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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health
problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less
sugar.
It has been argued that a growing number of industrially processed diet and beverage enriched with
high quantity of sugars that poses numerous physical and mental health hazards. Therefore, products
with high level of sugar should have been made more exclusive dissuading consumers having sugar.
To my mind, it is debatable whether this could be regarded as a wholly negative development.
To conclude, from the above analytical discussion of the stance by considering benefits and
drawbacks, it has been observed that the disadvantages of making more exclusive of sugary drink and
food for consumers outweigh the advantages .
Agree =+
Disagree= -
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