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DIRECTIONS
Each passage below is accompanied by a number of questions. For some questions, you
will consider how the passage might be revised to improve the expression of ideas. For
other questions, you will consider how the passage might be edited to correct errors in
sentence structure, usage, or punctuation. A passage or a question may be accompanied
by one or more graphics (such as a table or graph) that you will consider as you make
revising and editing decisions.
Some questions will direct you to an underlined portion of a passage. Other questions will
direct you to a location in a passage or ask you to think about the passage as a whole.
After reading each passage, choose the answer to each question that most effectively
improves the quality of writing in the passage or that makes the passage conform to the
conventions of standard written English. Many questions include a “NO CHANGE” option.
Choose that option if you think the best choice is to leave the relevant portion of the pas-
sage as it is.
Living Walls
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may require 3 elaborate fencing to keep
he use of the word “elaborate” has what
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effect on the author’s description of outdoor
away animals and may even require the use of
gardens?
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environmental application (e.g. a living wall that
To make this paragraph the most logical, the
underlined sentence would best be placed
reuses water and provides food as opposed to a
___________.
9
gardens is the perfect solution to all of our
he writer is considering deleting the
T
underlined sentence. Should he or she do so,
problems. 9 The hydroponic systems
and why or why not?
A. Yes, the underlined sentence
required to maintain these gardens are costly, undermines the overall thesis by
presenting the views of those critical
complicated, and require a good deal of energy of the passage’s overriding thesis
about vertical gardens.
B. Yes, the underlined sentence
to maintain, leading critics to question their discusses views that are irrelevant
to the passage’s overall argument
about the popularity and viability of
practical and environmental value. Those
vertical gardens.
C. No, the underlined sentence
concerns are certainly important and probably provides useful context that
supports the passage’s overall
argument about the popularity and
valid 10 because as the technology continues viability of vertical gardens.
D. No, the underlined sentence
to develop and urban space continues to become provides useful context, and lends
the author’s argument legitimacy by
providing and addressing alternative
inhabited, 11 the desire city-dwellers all have viewpoints.
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The author of this passage wants to break the
final paragraph into two paragraphs, both dis-
cussing different aspects of the conditions of
the internment. What is the best point at which
to do so?
A. Before the sentence beginning with
“Additionally”
B. After the sentence ending with
“extreme weather conditions”
C. Before the sentence beginning with
“Multiple families”
D. There is no logical point at which to
break this paragraph.
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didn’t just remain in India; it spread as the
If a sentence directly comparing the complexity
of the gameplay of chess and checkers were
culture contacted others. People would gather to inserted at the end of the second paragraph it
would __________.
bet on the game at noisy tournaments, resulting A. help to emphasize the passage’s
fundamental purpose of highlighting
the beauty and complexity of chess
in the Catholic Church and various monarchs gameplay through a meaningful
comparison
banning the game at various points of European B. help to improve the overall focus
of the essay by ending a digression
about monarchs and ecclesiastical
history. Not every ruler and ecclesiastical official leaders and refocusing the
paragraph on the logistics of chess
gameplay
was set against the game, though; some saw C. distract from the historical focus of
the passage by inserting completely
merit in it because 27 it is based on skill and irrelevant content about the
gameplay of another game
D. distract from the logistical,
not on just being lucky. 28 game-theoretical focus of the pas-
sage by inserting content about
the gameplay of a totally separate,
unrelated game
the naked eye and often not visible with powerful A. NO CHANGE
B. Experiments in this field involve
electrons, photons, particles, waves,
microscopes. As a result, understanding and other phenomena that are
either not visible with the naked
eye or not visible with powerful
quantum mechanics’ major breakthroughs and
microscopes.
C. Experiments in this field involve
discoveries often involves thought experiments electrons, photons, particles, waves,
and other phenomena that are not
visible with the naked eye and are
and theoretical situations that may leave often not visible with powerful
microscopes.
students without tangible intellectual ground to D. Experiments in this field involve
electrons, photons, particles, waves,
and other phenomena that are on
stand on. the one hand not visible with the na-
ked eye and on the other not visible
with powerful microscopes.
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view of light as a “wave-particle duality.”
Which of the following verb phrases can best
replace the underlined phrase to emphasize
the effort that scientists put into attempting
to make sense of the phenomena being
discussed?
A. NO CHANGE
B. did not make sense in terms of
traditional concepts
C. dodged traditional explanations
D. were revolutionary in the scientific
community