2.

5
3
4.5
5
4
4
4
5
3
4
7
6.5
6
6
5
5.5
5
5

7
6.5

99

Good

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Dear Yash, you have shown great potential in this test. You have completed all the 20
questions so congratulations for this.
Here are few suggestions for you

You have Good contextual competence as reflected in Q.4,8,11,12,20 etc (all parts
addressed). In Q.1, 2,9,17 etc you should try to address other parts of the questions, please
see suggestions in the said questions.

You have Good content competence as you have mostly presented all the major content
needed to satisfy demand of the question except in Q.6 ,15,18 where specific content is
missing, please refer mirco comments .

Language you used is simple and writing is also legible . So no issues here.

You have tried to introduced your answers well ,however introduction needs to be crisp and
to the point in Q.9,14 etc . Some suggestions have been given there go through them. Try to
write intro in 2-3 lines for 10 markers and 3-4 lines for 15 markers.

Structuring is fair except Q.1,9 where sequence of parts is missed (see suggestions there). To
improve the [presentation you should try to box and underline key words and points as
highlighted in many questions, avoid long paras (as in Q1). You can move content in form
of a flowcharts or diagram as highlighted in Q7 also

Mostly you have concluded well except Q.2,17 etc where relevant conclusion is missing. Also
avoid writing phrase "to conclude" in every Que , directly conclude your answer. Some
additional pointers have been highlighted at relevant questions please go through them

Overall, you have performed well in this test. Try to work on the above suggestions.
All the best to you.

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 eg.
In Point 3
substantiat
e by
highlightin
g how
more than
200 crore
seized
during
elections
of five
states
early this
year

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Eg, Poor
profitability
of SSE
projects

Lack of
investors
interest

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Composition and functions
not
explanied .

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 Societal barriers
for women

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Important content
misiing in the advantages part.
also in way forward

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Eg, Point 2
Cold chains

Point 4 , Capacity building from grassroots i.e

PHC to superspeciality hospital for future ready survelliance

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see comments
on previous
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