Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Outline: 6/6
Answer: 2/4
1. Did the reverse outline you created reveal any errors in unity? If so,
what were they, and how could you revise the paper to eliminate these
errors?
There is no errorr in unity. No claims or proofs that possibly contradict the
writer’s statement in the introduction could be found.
2. Did the reverse outline you created reveal any errors in the
organization? If so, what were they, and how could you revise the paper
to eliminate these errors?
The writer should rearrange the sequence of the first and the second positions
since the collective responsibility is stated after the individual one. Or to make
it more simple, the sequence should be changed in Collective and Individual
Answer:
1. Unity:
I believe that in your first response, you should provide some proof that your essay on unity
is free of faults.
For example:
- Do all the sentences in the paragraph support the topic sentence of the paragraph?
+ Topic sentence:
+ Supporting details:
+ Example:
2. Organization:
It has one sentence that makes the readers confused about the content:
Vehicles may also be environmentally beneficial. For example, we must avoid over-
accelerating engines or utilizing air conditioning in rural areas where it is preferable to
preserve energy by simply opening the windows. ÿ( I took notes in the outline)