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Good performance
Dear Karanveer, you have shown great potential in this test. You have completed 19
questions overall, try to complete entire paper.
Here are few suggestions for you

You have Good contextual competence as reflected in Q1, 2,8,12 etc (all parts addressed
as per the demand). However In Q. 9, 11 you should try to understand the demand of the
questions, please see suggestions in the said questions.

You have Good content competence as you have mostly presented all the major content
needed to satisfy demand of the question except in Q.5(Repitition),9(also give
examples),17,19 where specific content is missing, please refer micro comments .

Language you used is simple and writing is also legible . So no issues here.

In Introduction a pattern has been observed where you have introduced all Qs. in the
form of points. Try to avoid this. Introduction should be in the form of a single para of
3-4 lines only. Please see suggestions in micro comments

Structuring is Very good- you have followed the sequence of question while answering
various parts and content is divided into major and micro points.
On presentation -You have also used flowcharts, tables adequately , add also in Q.4, 12
etc. Refer microcomments

Another pattern observed- In all Qs. You have concluded in form of points.
Note that, Conclusion also needs to be a crisp single para, which should be clearly
distinguishable from the main body of answer.

Overall, you have performed well in this test. Try to work on the above suggestions.
All the best to you.

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