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• My city is qassim he is butfol city. But my city he have problem no sobuy to go

another blace . I wish he start bolding a sowbuy to trivel . Becouse the line is
more car it’s the problem for the pepole . I hope he start the bulding sawboy in
the one year. Win I trivel to tokyo I watch big sowby in , he is car butfil the
sawboy. We have a sawboy is big and we have glass is butfil. I wint to trivel agin
to tokyo to tokyo be wted the taking for the everting .maybe one day i go them a
gin.The from tokyo people who do't to go the car he go with spwbay or bus , its
assey to live in tokyo. my fother he go one to use he tokeing with hapen for him
he subres baeuse the soboy in the taem he meak go in blace you need in my city
no have one sowbay on 2021 why dinot have one. we start to bouding one in
raydi he start in 2012 will not done in saudi have to sowby is the proplem for the
peapole. For exmpile to go to any city one sobway have its more time for the buy
tickt . I wish ksa we being big contry to travel in saudi . And go to works and the
line move cars . I hope one day when open big sobway and people hapy they will
know everythiong sbout the big sobway become in contry you live .i hope one
day bulding move the sobway in my city to travel essay.

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My city is Qassim, it’s a beautiful city. But my city has a problem, which is that there is
no subway to go places. I wish they start to build a subway to travel. Because there is a
traffic problem. I hope they build the subway in one year. When I traveled to Tokyo, I
saw a big subway, and there is no traffic. I went by subway to try it out and it was
beautiful. People in Tokyo often don’t use cars, they use the subway or bus. We are in
2021 and we still don’t have a subway. We need a subway in our city to move around
and solve traffic problems. In western countries, there is little traffic problem, and the
reason is the subway or metro, because it helps people to move around the city faster
and without traffic. I hope one day there will be a subway or metro that travels between
the cities of the kingdom of Saudi Arabia so traveling in the kingdom will be easy. And I
hope that there will be a subway or metro in every city to move around faster and less
traffic problems.