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Esports Unit 1 and 2 Feedback Sheet
Esports Unit 1 and 2 Feedback Sheet
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1.2 Your application of media processes and skills safely and appropriately
G shows:
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flexible processes, skills and knowledge applied in extensive enquiry to
develop creative solutions. (E)
Unit 1: Understand the 2.1 Your critical comparison of a range of communication methods used to
pt 2 characteristics and convey meaning in creative media production shows:
methods of communication
limited understanding of subject context, lacking clarity in aims and
within a media context. G purpose. (F)
Unit 2: Understand design and 1.1 Critically compare a range of research tools, methods and skills.
pt 1 research tools, methods
little or no evidence presented, or information does not relate sufficiently to
and skills used in creative task. (F)
media production. S
sufficient relevant information has been gathered, documented and used in the
development of ideas. (S)
Unit 2: Understand primary and 2.1 Critically compare a range of primary and secondary research sources.
pt 2 secondary research
sources. S Limited understanding of subject context, lacking clarity in aims and purpose (F)
Unit 2: Be able to use design and 3.1 Apply design and research tools, methods and skills to record and interpret
pt 3 research tools, methods information and develop ideas for creative production.
and skills to inform ideas S
for creative media Limited range of processes demonstrated judgement and execution of
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production.
techniques is poor (F)
3.2 Evaluate the effectiveness of design and research tools methods and skills
to develop ideas for creative production.
Final comments
Jack your slides are very well presented in terms of theme and text layout you have clearly
considered visual style and appealing to your audience for this presentation. This is good work
and something I would like you to carry forward particularly when we start to enter the realms of
marketing and promotion.
Your midpoint evaluation is detailed, and you have considered elements for improvement.
Your inclusion of full screen slides and video to reinforce the information yourself and Sean are
trying to present in your edited version is still very good standard and it's something I would like
you to carry forward.
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Within your screen grabs you have justified why you've made certain improvements and use
certain tools which is good practice.
Your evaluation for the end of the project is clear and concise I would've liked you to have
expanded on some of the questions little further with a bit more detail perhaps exactly how the
primary research helped you with your evaluation and perhaps your edit. That said you've clearly
recognise the difference between primary and secondary and I hope you use both of these
research forms as we move forward into the course.
Internal Verifier: Steve Bell Assessor Name & Date: BEN LOMAS w/c: 24/10/22
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