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Second Story Final Version
Second Story Final Version
6 December 2022
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Furuness
Hell of a Brother
The trip back up from Satan’s palace was a lot quieter than the trip down. I hardly batted
an eye at the demons in the Tier of Lust (who were still going at it, by the way). And Damien
didn’t flinch at the Wrath demons once. Walking past the screams and squelching noises and
By the time we reached the top of the stairs, we weren’t eager to look around. Not that we
could look around much in the darkness. I was once again exhausted from climbing an infinite
I internally cursed Satan for making us go all this way just so we could leave. And I
cursed him even more for our deal. At least Damien only needed to go back once every year.
Damien’s portal shone brightly as ever. It wasn’t closing anytime soon. It was like the
portal was eagerly waiting for us the whole time. Or maybe it was an invitation to stay in Hell
longer, since apparently, we had time. But I think you and I both know that I wasn’t gonna stick
around.
I looked back down the stairs and gave a silent goodbye to all the horrible, awful things
We were back. Home, sweet, beautifully boring home. At least I didn’t feel like a fried
egg anymore.
It was still daytime, and Mom’s car wasn’t in the street. From the looks of things, it
seemed that no time passed at all while we were in Hell. That was both comforting and terrifying
to think about.
Damien looked back. The portal had closed. If he wanted to go back, he’d have to make a
We walked inside, staring at our dull living room, not fully aware of anything.
“Nope.”
“We should probably put the books away. Y’know, before she gets back.”
Once we got everything cleaned up, I felt a sudden, strong urge to make a sandwich.
Damien didn’t seem hungry, though, so I only made one sandwich. But I kept the peanut
As I reveled in the taste of food again, I noticed him sitting on the living room couch,
staring off into space. After finishing my intensely delicious sandwich, I went over and sat next
to him.
“Yeah…” Damien muttered. I wasn’t convinced, but I wasn’t about to prod him either.
We took in the air around us. It wasn’t hot, but it felt heavy. Muffled bird chirps echoed
“Well…” I said dumbly. I was never the greatest at comforting people. “He is Satan.”
I sighed. “Yeah.”
Fuck. I mean, what was someone even supposed to say in a situation like this?
I tried to imagine how Damien was feeling. I mean, there was zero chance of Demon Dad
The whole situation reminded me of my own dad. In a way, at least. I knew he was dead.
And I guess there was this tiny part of me that still believed he was alive somewhere. You know,
that stupid, hopeful part of you that just can’t accept reality.
I looked at Damien. He looked more human than ever. Just a sad, scared little kid who
didn’t know what to do anymore. He was grieving. I didn’t realize he cared about his dad so
much.
“Well…” I said slowly, a bit softer than I usually speak. “At least now we can cry about
I thought about it. I had never talked about Human Dad with Damien, except for maybe
But I did miss him. And I realized that I’d been missing him for a long time. I guess I just
But as I looked at Damien, a kid who had never known grief before, I thought that maybe
it was time to start talking about Human Dad. Damien needed me, and I couldn’t help him if I
Damien frowned and looked at his hands, which rested on his legs. I stared at the wall
“Do you think…” Damien said, hesitantly, “we could start talking about our dads
together?”
Mom walked in, looking more frazzled than usual. Her hair was like a rat’s nest, and her
face said she was ready to wring someone’s neck. Must’ve been a rough day at the hospital.
Mom looked at us. “You two are awfully quiet,” she said. “Have you been up to
something?”
Mom raised an eyebrow. Her kids hardly ever took the time to just think. But I think she
bought it.
“Well,” she said, slumping into her reading chair, “I wish I would stop thinking. I’ve
Mom never looked well-rested. We were used to seeing her worn out every day, but I
guess neither of us considered how awful that must feel. Mom went through her own personal
Hell every single day, and it took me and Damien going to actual Hell to finally see that.
She never talked about how she was feeling, either, except for the occasional complaint. I
wondered how much grief and anger she was bottling up. I mean, I knew she didn’t like to talk
about her past, but I’m sure she’s thought about it. I knew what that felt like. It sucked.
It was time to take care of Mom. I was years too late, but, better late than never.
“Well, you had a shitty day, so how ‘bout Damien and I make you some tea?”
Mom’s jaw dropped a little. “I…well…if you want to…” Her eyes narrowed. “Do you
want something?”
Damien and I made her favorite tea: unsweet with a hint of lemon. We had never made
tea before, but damn it if we didn’t try. It only tasted a little funny.
When Mom took a sip, she smiled warmly. The whole house felt warm. It was a good
feeling.
I think that day was the first day we ever felt like a real family.
So, there you go. That was my journey through Hell with my demon brother. Can’t
believe that happened only, like, two weeks ago. Pretty sick, right? Hope the ending wasn’t too
Is there a lesson here? Not really. I just wanted to tell a story. But I guess if you wanted
If you have a demon brother, don’t take him to Hell. There are better ways to deal with
that.