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My city is qassim he is butfol city. But my city he have problem no sobuy to go another blace . I wish he
start bolding a sowbuy to trivel . Becouse the line is more car it’s the problem for the pepole . I hope he
start the bulding sawboy in the one year. Win I trivel to tokyo I watch big sowby in , he is car butfil the
sawboy. We have a sawboy is big and we have glass is butfil. I wint to trivel agin to tokyo to tokyo be
wted the taking for the everting .maybe one day i go them a gin.The from tokyo people who do't to go
the car he go with spwbay or bus , its assey to live in tokyo. my fother he go one to use he tokeing with
hapen for him he subres baeuse the soboy in the taem he meak go in blace you need in my city no have
one sowbay on 2021 why dinot have one. we start to bouding one in raydi he start in 2012 will not done
in saudi have to sowby is the proplem for the peapole. For exmpile to go to any city one sobway have its
more time for the buy tickt . I wish ksa we being big contry to travel in saudi . And go to works and the
line move cars . I hope one day when open big sobway and people hapy they will know everythiong
sbout the big sobway become in contry you live .i hope one day bulding move the sobway in my city to
travel essay.

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There are a lot of wonderful places I wish to visit. However, most of all I would like to visit Hollywood
and I have many reasons to do. Because I really want to see how the movies are made, meet famous
actors and actresses and just have a good time.

Firstly, Hollywood is a place famous for making movies there. For example, I like films and spend a great
amount of my free time watching new and old films, especially made in Hollywood. And when the film
attracts me, I wish to know how the director made such wonderful and awesome films, what kind of
technologies he used, and how the actors made dangerous things. It seems to me that the Hollywood is
the best place to satisfy my interests in films.

Also, almost all famous American actors and actresses live in Hollywood. Therefore if I visit this place I
will probably have an opportunity to meet them, take autographs and even have a talk with them and
ask them about their feelings during the film and after watching themselves in already-made films.
Visiting Los Angeles will have a lot of opportunities of meeting famous people. Moreover, Los Angeles is
one of the most beautiful places in the world. It has a lot of beaches and as it is always hot there, you
can spend your time swimming. Therefore, besides watching films I will have a great opportunity to get
away from my everyday life and enjoy my time and swimming.

All in all, the place that I most like to visit is Hollywood. I do understand that there are a lot of
interesting places I would like to visit too. However, I come to conclusion that Hollywood is the best
place for me .