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    The document outlines the stages of writing about transport in Callao, Peru. It begins with ideas, then provides a draft that describes the various modes of transportation by air, sea, and road. The draft is then revised to add additional context before a final copy is produced. The final copy notes that transport in Callao includes air travel via airplane, as well as sea travel by boat or ship to visit islands. It also explains that most people use buses for affordable transportation, while taxis and cars are safer but motorbikes are more dangerous.

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    The document outlines the stages of writing about transport in Callao, Peru. It begins with ideas, then provides a draft that describes the various modes of transportation by air, sea, and road. The draft is then revised to add additional context before a final copy is produced. The final copy notes that transport in Callao includes air travel via airplane, as well as sea travel by boat or ship to visit islands. It also explains that most people use buses for affordable transportation, while taxis and cars are safer but motorbikes are more dangerous.

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    Transport in My Area - Stages in Writing

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    Miguel Cardenas
    The document outlines the stages of writing about transport in Callao, Peru. It begins with ideas, then provides a draft that describes the various modes of transportation by air, sea, and road. The draft is then revised to add additional context before a final copy is produced. The final copy notes that transport in Callao includes air travel via airplane, as well as sea travel by boat or ship to visit islands. It also explains that most people use buses for affordable transportation, while taxis and cars are safer but motorbikes are more dangerous.

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    Transport in my area - stages in writing

    1. Ideas for the text

    Transport in my area

    Air Sea
    Road

    Ship Boat
    Airplane Bus Taxi

    Car Motorbike

    2. Draft
    Transport in Callao is varied. You can go by air, sea and road.
    By air you can go by airplane. In Callao there is the airport “Jorge Chávez”, the most important in Peru.
    By sea you can go by boat or ship. Visit the island San Lorenzo.
    By road is the most popular form to transport in Callao. You can go by taxi, bus, car or motorbike.
    Most people are transported by bus because it is cheaper than other types for transport.
    Taxi and car are the safest form transport, but in motorbike is more dangerous.
    3. Changes
    Transport in Callao is varied. You can go by air, sea and road.
    By air you can go by airplane. In Callao there is the airport “Jorge Chávez”, the most important in Peru. (In this you
    can fly from Peru to other countries)
    By sea you can go by boat or ship. Visit the island San Lorenzo. (The tourists visit the island San Lorenzo by boat)
    By road is the most popular form to transport in Callao. You can go by taxi, bus, car or motorbike.
    Most people are transported by bus because it is cheaper than other types for transport.
    Taxi and car are the safest form transport, but in motorbike is more dangerous.
    4. Final copy
    Transport in Callao is varied. You can go by air, sea and road.
    By air you can go by airplane. In Callao there is the airport “Jorge Chávez”, the most important in Peru. In this you
    can fly from Peru to other countries.
    By sea you can go by boat or ship. The tourists visit the island San Lorenzo by boat.
    By road is the most popular form to transport in Callao. You can go by taxi, bus, car or motorbike.
    Most people are transported by bus because it is cheaper than other types for transport. Taxi and car are the safest
    form transport, but in motorbike is more dangerous.

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