAML Visual Learning 9 10 (3)
Token Test for Children (total correct)a 486 500 (5)
Aphasia Screening Test (total errors)b 5 2.50 (1.00)
Halstead Category Test (total errors)b 37 43.50 (14.55)
Trail Making Test – A (sec)b 30 17.00 (6.50)
Trail Making Test – B (sec)b 92 35.71 (15.00)
Finger tapping – right (average # taps)b 21.20 38.52 (4.50)
Finger tapping – left (average # taps)b 32.00 35.45 (5.43)
Grip strength – right (kg)b 2.50 10.31 (4.10)
Grip strength – left (kg)b 9.00 10.00 (4.10)
Finger agnosia – right (errors)b 4 0.20 (0.50)
Finger agnosia – left (errors)b 1 0.30 (0.50)
Visual imperception – right (suppressions)b 7 0.20 (0.20)
Visual imperception – left (suppressions)b 0 0.10 (0.20)
CBC Total Problems 44 50 (10)
CBC Total Competence 48 50 (10)
YSR Total Problems 42 50 (10)
YSR Total Competence 44 50 (10)
Note. CBC = Child Behavior Checklist (Achenbach, 1991a); WIAT = Wechsler Individual Achievement Test
(Wechsler, 1992); WISC-III = Wechsler Intelligence Scale for Children – Third Edition (Wechsler, 1991);
WRAML = Wide Range Assessment of Memory and Learning (Sheslow & Adams, 1990); YSR = Youth Self-
Report (Achenbach, 1991b).
a
DiSimoni (1978)
b
Knights & Norwood (1980) and Reitan & Wolfson (1992)
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page narrative could have taken the place of five port) are presented in Table 2. The evaluation
single-spaced pages of text, and could probably was done about 18 months post injury at the re-
have fit (with a proper succinct description of quest of a physiatrist to assist with school place-
history, interview, observations, outpatient treat- ment. The complete report is presented with in-
ment recommendations and follow-up) into a formed consent from the foster parents but a few
report of less than two pages. An appendix in- identifying characteristics have been altered to
cluding the raw data would have allowed the protect confidentiality. Note that the majority of
school to use the required scores for their docu- the report concerns the meaning and implica-
mentation and certification purposes, and such a tions of the findings. Information is also summa-
summary sheet would also be of benefit in a fu- rized to avoid redundancy, whenever possible.
ture repeat evaluation. By focusing on the inter- For example, because the premorbid history did
pretation of the data, not every single test needs not contain major contributing information, it is
to be referenced, although pointing out some described in the report as ‘‘unremarkable’’,
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scores that may be particularly relevant to the rather than describing every Apgar score, devel-
referral question (such as those needed for spe- opmental milestone, or kindergarten experience.
cial education certification, or those highlighting A few clarifications may be in order to put this
strengths and weaknesses) can often be helpful. report in proper perspective.
Of course, reports are most often prepared on The report does not discuss in detail the psy-
the basis of one’s own evaluation, which typi- chosocial reasons why the biological mother
cally includes review of the relevant history, (who had a number of problems of her own) de-
interview findings, behavioral and other qualita- cided that she could not take the child home
tive observations, and specific recommendations with her. This information was considered to be
for intervention and follow-up. This does not sufficiently sensitive (and not relevant to the
necessarily have to result in lengthy reports. As referral question) that it was decided that the
an example, the complete report on a neuropsy- privacy of the biological mother would be better
chological evaluation that I performed recently served by not going into minute detail. The re-
is presented in the Appendix. For purposes of port also does not discuss the concerns that the
clarity and consistency, the test scores (which foster mother had about the school program in
were originally a one-page addendum to the re- which the child was enrolled (e.g., not enough
Table 2. Test Scores of an 8-Year-Old Boy with Traumatic Brain Injury (TS).
Age-based norms
Measure TS M (SD)
KABC Nonverbal Composite index 54 100 (15)
KABC Hand Movements subtest 12 110 (13)
KABC Triangles subtest 13 110 (13)
KABC Matrix Analogies subtest 14 110 (13)
KABC Spatial Memory subtest 12 110 (13)
KABC Photo Series subtest 13 110 (13)
VABS Adaptive Behavior Composite index 56 100 (15)
VABS Communication subdomain 63 100 (15)
VABS Daily Living Skills subdomain 50 100 (15)
VABS Socialization domain 69 100 (15)
CCT Total score 33 150 (10)
CVLT-C Total score 21 150 (10)
Note. CCT = Children’s Category Test (Boll, 1993); CVLT-C = California Verbal Learning Test – Children’s
Version (Delis, Kramer, Kaplan, & Ober, 1994); KABC = Kaufman Assessment Battery for Children (Kaufman
& Kaufman, 1983); VABS = Vineland Adaptive Behavior Scales (Sparrow, Galla, & Cicchetti, 1984).
PEDIATRIC REPORTS 75
positive reinforcement, transportation time too my decision to change to this type of brief report
long). Because she was considering moving the format (usually 1 to 2 pages plus test score ap-
child to a different school and because it was pendix) about 2 years ago, from sources as di-
unclear who in the child’s school district would verse as physicians, case managers, school pro-
have access to the report (and what their reac- fessionals, and trial lawyers. I also suspect that
tions might be), it was agreed with the foster other neuropsychologists who consider more
mother that these issues would be addressed in- user-friendly, shorter reports will have as little
directly (i.e., by describing the needs of the difficulty as I had in finding constructive things
child, instead of criticizing the failure to provide to do with the time that can be saved in this con-
the most appropriate services). These are exam- text.
ples of how even short reports often need to be I would welcome comments from readers
tailored to the individual child and his or her about the proposed report format. As others
unique social and environmental circumstances. have suggested, there is no definitive model for
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Telephone follow-up 6 weeks after the assess- writing a specific, intelligible, and useful report
ment revealed that this particular child had been (Baron, Fennell, & Voeller, 1995). There may
moved successfully to another school program also be occasional instances where longer re-
that appeared to meet his needs better. ports are clearly indicated (e.g., with extremely
complicated cases). My hope is that constructive
peer discussion about report preparation may
CONCLUSIONS help to improve the clinical practice of child
neuropsychology.
I am not suggesting that shorter reports are nec-
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facility last January, he has been living with new when resting on his lapboard, and I suggested to
foster parents. His biological, single mother was Mrs. Doe that she might want to consider some
not capable of taking care of him in her own elbow pads. John also worked with his eyes very
home, and voluntarily gave him up for adoption. close to the surface when working with visual or
John attends a special education program (no tangible materials and I am not sure if anything
previous psychological assessment) and also can be done about that with different prescrip-
receives a variety of outpatient therapies. tion lenses.
current scores. However, I strongly doubt that he will learn more from three 30-minute ses-
they would be above the fifth percentile rank sions with 5-10 minute breaks in between than
compared to his age peers. These findings are from one 2-hour session); and (4) utilization of
therefore not inconsistent with those of various a ‘‘show and tell’’ approach that offers concise,
speech pathologists who had worked with John concrete instruction while the task requirements
for a long time and who recently came up with or processes are actively demonstrated to him.
standard scores in the upper 60s and low 70s on When John starts to perseverate or lets his
tests of fairly overlearned language skills. All attention wander, then a brief, gentle tactile cue
the current results suggest is that when faced might help (I had reasonable success with touch-
with a new, challenging task where he can not ing his cheek and then redirecting him to the
rely on routinized information, and where he has task at hand). His work space should be kept
to figure things out all by himself, John is likely free of unnecessary distractors, and placing im-
to perform at a level that would typically be ex- portant things to his far left should be avoided
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ceeded by about 95 to 99% of his peers. It is im- (because he may not pick up on things on that
portant to realize that this does not mean that he side consistently). It is also crucial to realize
is incapable of any new learning. However, such that this is a child who is craving for positive
learning will be slower, less efficient, and less regard, so appropriate efforts should be fre-
complete than that of most of his peers. It will quently verbally reinforced. The ‘‘fresher’’ he
also likely remain at a fairly concrete and do- can be for school (by having sufficient sleep,
main-specific level (without much spontaneous avoiding prolonged transportation, and possibly
generalization to different tasks). even considering a reduced school schedule), the
better.
Impression and Recommendations At this time, John appears to have integrated
John presents with significant physical and cog- well into his new family. Mrs. Doe clearly ap-
nitive impairments as the result of his traumatic pears to have his best interests at heart. I would
brain injury. It is likely that many of these will maintain visitation with his biological mother as
be permanent and that they will continue to in- long as both parties continue to show consistent
terfere with his academic career and with his interest. It must be realized that children with
adaptive behavior. The most appropriate special brain injuries at an early age are likely to experi-
education certification for a child like John is ence more academic and adjustment difficulties
probably ‘‘Physical and Otherwise Health Im- when they grow older. I am not suggesting that
paired’’, but I am less concerned about the ac- he needs a neuropsychological evaluation every
tual label than I am about making sure that he is 6 or 12 months, but he does need to be followed
in the right learning environment (which tends regularly (e.g., though the Pediatric Brain Injury
to vary from school to school). Clinic).
John will likely do and learn relatively best in
a classroom that meets the following conditions: Follow-Up
(1) as few students per teacher as possible; (2) I have discussed these findings and recommen-
frequent opportunities for individualized feed- dations with the foster mother. She can share her
back about his performance, and redirection as copy of this report with the school and with
soon as he starts getting ‘‘off track’’; (3) learn- John’s therapists, as she sees fit. For any further
ing sessions that are brief and spaced apart, with questions, I can be contacted directly at the
breaks and subsequent review in between (i.e., above telephone number.