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COMMENTS: Art - Generic Targets

1=#E should aim to maintain the high quality of #h work next year.
2=I hope #e can sustain #h current interest in and enthusiasm towards art.
3=I hope #e can maintain #h determination to use and understand all aspects of the
work.
4=An excellent effort, with great rewards!
5=#E should aim to increase #h confidence by making an effort to be more involved
in class discussion.
6=#E should try to take a more positive attitude to #h work.
7=#E should make an effort to be more actively involved during lessons.
8=#E should aim to produce #h best work at all times.
9=#E needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
10=#N needs to take time to practice the new skills taught.
11=I would like to see #m put more consistent effort into #h homework.
12=#E needs to spend a little more time on #h homework.
13=#E should make an effort to concentrate more during lessons.
14=#N must listen to, read, watch and follow instructions more carefully.
15=I would like to see #m make more effort to avoid being distracted during
lessons.
16=#E should try to improve the presentation of #h work.
17=#E would enjoy and benefit from looking at the work of other artists,
craftspeople and designers either by going to galleries or by looking at specialist
art books.
18=#N should consider opting for art at IGCSE.

COMMENTS: Art1 - Introduction

1=#N is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen
interest in art and appears to enjoy and understand all aspects of the work.
2=#N is an able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in
art and appears to enjoy and understand most aspects of the work.
3=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.
4=#N is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest and of the
subject and always works with enthusiasm.
5=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught.
6=#N is a friendly student who works with enthusiasm in the art room, and
contributes constructively to class discussion.
7=#N finds the skills of listening to and following instructions difficult.
8=#N works enthusiastically in all areas of art and #h work has improved because of
this.
9=#N enjoys art and this is reflected in #h finished drawings and paintings.

COMMENTS: Art2 - Knowledge

1=#E demonstrates an excellent understanding of all the new skills and concepts
taught so far.
2=#E has developed an excellent understanding of all the new skills and concepts
taught so far.
3=#E demonstrates a good understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
4=#E needs to develop #h understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
5=#E has very successfully explored and used a wide variety of ideas, media and
techniques and has developed the confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work
as it progresses.
6=#E has explored and used a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is
beginning to develop the confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it
progresses.
7=#E must explore and use a wider variety if ideas, media and techniques in order
to develop greater confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work.

COMMENTS: Art5 - Communication

1=#N is able to communicate confidently about #h work, eloquently using the
appropriate art language.
2=#N is able to communicate well about #h work and uses appropriate art language.
3=When discussing #h work #e must make more effort to use the appropriate art
language.
4=#N finds using appropriate art language quite difficult. #E would benefit from
taking part in class discussion to enable #m to use the correct terminology more
fluently.

COMMENTS: Art6 - Targets

1=#E should aim to maintain the high quality of #h work next year.
2=I hope #e can sustain #h current interest in and enthusiasm towards art.
3=I hope #e can maintain #h determination to use and understand all aspects of the
work.
4=An excellent effort, with great rewards!
5=#E should aim to increase #h confidence by making an effort to be more involved
in class discussion.
6=#E should try to take a more positive attitude to #h work.
7=#E should make an effort to be more actively involved during lessons.
8=#E should aim to produce #h best work at all times.
9=#E needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
10=#N needs to take time to practice the new skills taught.
11=I would like to see #m put more consistent effort into #h homework.
12=#E needs to spend a little more time on #h homework.
13=#E should make an effort to concentrate more during lessons.
14=#N must listen to, read, watch and follow instructions more carefully.
15=I would like to see #m make more effort to avoid being distracted during
lessons.
16=#E should try to improve the presentation of #h work.
17=#E would enjoy and benefit from looking at the work of other artists,
craftspeople and designers either by going to galleries or by looking at specialist
art books.
18=#N should consider opting for art at IGCSE.

COMMENTS: Art7 - Final

1=It has been a pleasure to teach #N. I wish #m all the best for the following
years.
2=A very impressive year. Well done #N!
3=Overall, an impressive year - keep up the good work!
4=Overall, a very good year. Well done #N!
5=Overall, a good year.
6=A reasonable year overall - but #N needs to work on #h areas of weakness next
year.
7=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing in
#h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.

COMMENTS: enthusiasm
1=#N is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen
interest in art and appears to enjoy and understand all aspects of the work.
2=#N is an able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in
art and appears to enjoy and understand most aspects of the work.
3=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.
4=#N is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest and of the
subject and always works with enthusiasm.
5=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught.
6=#N is a friendly student who works with enthusiasm in the art room, and
contributes constructively to class discussion.
7=#N finds the skills of listening to and following instructions difficult.
8=#N works enthusiastically in all areas of art and #h work has improved because of
this.
9=#N enjoys art and this is reflected in #h finished drawings and paintings.

COMMENTS: Improve on
1=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing in
#h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.
2=To improve, should find out, as an extension task, about how famous artists have
used similar materials which will be very useful later on.
3=To improve, #N should continue to practice elements of drawing in #h own time;
focusing on attention to detail and shading.
4=To improve, should practice again the exercises in the elements of drawing in #h
own time; with particular attention to detail and shading.
5=To improve, should try to listen to directions more attentively during lessons.
6=To improve, should try to be more attentive during instructions and lessons.
7=To improve, should try to use time wisely to finish tasks in the time required.
8=To improve, should show by the quality of work and use of class time that #h is
properly engaged in the learning process.
9=To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a source of
inspiration from which to draw.
10=To improve, needs to ensure that each tasks has a finished quality which
requires a sustained effort, and completed preparation work.
11=To improve, needs to continue with practising drawing from observation of
objects.
12=#N needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
13=To improve, should practice again the exercises in the elements of drawing in #h
own time; with particular attention to detail and shading. Visiting art galleries
is also of great benefit as art appreciation becomes increasingly more important
throughout the art program.
14=However, in order to develop further, an attempt to foster better working habits
such as improved application, time-management and organisation are important. #N is
a very capable student who has a lot more to offer if #e puts #h mind to it.
15=To improve, needs to think of more complex ideas, show greater attention to
details and to complete all tasks to a finished quality.
16=To improve, should practise achieving work with some finer details and clearer
sense of design.
17=To improve, and as an extension task, should further research the context of an
art project, including developing an awareness of other artists' works that relate
to the theme.

COMMENTS: Y10 - Jan reports 2018

1=#N has made excellent progress with a range of skills, most recently with the
ceramic project. #E has completed all the tasks to a consistently high standard,
with very strong evidence of drawing skills in the still-life prep sheet. To
improve, ought to discover examples by other artists that relate to #h work in
order to further #h knowledge of Art in general and to gain extra inspiration.
2=#N has made good progress with a range of skills, most recently with the ceramic
project. #E has completed all the tasks to a good standard, with strong evidence of
experimentation and exploration of art media for the still-life prep sheet.
3=#N has made some progress with a range of skills, most recently with the ceramic
project. #E has completed most of the tasks to a reasonable standard, with some
good experiments in the still-life prep sheet. To improve, needs to practise, more
regularly, many of the basic drawing skills; this needs to be done in addition to
lesson time; in #h own time, either at home or come into the art department at
lunchtimes where more support can be offered; such effort would result in more
rapid progress.
4=To improve, ought to revisit some of the exercises on the formal elements and
practise achieving fine and accurate detail in drawing, with the knowledge that #e
can replace some of the still-life "try-outs" on the prep sheet with new and better
ones (which will inevitably raise #h eventual grade).

COMMENTS: Y10 - March 2019

1=#N has made excellent progress with a range of skills, most recently with
collagraph printmaking. #E has completed all the tasks to a consistently high
standard, with very strong evidence of drawing skills in the on going still-life
unit as well as the group sculpture project. To improve, #N ought to discover
examples by other artists that relate to #h work in order to further #h knowledge
of Art in general and to gain extra inspiration.
2=#N has made good progress with a range of skills, most recently with collagraph
printmaking. #E has completed all the tasks to a good standard, with strong
evidence of experimentation and exploration of art media in the ongoing still-life
unit as well as the group sculpture project.
3=#N has made some progress with a range of skills, most recently with collagraph
printmaking. #E has completed most of the tasks to a reasonable standard, with some
good experiments in the on going still-life drawing unit as well as the group
sculpture project.
4=To improve, #N ought to revisit some of the exercises on the formal elements and
practise achieving fine and accurate detail in drawing, with the knowledge that #e
can replace some of the previous still-life “try-outs” with new and improved ones.
5=To improve, #N needs to practise, more regularly, many of the basic drawing
skills; this needs to be done in addition to lesson time; in #h own time, either at
home or come into the art department during frees where more support can be
offered. This would result in more rapid progress.

COMMENTS: Y10 - March 2022

1=#N has made excellent progress in drawing, collage, mixed media and most
recently, ceramics. #E has completed all the tasks to a high standard, with strong
evidence of creativity, experimentation and exploration of media.
2=#N has worked hard on developing #h technical skill and takes constructive
criticism in a positive light.
3=#N collaborated well in the group ceramics project, helping to produce a large
scale, well concieved and constructed stoneware clay piece.
4=The collaborative ceramics project saw #N using #h skills and creativity for the
good of the group - helping them produce one of the most successful pieces based on
the theme of sustainable cities.
5=At the time of writing, #N is planning and carving an ambitous reduction lino
print as part of the printmaking unit.
6=The technical skills that #N is aquiring will create a pool from which #e will
draw when the student led art making (S.L.A.M) begins towards the end of the summer
term. #E will need to concieve, develop and realise an artwork of #h own - in the
media & dimension of #h choosing.
7=To improve, #N should practise, more regularly, observation drawing. This needs
to be done in addition to lesson time. #N should also visit art galleries and read
art journals to broaden #h appreciation and knowledge of artists and art history as
students will be required to demonstrate this influence in their art portfolio and
own artmaking.

COMMENTS: Y11 - march 2022

1=Success in art this year relied greatly on the students ability to autonomously
explore and develop an idea for an artwork, culminating in a resolved final
outcome.
2=#N was very able to rise to this challenge and has produced work of an excellent
level. The level of independence and self drive has been impressive to see at this
age.
3=The Y11 course has allowed #N to freely engage with #h creativity and create art
using traditional techniques, cultivating an appreciation for the creative arts.
4=#N's ability to experiment and explore a chosen theme in a range of media shows a
high appreciation of the creative process.
5=#N needed frequent support with technique and generation of ideas, but was able
to produce a good final outcome at the end of last term.
6=#E is now working towards completing a resolved final artwork before the end of
the course. Time is tight and a high level of commitment to the task will be needed
to achieve a good result.
7=The Y11 course has allowed #N to develop as an artist and I am confident that the
IB art course will suit #h creative drive perfectly.
8=It has been an absolute pleasure to witness #N develop as an artist and creative
thinker, and I am hopeful that #e will continue to engage in visual art by visiting
galleries and keeping a sketchbook for years to come!
9=We hope to exhibit resolved work at the end of the year.

COMMENTS: Y12- IB - Jan 2018

1=#N has made an excellent start to the IB Art course. #N has been courageous to
explore and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the dynamic work
produced with the visiting artist, Bernard Garo. #H is thoroughly committed to
keeping up with deadlines and submitting process portfolio screens (sketchbook
pages) to the best of ability.
2=We have been impressed by the way in which #e has managed the challenging medium
of oil paint and the development of skills in painting is very evident. #N should
feel encouraged and confident about the progress #e has made so far and we
anticipate equal success in the forthcoming ceramics project.
3=To improve, could read more around the subject; gaining a greater awareness of
contemporary artists; keeping notes and making sketches in the mini-notebook that
has been provided.
4=#N has made a very good start to the IB Art course. #N has been courageous to
explore and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the dynamic work
produced with the visiting artist, Bernard Garo.
5=#N is committed to keeping up with deadlines and submitting process portfolio
screens (sketchbook pages) to the best of #h ability. We have been impressed by the
way in which #e has managed three-dimensional elements and the development of
skills with the maquettes for ceramic sculpture.
6=#N should feel encouraged and confident about the progress #e has made so far and
we anticipate equal success in the forthcoming ceramics unit. To improve, could
read more around the subject; gaining a greater awareness of contemporary artists;
keeping notes and making sketches in the mini-notebook that has been provided.
7=The key for #N to improve lies in #h process journal work. #N does many pages but
often #e skims over the surface of the investigation. #E needs to go deeper, use a
wider range of resources, include a critical analysis, explore the context and
ideas behind a work to reveal why it is significant or what was its function.
8=#N needs to see and engage with art more; #e should visit galleries, read art
magazines and books from the library. This deeper level of research and engagement
with art will then help #m to be a more critical thinker and develop significant
ideas for #h own art making.
9=#H's process pages have improved significantly. #E now understands clearly the
expectations and presented an outstanding selection of pages for #h final grade.
10=As #e continues in the class I encourage #h to consider new ways to present #h
process pages so that they have more flow and are more easily read.
11=In #h IWB #e does need to go back through #h book and make #h selected pages
stronger responding to the feedback given.

COMMENTS: Y12- IB - March 2019

1=#N has made an excellent start to the IB Art course. #N has been courageous to
explore and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the dynamic work
produced with the visiting artist, Bernard Garo. #E is thoroughly committed to
keeping up with deadlines and submitting process portfolio screens (sketchbook
pages) to the best of ability.
2=We have been impressed by the way in which #e has managed the challenging medium
of oil paint and the development of skills in painting is very evident. #N should
feel encouraged and confident about the progress #e has made so far and we
anticipate equal success in the forthcoming ceramics project.
3=To improve, could read more around the subject; gaining a greater awareness of
contemporary artists; keeping notes and making sketches in the mini-notebook that
has been provided.
4=#N has made a very good start to the IB Art course. #N has been courageous to
explore and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the dynamic work
produced with the visiting artist, Bernard Garo.
5=#N is committed to keeping up with deadlines and submitting process portfolio
screens (sketchbook pages) to the best of #h ability.
6=#N should feel encouraged and confident about the progress #e has made so far and
we anticipate equal success in the forthcoming ceramics unit. To improve, could
read more around the subject; gaining a greater awareness of contemporary artists;
keeping notes and making sketches in the mini-notebook that has been provided.
7=The key for #N to improve lies in #h process journal work. #N's pages can often
skim over the surface of the investigation. #E needs to go deeper, use a wider
range of resources, include a critical analysis, explore the context and ideas
behind a work to reveal why it is significant or what was its function.
8=#N needs to see and engage with art more; #e should visit galleries, read art
magazines and books from the library. This deeper level of research and engagement
with art will then help #m to be a more critical thinker and develop significant
ideas for #h own art making.
9=#H's process pages have improved significantly. #E now understands clearly the
expectations and presented a very good page recently for the oil painting unit.
10=As #e continues in the class I encourage #h to consider new ways to present #h
process pages so that they have more flow and are more easily read.
11=Whenever time allows, #h should go back through #h book and make selected
process pages stronger by responding to the feedback given.
12=As #N matures creatively and in critical thinking skills, #h should continuously
revisit and upgrade #h process pages to reflect this higher level ability for
analysis.
13=#N must be more respectful of deadlines, time management and organisation are
key skills we aim to develop over the course.

COMMENTS: Y12- IB - March 2022

1=#N has made an excellent start to the IB Art course. #N has been courageous to
explore and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the dynamic work
produced in the Collograph unit.
2=#N has made a good start to the IB Art Course. #N has been courageous to explore
and experiment with new and challenging media, such as the recent work produced in
the Collograph unit.
3=We were also impressed by the way in which #e managed the also new and difficult
medium of oil paint and the development of skills in painting is very evident. #N
should feel encouraged and confident about the progress #e has made so far and we
anticipate equal success in the forthcoming ceramics project, which will produce a
third potential final outcome for the exhibition component worth 40% of the final
assessment.
4=#N should feel encouraged by the progress #e has made so far and we anticipate
the same, if not higher, level of achievement in the current ceramics unit, which
will produce a third potential final for the exhibition component worth 40% of the
final assessment grade.
5=#N's process pages have been constructed with careful consideration of the
criteria, and with each submission, we see that #e is better able to analyse,
evaluate and demonstrate concepts through language and appropriate visuals. This
places #N in a strong position as the PP pages are worth 40% of the final grade.
6=#H's process pages have improved significantly. #E now understands clearly the
expectations with regard to the criteria, and presented a very good page recently
for the Collograph unit.
7=#N needs to dedicate much more time to #h process pages work, which are also
worth 40% of the final assessment. #N's pages can often skim over the surface of
the investigation, and not respond to the criteria. #E needs to go deeper, use a
wider range of resources, include more critical analysis, explore the context and
ideas behind a work to reveal why it is significant to #h own explorations in art
making.
8=Whenever time allows, #e should go back through #h book and make selected process
pages stronger by responding to the feedback given.
9=To further benefit #N's chances of success, #e needs to see and engage with real
artworks more; #e should visit galleries in order to gain a greater awareness of
contemporary art, read art magazines and books from the library, keeping notes and
making sketches in the mini notebook provided. This deeper level of research and
engagement with art will then help #m to be a more critical thinker and develop
meaningful ideas for #h own art making.
10=We will soon be introducing the Comparative Study unit which requires the
students to compare and analyse 2-3 artworks from a diverse background. The wider
the range of art #N has been engaging with, the greater chance #e has at success in
this component which is worth 20%.
11=Overall, an excellent year so far in IB Art higher.
12=Overall, a good year so far, with many more chances to grow and develop
technically and conceptually as an artist.
13=Overall, a fair start, with more focus and commitment, progress will start to
soar!

COMMENTS: Y7 June 2021 - generic

1=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught. #E has explored and used
a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is beginning to develop the
confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it progresses. Above all, #e
clearly enjoys the subject and appreciates the creative process which is tantamount
to success.
2=Recently #N completed a highly imaginative and skillfully made self portrait
painting. This went a long way in developing #h colour mixing and paint application
proficiency.
3=Recently #N completed an imaginative self portrait painting in gouache. This went
a long way in developing #h colour mixing and paint application proficiency.
4=Recently #N completed a self portrait in gouache paint and while #e found colour
mixing and brush work challenging #e nonetheless managed to finish a fine painting.
5=Currently #e is working diligently on a challenging lino printing unit, following
a complex sequence of instructions #e is managing to create a very successful print
using the press, which #e should be commended for!
6=Currently #e is working diligently on the challenging lino printing unit,
following a complex sequence of instructions #e is managing to create a fairly good
print using the press, which is not an easy task!
7=Currently #e is working on the challenging lino printing unit, and is finding
following the complex sequence of instructions difficult. With appropriate support
#e is managing to create a fairly good print using the press, which #e should be
commended for!
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
9=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught. #E has explored and used
a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is beginning to develop the
confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it progresses. #N needs to take
more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and more polished final
pieces.
10=#N needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
11=With consideration of all units covered this year, I found #h #arttopicsy7 work
#h strongest.
12=#N has kept #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed images and comments
which demonstrate excellent understanding of technique and concept.
13=#N has kept #h e-portfolio mostly up to date with well photographed images and
comments which demonstrate sound understanding of technique and concept.
14=#N has not managed to keep #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed
images and comments so this must be a target for next year. The upkeeping of a
digital portfolio is excellent preparation for a possible vocation in the arts, as
well as good ICT practice.
15=#N would enjoy and benefit from visiting art galleries (now that they are open
again!) as art appreciation becomes increasingly more important throughout the
middle school art program.
16=#N has completed all projects this year to a very high standard. #E has
impressed me with #h engagement and ability in acquiring new skills and making
artworks.
17=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing
in #h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.
18=Overall, a very good year. Well done #N!
19=To work on next year, #N should place #s at the front of the class during
demonstrations and listen very carefully to instructions.
20=#N must remember to not talk during demonstrations and instructions as this can
be very distracting for the group as well as waste time at the start of the task.

COMMENTS: Y7 June 2022 - generic

1=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught. #E has explored and used
a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is beginning to develop the
confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it progresses. Above all, #e
clearly enjoys the subject and appreciates the creative process which is tantamount
to success.
2=Recently #N completed a highly imaginative and skillfully made self portrait
painting. This went a long way in developing #h colour mixing and paint application
proficiency.
3=Recently #N completed an imaginative self portrait painting in gouache. This went
a long way in developing #h colour mixing and paint application proficiency.
4=Recently #N completed a self portrait in gouache paint and while #e found colour
mixing and brush work challenging #e nonetheless managed to finish a fine painting.
5=Currently #e is working diligently on a challenging lino printing unit, following
a complex sequence of instructions #e is managing to create a very successful print
using the press, which #e should be commended for!
6=Currently #e is working diligently on the challenging lino printing unit,
following a complex sequence of instructions #e is managing to create a fairly good
print using the press, which is not an easy task!
7=Currently #e is working on the challenging lino printing unit, and is finding
following the complex sequence of instructions difficult. With appropriate support
#e is managing to create a fairly good print using the press, which #e should be
commended for!
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
9=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught. #E has explored and used
a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is beginning to develop the
confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it progresses. #N needs to take
more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and more polished final
pieces.
10=#N needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
11=With consideration of all units covered this year, I found #h #arttopicsy7 work
#h strongest.
12=#N has kept #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed images and comments
which demonstrate excellent understanding of technique and concept.
13=#N has kept #h e-portfolio mostly up to date with well photographed images and
comments which demonstrate sound understanding of technique and concept.
14=#N has not managed to keep #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed
images and comments so this must be a target for next year. The upkeeping of a
digital portfolio is excellent preparation for a possible vocation in the arts, as
well as good ICT practice.
15=#N would enjoy and benefit from visiting art galleries (now that they are open
again!) as art appreciation becomes increasingly more important throughout the
middle school art program.
16=#N has completed all projects this year to a very high standard. #E has
impressed me with #h engagement and ability in acquiring new skills and making
artworks.
17=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing
in #h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.
18=Overall, a very good year. Well done #N!
19=To work on next year, #N should place #s at the front of the class during
demonstrations and listen very carefully to instructions.
20=#N must remember to not talk during demonstrations and instructions as this can
be very distracting for the group as well as waste time at the start of the task.

COMMENTS: Y7B June 2022 - generic

1=#N has achieved art work of an excellent standard that shows a clear
understanding and a successful command of the formal elements; both in drawing and
with paint.
2=#N has achieved art work of a very good standard that demontstrates growing
understanding and improving command of the formal elements; both in drawing and
with paint.
3=#N has achieved art work of a good standard that demonstrates growing
understanding and improving command of the formal elements; both in drawing and
with paint.
4=#N has explored and used a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is
developing the confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it progresses.
Above all, #e clearly enjoys the subject and engages with the creative process
which is key to success.
5=#N has explored and used a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is
beginning to develop the confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it
progresses. Above all, #e clearly enjoys the subject and engages with the creative
process which is key to success.
6=#N completed a highly imaginative and skillfully made ceramic coral reef, which
went a long way in developing #h skills and proficiency in working with clay.
7=#N concieved and completed an imaginative and well made ceramic coral reef which
went a long way in developing #h skills and proficiency in working with clay.
8=Currently #e is working diligently on a challenging lino printing unit, following
a complex sequence of instructions, #e is managing to create a very successful
print using the press, which #e should be commended for!
9=Currently #e is working well on the challenging lino printing unit, following a
complex sequence of instructions #e is managing to create a fairly good print using
the press, which is not an easy task!
10=Currently #e is working on the challenging lino printing unit, and is finding
following the complex sequence of instructions difficult. With appropriate support
#e is managing to create a fairly good print using the press, which #e should be
commended for!
11=#N must remember to not talk during demonstrations and instructions as this can
be very distracting for the group as well as sigificantly hinder #h own progress.
12=#N would enjoy and benefit from visiting art galleries as art appreciation
becomes increasingly more important throughout the middle school art program.
13=Overall, an excellent year. Well done #N!
14=Overall, a very good year. Well done #N!
15=Overall, a good year. Well done #N!
16=#N has kept #h e-portfolio mostly up to date with well photographed images and
comments which demonstrate sound understanding of technique and concept.
17=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing
in #h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.
18=#N has kept #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed images and comments
which demonstrate excellent understanding of technique and concept.
19=#N has not managed to keep #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed
images and comments so this must be a target for next year. The upkeeping of a
digital portfolio is excellent preparation for a possible vocation in the arts, as
well as good ICT practice.
20=#N needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.

COMMENTS: Y7E June 2022 - generic

1=#N has achieved art work of an excellent standard that shows a clear
understanding and a successful command of the formal elements; both in drawing and
with paint.
2=#N has achieved art work of a very good standard that shows a clear understanding
and an ever improving command of the formal elements; both in drawing and with
paint.
3=#N has achieved art work of a good standard that shows a growing understanding
and command of the formal elements; both in drawing and with paint.
4=#E has explored and used a wide variety of ideas, media and techniques and is
beginning to develop the confidence to review, modify and enhance #h work as it
progresses. Above all, #e seems to enjoy the subject and engages with the creative
process which is crucial to achieving success.
5=#N completed a highly imaginative and skillfully made ceramic creature, which
developed #h skills and proficiency in working with clay.
6=#N concieved and completed an imaginative and skillfully made ceramic creature,
which developed #h skills in working with clay.
7=Currently #e is working diligently on a painting project exploring the phenomena
of atmospheric perspective which requires subtle colour mixing, and careful brush
work.
8=Currently #e is working well on a painting exploring the phenomena of atmospheric
perspective which requires subtle colour mixing, and careful brush work.
9=#N needs to take more time over tasks to ensure a higher level of control and
more polished final pieces.
10=#N would enjoy and benefit from visiting art galleries as art appreciation
becomes increasingly more important throughout the middle school art programme and
beyond.
11=In preparation for next year, I would recommend practicing elements of drawing
in #h own time; such as observational drawing, focusing on attention to detail and
shading.
12=Overall, an excellent year. Well done #N!
13=Overall, a very good year. Well done #N!
14=Overall, a good year. Well done #N!
15=#N has kept #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed images and comments
which demonstrate excellent understanding of technique and concept.
16=#N has kept #h e-portfolio mostly up to date with well photographed images and
comments which demonstrate sound understanding of technique and concept.
17=#N has not managed to keep #h e-portfolio up to date with well photographed
images and comments so this must be a target for next year. The upkeeping of a
digital portfolio is excellent preparation for a possible vocation in the arts, as
well as good ICT practice.
18=#N must remember to not talk during demonstrations and instructions as this can
be very distracting for the group as well as sigificantly hinder progress.

COMMENTS: Y8 - Enthusiasm 2020

1=It has been a pleasure to teach #N this year. #E is an extremely able, friendly
and valuable member of the group who takes a keen interest in art and appears to
enjoy and understand all aspects of the work.
2=#N is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen
interest in art and appears to enjoy and understand all aspects of the work.
3=#E also contributes constructively to class discussion, which is always
appreciated.
4=#N is an able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in
art and appears to enjoy and understand most aspects of the work.
5=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.
6=#N is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest and of the
subject and always works with enthusiasm.
7=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays interest in the subject and
demonstrates a growing understanding of the skills taught.
8=#N is a friendly student who works with enthusiasm in the art room, and
contributes constructively to class discussion.
9=#N finds the skills of listening to and following instructions difficult.
10=#N works enthusiastically in all areas of art and #h work has improved because
of this.

COMMENTS: Y8 - Part 1 2020

1=#N is currently completing a successful logo design project, displaying excellent
technical ability and trouble shooting in Adobe Illustrator. #E also demonstrated
excellent skills (drawing and creative thinking) during the design process
sessions. Completing this all during our online learning period has been a
testament to #N's self discipline and autonomy.
2=#N is currently completing a well conceived logo design project, displaying good
technical ability and trouble shooting in Adobe Illustrator. #E also demonstrated
good skills (drawing and creative thinking) during the design process sessions.
Completing this all during our online learning period has been a testament to #N's
self discipline and autonomy.
3=#N is currently completing a good logo design project, displaying improving
technical ability and trouble shooting in Adobe Illustrator. #E also demonstrated
sound skills (drawing and creative thinking) during the design process sessions.
Completing this all during our online learning period has been a a challenge for
#N, not succeeding in uploading all assignments. Overall, and considering the
unique times we have been experiencing, #N has done very well to keep up with
tasks.

COMMENTS: Y8 - part 2 positive for excellent student 2020

1=#N has worked hard on all projects this year, but I was especially impressed with
#h #arttopicsy8 work.
2=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h code of analysis assignment, the objective of which was
to learn how to reference the formal elements while talking about an artwork.
3=#N drew a successful observational drawing of a pumpkin. #E shows a strong
understanding of the formal elements, form and tone. Which is brilliant, as it is
not easy to master.
4=#N demonstrates close attention to detail and excellent presentation within #h
sketchbook, well done! It is always a pleasure to look through.

COMMENTS: Y8 - part 2 positive for excellent student 2021

1=#N has worked hard on all projects this year, but I was especially impressed with
#h #arttopicsy8 work.
2=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h code of analysis assignment, the objective of which was
to learn how to reference the formal elements while talking about an artwork.
3=#N drew a successful observational drawing of a skull. #E shows a strong
understanding of the formal elements, form and tone. Which is brilliant, as it is
not easy to master.
4=#N demonstrates close attention to detail and excellent presentation within #h
sketchbook, well done! It is always a pleasure to look through.

COMMENTS: Y8 - part 3 for all 2020

1=To improve, #N should continue to practice elements of drawing in #h own time;
focusing on attention to detail and shading.
2=To improve, #N #Y8target as this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
3=In addition, #e completed a successful artist research project and subsequent
work in gouache, displaying very good technical ability. To improve, #N #Y8target
as this will be good preparation for the Y9 art program.
4=In addition, #N completed a good cultural research project and subsequent work in
gouache, displaying sound technical ability. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will
be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
5=In addition, #e completed a competent cultural research project and subsequent
work in gouache, displaying adequate technical ability. #To improve, #N #Y8target
as this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.

COMMENTS: Y8 - part 3 for all 2021

1=To improve, #N should continue to practice elements of drawing in #h own time;
focusing on attention to detail and shading.
2=To improve, #N #Y8target as this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
3=In addition, #e completed a successful artist research project and subsequent
work in gouache, displaying very good technical ability. To improve, #N #Y8target
as this will be good preparation for the Y9 art program.
4=In addition, #N completed a good cultural research project and subsequent work in
gouache, displaying sound technical ability. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will
be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
5=In addition, #e completed a competent cultural research project and subsequent
work in gouache, displaying adequate technical ability. #To improve, #N #Y8target
as this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.

COMMENTS: Y8 june 2018

1=#N completed a very successful cultural research project and subsequent work in
watercolour, displaying excellent technical ability. In addition, #e has worked
very well in the current group collage unit, whilst learning much more about the
collage technique used by the artist Henri Matisse. To improve, #N #Y8target as
this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
2=#N completed a successful cultural research project and subsequent work in
watercolour, displaying very good technical ability. In addition, #e has worked
well in the current group collage unit, whilst learning much more about the collage
technique used by the artist Henri Matisse. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will
be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
3=#N completed a good cultural research project and subsequent work in watercolour,
displaying sound technical ability. In addition, #e has worked hard in the current
group collage unit, whilst learning much more about the collage technique used by
the artist Henri Matisse. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will be a focus in the
Year 9 art program.
4=#N completed a competent cultural research project and subsequent work in
watercolour, displaying adequate technical ability. In addition, #e has made much
progress in the current group collage unit, whilst learning much more about the
collage technique used by the artist Henri Matisse. To improve, #N #Y8target as
this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
5=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h code of analysis assignment.
6=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative code of
analysis project was excellent.
7=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.

COMMENTS: Y8 Positives
1=#H strongest work this year was #h ceramic work, a strength #e will be able to
develop next year in the longer art program.
2=Indeed, #h logo work was the best work #e made this year, showing clear
engagement and commitment to the task.
3=#H strongest work this year was #h neo colour drawing, a strength #e will be able
to develop next year in the longer art program.
4=#N also demonstrates close attention to detail and excellent presentation within
#h sketchbook, well done! It is always a pleasure to look through.

COMMENTS: Y8 Positives- May 2019

1=#H strongest work this year was #h ceramic work, a strength #e will be able to
develop next year in the longer art program.
2=Indeed, #h logo work was the best work #e made this year, showing clear
engagement and commitment to the task.
3=#H strongest work this year was #h neo colour drawing, a strength #e will be able
to develop next year in the longer art program.
4=#N also demonstrates close attention to detail and excellent presentation within
#h sketchbook, well done! It is always a pleasure to look through.

COMMENTS: Y8- 2021

1=#N demonstrates an excellent understanding and competency of the skills and
concepts taught this year, including: an observational study of a skull in neo
colour I, a gouache painting, an art appreciation task and the current logo design
unit using adobe illustrator.
2=#N demonstrates a very good understanding and competency of the skills and
concepts taught this year, including: an observational study of a skull in neo
colour I, a gouache painting, an art appreciation task and the current logo design
unit using adobe illustrator.
3=#N demonstrates a growing understanding and competency of the skills and concepts
taught this year, including: an observational study of a skull in neo colour I, a
gouache painting, an art appreciation task and the current logo design unit using
adobe illustrator.
4=Of particular note, #N's drawing of a skull revealed a capacity to render form,
colour and tone using neo colour I. Which is brilliant, as it is not easy to
master.
5=#N also completed a very successful gouache painting that showed a strong
competency in painting, with very good technical ability and sensitivity to colour
mixing.
6=#N also completed a good gouache painting that showed a developing competency in
painting, allowing for progress in technical ability and colour mixing.
7=The art appreciation unit allowed for #N to learn about the life and work of a
contemporary global artist.
8=#H artists poster was impeccably presented and the analysis and biography very
well written.
9=#H artists poster was well presented and the analysis and biography indicated
appreciation and understanding of the work and life of the artist.
10=In addition, #N is highly engaged in the current logo design unit which I
predict will have a successful outcome.
11=#N is currently keeping up to date with #h logo design research.
12=Unfortunately #e is currently not keeping up to date with #h logo design
research so needs to work on organisation.
13=To improve, visiting art galleries with a sketch book can increase knowledge of
techniques and help fuel future ideas.
14=I would also recommend to carry a sketch book and practice conceptual drawing as
well as observation drawing of objects or people.
15=Overall, an excellent year, well done #N!
16=Overall a good year, well done #N.

COMMENTS: Y8- comments june 2018

1=#N completed a very successful artists study project that shows a strong
appreciation of art history and analysis , #h water colour study was also very well
executed. In addition, #e has worked very well in the challenging lino printing
unit, whilst learning much more about the design and printing processes.
2=#N completed a successful artists study project that shows a good appreciation of
art history and analysis , #h water colour study was also well executed. In
addition, #e has worked well in the challenging lino printing unit, whilst learning
much more about the design and printing processes.
3=#N completed a good artists study project that shows an evolving appreciation of
art history and analysis , #h water colour study was fairly well executed, but
lacked attention to finer detail and colour mixing. In addition, #N has worked
diligently in the challenging lino printing unit, whilst learning much more about
the design and printing processes.
4=To improve, #N needs to spend more time gathering visual resources and planning
out ideas in the sketchbook, as this leads to more fulfilling and interesting art
work.
5=To improve, #N needs to continue with practising drawing from observation,
perhaps carrying a small sketch book around in the summer, as this will be a focus
in the Year 9 program.
6=To improve, #N needs to allocate more time to art research homework assignments
and take more care presenting work in #h sketchbook.
7=All in all #N has completed all projects this year to a very high standard. #E
has impressed me with #h engagement and ability in both analysing and making
artworks. #N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real
interest in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. Wishing #m an
excellent summer!
8=All in all #N has completed all projects this year to a good standard. #E is an
able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest in the
subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. Wishing #m an excellent
summer!
9=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
10=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative
#arttopicsy7 project was excellent.
11=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially
impressed with the high-quality of #h #arttopicsy8 assignment.
12=#N completed a successful watercolour painting that shows an appreciation of the
medium, with good technical ability and use of transparency. In addition has worked
very well in the collaborative ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the
physical nature of clay and how to sculpt with it. To improve, #N needs to continue
with practising drawing from observation of objects - as this will be a focus in
the Year 9 program.
13=#N has completed an impressive and challenging study of a portrait in gouache
paint that shows very good technical skill and strong appreciation of the chosen
medium. In addition, is highly engaged in the current #arttopicsy9 unit which I
predict will have a successful outcome.
14=#N has completed an impressive and challenging study of a portrait in gouache
paint that shows very good technical skill and strong appreciation of the chosen
medium. In addition, is highly engaged in the current #arttopicsy9 unit which I
predict will have a successful outcome.

COMMENTS: Y8- Comments June 2019

1=#N completed a very successful logo design project, displaying #Choose-level-Y8
technical ability in Adobe Illustrator, as well as demonstrating #Skill-level-Y8
skills (drawing and creative thinking) during the design process sessions.
2=In addition, #e has worked #hasworkedY8 in the recent Art Analysis & Appreciation
unit, the objective of which is to learn how to reference the formal elements while
talking about art.
3=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative
#arttopicsy8 project was excellent.
4=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h #arttopicsy8 assignment.
5=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
6=#N is a creative young person who has the patience and discipline needed to
produce a good work of art.
7=#N is developing an appreciation of how much patience and discipline is required
to produce a good work of art.
8=#N must spend more time planning a work, as all good art comes from a creative
process. #E still rushes to get the end of a project, much to the detriment of the
finished quality.

COMMENTS: Y8- comments june2016

1=#N completed a very successful watercolour painting that shows a strong
appreciation of the medium, with very good technical ability and use of
transparency. In addition, #e has worked very well in the collaborative ceramics
unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay and how to sculpt
with it. To improve, #N needs to continue with practising drawing from observation
of objects - as this will be a focus in the Year 9 program.
2=#N completed a successful watercolour painting that shows an appreciation of the
medium, with good technical ability and use of transparency. In addition has worked
very well in the collaborative ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the
physical nature of clay and how to sculpt with it. To improve, #N needs to continue
with practising drawing from observation of objects - as this will be a focus in
the Year 9 program.
3=#N completed a watercolour painting that shows an appreciation of the medium,
with acceptable technical ability and some use of transparency. In addition, #e has
worked well in the collaborative ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the
physical nature of clay and how to sculpt with it. To improve, #N needs to continue
with practising drawing from observation of objects - as this will be a focus in
the Year 9 program.
4=has completed all projects this year to a very high standard. #E has impressed me
with #h engagement and ability in both analysing and making artworks. #N is an able
and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest in the subject
and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.
5=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h #arttopicsy7 assignment.
6=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative
#arttopicsy7 project was excellent.
7=#N has completed an impressive and challenging study of a portrait in gouache
paint that shows very good technical skill and strong appreciation of the chosen
medium. In addition, is highly engaged in the current #arttopicsy9 unit which I
predict will have a successful outcome.
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.

COMMENTS: Y8- commentsjune2016 Sample project-work sentences

1=#N completed a very successful watercolour painting that shows a strong
appreciation of the medium, with very good technical ability and use of
transparency. In addition, #e has worked very well in the collaborative ceramics
unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay and how to sculpt
with it. To improve, #N needs to continue with practising drawing from observation
of objects - as this will be a focus in the Year 9 program.
2=#N completed a successful watercolour painting that shows an appreciation of the
medium, with good technical ability and use of transparency. In addition has worked
very well in the collaborative ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the
physical nature of clay and how to sculpt with it. To improve, #N needs to continue
with practising drawing from observation of objects - as this will be a focus in
the Year 9 program.
3=#N completed a watercolour painting that shows an appreciation of the medium,
with acceptable technical ability and some use of transparency. In addition, #e has
worked well in the collaborative ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the
physical nature of clay and how to sculpt with it. To improve, #N needs to continue
with practising drawing from observation of objects - as this will be a focus in
the Year 9 program.
4=has completed all projects this year to a very high standard. #E has impressed me
with #h engagement and ability in both analysing and making artworks. #N is an able
and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest in the subject
and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.
5=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h #arttopicsy7 assignment.
6=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative
#arttopicsy7 project was excellent.
7=#N has completed an impressive and challenging study of a portrait in gouache
paint that shows very good technical skill and strong appreciation of the chosen
medium. In addition, is highly engaged in the current #arttopicsy9 unit which I
predict will have a successful outcome.
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.

COMMENTS: Y8- commentsjune2017

1=#N completed a very successful cultural research project and subsequent work in
Biro, displaying excellent technical ability. In addition, #e has worked very well
in the ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay
and how to sculpt with it using the slab technique. To improve, #N #Y8target as
this will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
2=#N completed a successful cultural research project and subsequent work in Biro,
displaying very good technical ability. In addition, #e has worked well in the
ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay and how
to sculpt with it using the slab technique. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will
be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
3=#N completed a good cultural research project and subsequent work in Biro,
displaying sound technical ability. In addition, #e has worked hard in the ceramics
unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay and how to sculpt
with it using the slab technique. To improve, #N #Y8target as this will be a focus
in the Year 9 art program.
4=#N completed a competent cultural research project and subsequent work in Biro,
displaying adequate technical ability. In addition, #e has made much progress in
the ceramics unit, whilst learning much more about the physical nature of clay and
how to sculpt with it using the slab technique. To improve, #N #Y8target as this
will be a focus in the Year 9 art program.
5=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed
with the high-quality of #h #arttopicsy8 assignment.
6=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative
#arttopicsy8 project was excellent.
7=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.
8=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest
in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. #E demonstrates a good
understanding of the skills and concepts taught so far.

COMMENTS: Y9 2019
1=#N has effectively understood the grid method, creating a remarkable self-
portrait on a larger scale. #N shows a strong ability with colour mixing and a
clear understanding of tonal values, whilst using acrylic paint for this project.
2=#N has understood the grid method, creating an effective self-portrait on a
larger scale. #N shows a sound ability with colour mixing and understanding tonal
values whilst using acrylic paint for this project.
3=#N has understood the grid method to a certain level, allowing #h to create a
self-portrait on a larger scale. #N shows an appreciation for colour mixing. #N's
research and preparation work within #h sketchbook was interesting but could have
been developed in more depth.
4=#N's research and preparation work within #h sketchbook is strong. It is always a
pleasure to look through.
5=#N's research and preparation work within #h sketchbook is also of a good
standard.
6=#N has been very successful with learning new skills in ceramics, creating a head
and shoulder representation of a family member. #H piece shows considerable
understanding in construction, proportions and design. #H ability to concentrate
and complete all tasks to the best of #h ability is remarkable.
7=#N has been successful with learning new skills in ceramics, creating a head and
shoulder representation of a family member. #H piece shows good understanding in
construction, proportions and design. #H ability to complete all tasks to a
consistently good standard is most encouraging.
8=#N has achieved some success learning new skills in ceramics, creating a head and
shoulder representation of a family member. #H shows reasonable attempt in
construction and design.

COMMENTS: Year 8 Jan 2017

1=#N has achieved work of a high standard that shows a considerable wealth of ideas
and a very strong command of a broad range of media for the theme of "well-being"
and mindfulness. #H ability to concentrate and complete all tasks to the best of #h
ability is impressive. To improve, and as an extension task, should further
research the context of an art project, including developing an awareness of other
artists' works that relate to the theme.
2=#N has achieved work of a good standard that shows a number of relevant ideas and
a strong command of a broad range of media for the theme of "well-being" and
mindfulness. #H ability to complete all tasks to a consistently good standard is
most encouraging. To improve, should practise achieving work with some finer
details and clearer sense of design.
3=#N has mainly achieved work of a reasonable standard that shows a number of
ideas, with partial success with some of the media that was used for the theme of
"well-being" and mindfulness. To improve, needs to think of more complex ideas,
show greater attention to details and to complete all tasks to a finished quality.

COMMENTS: Year 8 Jan 2018

1=#N has achieved work of a high standard, #h ceramic tile was well planned and
constructed demonstrating a high level of skill, creativity and discipline. To
improve, and as an extension task, #N should further research the context of an art
project, including developing an awareness of other artists' works that relate to
the theme.
2=#N has achieved work of a good standard, #h ceramic tile was fairly well planned
and constructed demonstrating a good level of skill, creativity and discipline. To
improve, needs to develop more complex ideas, show greater attention to details and
spend more time looking at visual resources that help planning the design.
3=#N has achieved work of a reasonable standard, #h ceramic tile design was under
developed, the tile itself demonstrating limited technical ability working with
clay. To improve, needs to develop more complex ideas, show greater attention to
details, to complete all tasks to a finished quality and spend more time looking at
visual resources that help planning the design.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - Jan 2017

1=#N is well able to research and plan demonstrating the ability to order thoughts
through text and image confidently, as well as choosing the appropriate skills and
techniques. #H mixed media work was a real success, proving #m to be most capable
of more self driven and conceptual work, more alike work done by IGCSE art
students.
2=#N has completed all work to a very good standard. #H self portrait demonstrated
clear understanding of the proportions of the face and good shading skills. The
self directed mixed media work was well planned, demonstrating commitment to the
task.
3=This has been a most encouraging start to the year 9 art program. To improve,
whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a source of inspiration
from which to draw.
4=#N has completed all work to a good standard. #H self portrait demonstrated sound
understanding of the proportions of the face and good shading skills. The self
directed mixed media work was quite well planned, demonstrating commitment to the
task.
5=This has been an encouraging start to the year 9 art program. To improve,
whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a pool of inspiration from
which to draw.
6=#N has not yet demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst the idea was
good, did not complete a fully resolved mixed media final piece. I am hopeful that
#e will have a more positive attitude towards art making and planning next
semester.
7=This has been a discouraging start to the year 9 art program. To improve,
whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a pool of inspiration from
which to draw.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - Jan 2018

1=This has been a most encouraging start to the year 9 art program.
2=#N has completed all work to a very good standard. #H work on the Eduki project
was well planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to the
group initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend time planning the designs
and gathering visual resources in order to ensure equal success in the forthcoming
ceramics project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries which will
provide a source of inspiration from which to draw.
3=#N has completed all work to a good standard. #H work on the Eduki project was
well planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to the group
initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend time planning the designs and
gathering visual resources in order to ensure success in the forthcoming ceramics
project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a
source of inspiration from which to draw.
4=#N has not yet demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst #h ideas
might be good, momentum and effort is sporadic, resulting in unresolved art works.
I am hopeful that #e will have a more positive attitude towards art making and
planning in the forthcoming ceramics unit. Quality time needs to be spent planning
and gathering visual resources, as well as deliberate focus on practical tasks
during the lesson.
5=#N has completed all work to a reasonable standard. #H work on the Eduki project
was sufficiently planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to
the group initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend more time planning the
designs and gathering visual resources in order to ensure success in the
forthcoming ceramics project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries
which will provide a source of inspiration from which to draw.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - June 2018

1=This has been a most encouraging start to the year 9 art program.
2=#N has completed all work to a very good standard. #H work on the Eduki project
was well planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to the
group initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend time planning the designs
and gathering visual resources in order to ensure equal success in the forthcoming
ceramics project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries which will
provide a source of inspiration from which to draw.
3=#N has completed all work to a good standard. #H work on the Eduki project was
well planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to the group
initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend time planning the designs and
gathering visual resources in order to ensure success in the forthcoming ceramics
project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries which will provide a
source of inspiration from which to draw.
4=#N has not yet demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst #h ideas
might be good, momentum and effort is sporadic, resulting in unresolved art works.
I am hopeful that #e will have a more positive attitude towards art making and
planning in the forthcoming ceramics unit. Quality time needs to be spent planning
and gathering visual resources, as well as deliberate focus on practical tasks
during the lesson.
5=#N has completed all work to a reasonable standard. #H work on the Eduki project
was sufficiently planned and conceived demonstrating commitment to the task, and to
the group initiative. #E must be sure to continue to spend more time planning the
designs and gathering visual resources in order to ensure success in the
forthcoming ceramics project. To improve, whenever possible visit art galleries
which will provide a source of inspiration from which to draw.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - June 2019

1=#N has completed all work to a very good standard this year. #H mixed media print
work was inventive and well composed, which proves that #e adapts well to new media
and techniques, as well as likes to experiment with colour and pattern . has been
very successful by learning new skills in ceramics with a vase that shows intricate
skills in construction and design, although due to school clos #E has coped well
with the online learning tasks, being on time to the meets and turning in work on
time.
2=#N has completed all work to good standard. #H ceramic tile was well planned and
made demonstrating commitment to the task, as well gaining experience of glazing.
#E is now working hard on the selfie painting which will be our final unit, the
results of which will be exhibited in the June art exhibition. To improve, whenever
possible visit art galleries which will provide a source of inspiration from which
to draw. Overall a good year, well done!
3=#N has not demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst #h ideas might
be good, momentum and effort is sporadic, resulting in unresolved art works. I am
hopeful that #e will have a more positive attitude during the current selfie
painting unit. Although final results have not been satisfactory, #N has gained
valuable experience, appreciation and knowledge of ceramics, printing and painting
techniques, that #e can draw from in the future.
4=I hope that #N will continue to practise drawing from observation, visit
galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and/or contemporary.
5=The tasks have been based on developing drawing skills and #N has demonstrated
very good ability and skill in observation drawing and shading.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - June 2020

1=#N has completed all work to a very good standard this year. #H mixed media print
work was inventive and well composed, which proves that #e adapts well to new media
and techniques, as well as enjoying experimenting with colour and pattern . #N has
been very successful in learning new skills in ceramics with a vase that shows
intricate skills in construction and design, although due to school closure the
glazing has yet to be finished.
2=I hope that #N will continue to practice drawing from observation, visit
galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and/or contemporary.
3=I would recommend #N carry a sketchbook during the summer holiday and draw from
observation and imagination whenever possible, making sure to review and modify
drawings and ideas, as this will be excellent preparation for the Y10 art program.
4=#N has not demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst #h ideas might
be good, momentum and effort is sporadic, resulting in unresolved art works.
Although final results have not been satisfactory, #N has gained valuable
experience, appreciation and knowledge of ceramics, printing, water colour and
drawing techniques, that #e can draw from in the future.
5=Overall, I have been very impressed by the high level of engagement and general
organisation that #N has shown during this course.
6=Overall, I have been satisfied with the level of engagement and general
organisation that #N has shown during this course.

COMMENTS: Year 9 - June 2022

1=#N has completed all work to an excellent standard this year.
2=#N has completed all work to a very good standard this year.
3=#N has completed all work to a satisfactory standard this year.
4=#H ceramic work was extremely well concieved, designed and constructed, and
successfully developed #h skills in hand built ceramics.
5=#H ceramic work was well designed and constructed, and went a long way in
developing #h skills in hand built ceramics.
6=#H ceramic work was fairly well designed and constructed, and went a long way in
developing #h skills in hand built ceramics.
7=Currently we are working on the highly complex colour reduction lino printing
unit, which requires sequential planning and relies on good colour choices.
8=#N is coping very well with this challenge and is in the process of creating a
series of excellent prints, for which #e should be proud!
9=#N is coping well with this challenge and, with support, is in the process of
creating a series of very good prints, for which #e should be proud!
10=#N is coping well with this challenge and, with support, is in the process of
creating a series of good prints, for which #e should be proud!
11=I hope that #N will continue to practice drawing, visit galleries and read about
art and artists, traditional and/or contemporary.
12=I would recommend #N carry a sketchbook during the summer holiday and draw from
observation and imagination whenever possible, making sure to review and modify
drawings and ideas, as this will be excellent preparation for the year 10 art
program.
13=Overall, #N has not demonstrated full commitment to the tasks and, whilst #h
ideas might be good, momentum and effort is sporadic, resulting in unresolved art
works. Although final results have not been satisfactory, #N has gained valuable
experience, appreciation and knowledge of design, ceramics, drawing and print
making, that #e can draw from in the future.
14=Overall, I have been very impressed by the high level of engagement and general
organisation that #N has shown during this course.
15=Overall, I have been satisfied with the progressively improving level of
engagement and general organisation that #N has demonstrated throughout the year.

COMMENTS: year9june2017
1=#N completed a ceramic shoe and acrylic painting displaying excellent technical
skill and appreciation of the media. Overall an impressive year of engagement and a
fast growing understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to draw from
observation, visit galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and
contemporary.
2=#N completed a ceramic shoe and acrylic painting displaying very good technical
skill and appreciation of the media. Overall a very positive year of engagement and
a growing understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to draw, visit
galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and contemporary.
3=#N completed a ceramic shoe and acrylic painting displaying competent technical
skill and appreciation of the media. Overall a sound year of engagement and a
growing understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to visit galleries
and read about art and artists, traditional and contemporary.
4=#N completed a ceramic shoe and acrylic painting displaying adequate technical
skill and appreciation of the media. Although #N finds art making challenging,
overall a sound year of engagement and a developing understanding of fine arts was
seen. I hope that #N will continue to visit galleries and read about art and
artists, traditional and contemporary.
5=#N completed a ceramic shoe displaying competent technical skill and appreciation
of the media. #E has more recently been working on wood carving and clearly enjoyed
the challenge of working with new tools. Overall a sound year of engagement and a
growing understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to visit galleries
and read about art and artists, traditional and contemporary.
6=#N completed a ceramic shoe and batik displaying excellent technical skill and
appreciation of the media. Overall an impressive year of engagement and a fast
growing understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to draw from
observation, visit galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and
contemporary.
7=#N completed a ceramic shoe and batik displaying very good technical skill and
appreciation of the media. Overall a positive year of engagement and a growing
understanding of fine arts. I hope that #N will continue to draw, visit galleries
and read about art and artists, traditional and contemporary.
8=#N completed a ceramic shoe and batik displaying competent technical skill and
appreciation of the media. Although #N finds art making challenging, overall a
sound year of engagement and a developing understanding of fine arts was seen. I
hope that #N will continue to visit galleries and read about art and artists,
traditional and contemporary.
9=#N completed a ceramic shoe and batik displaying adequate technical skill and
appreciation of the media. Although #N finds art making challenging, overall a
sound year of engagement and a developing understanding of fine arts was seen. I
hope that #N will continue to visit galleries and read about art and artists,
traditional and contemporary.
10=#N completed a ceramic shoe and batik displaying adequate technical skill and
appreciation of the media. Although #N finds art making challenging, overall a
sound year of engagement and a developing understanding of fine arts was seen. I
hope that #N will continue to visit galleries and read about art and artists,
traditional and contemporary.

COMMENTS: year9june2018
1=#N completed a ceramic bowl and assemblage work displaying excellent technical
skill, appreciation of the media and approach to conceptual art. Overall an
impressive year of engagement and an ever growing appreciation of fine arts. I hope
that #N will continue to draw from observation, visit galleries and read about art
and artists, traditional and contemporary.
2=#N completed a ceramic bowl and assemblage work displaying very good technical
skill, appreciation of the media and approach to conceptual art. Overall a very
positive year of engagement and an ever growing appreciation of fine arts. I hope
that #N will continue to draw, visit galleries and read about art and artists,
traditional and contemporary.
3=#N completed a ceramic bowl and assemblage work displaying competent technical
skill, appreciation of the media and approach to conceptual art.Overall a sound
year of engagement and an ever growing appreciation of fine arts. I hope that #N
will continue to visit galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and
contemporary.
4=#N completed a ceramic bowl and assemblage work displaying adequate technical
skill, appreciation of the media and approach to conceptual art. Although #N finds
art making challenging, overall a sound year of engagement and a developing
understanding of fine arts was seen. I hope that #N will continue to visit
galleries and read about art and artists, traditional and contemporary.
5=#N completed a ceramic bowl displaying competent technical skill and appreciation
of the media. #E has more recently been working on an 'assemblage' conceptual
sculpture and clearly enjoyed the challenge of working with new tools and mixed
media. Overall a sound year of engagement and a growing understanding of fine arts.
I hope that #N will continue to visit galleries and read about art and artists,
traditional and contemporary.

COMMENTS: YR8 2019

1=#N has achieved work of a high standard that shows a considerable wealth of ideas
and a very strong command of a broad range of media for the "logo design", ceramic
and observational drawing units. #H ability to concentrate and complete all tasks
to the best of #h ability is impressive.
2=#N has achieved work of a good standard that shows a number of relevant ideas and
a strong command of a broad range of media for the theme of "logo design", ceramic
and observational drawing units. #H ability to complete all tasks to a consistently
good standard is most encouraging.
3=#N has mainly achieved work of a reasonable standard that shows a number of
ideas, with partial success with some of the media that was used for the theme of
"logo design", ceramic and observational drawing units.
LIST: art-targets
1=#e should practice drawing from observation.
2=#e should visit galleries with a drawing book
3=#e should carry a sketchbook to develop ideas.
4=#e should practice colour mixing and painting more.
5=#e should spend more time on homework assignments.
6=#e should be more selective when researching online.
7=#e should review and modify drawing more in the art book.
8=#e should take more care with presentation in the art book.

LIST: arttopicsy7
1=collage
2=painting
3=ceramic
4=Mixed Media (Collage)
5=Formal Elements
6=ceramic lizard
7=gouache painting
8=lino printing

LIST: arttopicsy8
1=watercolour
2=collaborative ceramics
3=Mixed Media Squares
4=Logo design unit
5=ceramics
6=mixed media
7=black biro
8=Lino
9=Ceramic tile
10=Lino printing
11=collaborative collage
12=artists study
13=Logo Unit

LIST: arttopicsy9
1=painting
2=paper sculpture & photography
3=Self portrait
4=Mixed Media
5=Water colour
6=ceramics
7=acrylic painting
8=wood carving
9=assemblage

LIST: Choose-level-Y8
1=excellent
2=advanced
3=improving
4=good
5=developing
6=broad
7=satisfactory
8=growing

LIST: chooseskilllevelY8
1=impressive
2=reasonable
3=sound
4=satisfactory

LIST: hasworkedY8
1=consistently hard
2=consistently well
3=well

LIST: How-to-improve
1=focus more in the lessons
2=put more time aside for homework
3=try not to chat during lessons
4=do more project research on the internet
5=develop #h computer skills
6=pay more attention to instructions.
7=spend more time on reviewing and modifying drawing
8=focus on developing ideas further

LIST: Skill-level-Y8
1=impressive
2=reasonable
3=sound
4=satisfactory

LIST: Y7target
1=should draw more from observation
2=should visit galleries with a drawing book
3=should carry a sketchbook to develop ideas
4=should practice colour mixing and painting more

LIST: Y8target
1=should draw more from observation
2=should visit galleries and read about artists
3=should carry a sketchbook to sketch and develop ideas
4=should practice colour mixing and painting more

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