Screening

My target audience is PG. would you say I’ve successfully reached

my target audience?

“I think that you have reached your target audience”

“since your uploading the production onto YouTube I’d say you
should do the 18+ thing so your audience HAS to watch it with a legal
adult but as for the production yes its subtitle for the target audience”
“yes”
“yea”

Have I followed the codes and conventions of my genre?

“yes, it sounds like it would be effectively scary”

“yes, having the location in the woods is spooky”
“The jump scares and the ending are a great way to make it scary
without dialogue.”
“yea”

Is my storyline clear without dialogue?

“it is”
“Yes”
“yes, it’s all very mysterious then it all links together once you see the
character wake up from the dream”
“yes”

What do you think of the characters?

“I think that the characters are fitting for a horror”

“having a dog included would make me even more emotionally
invested so yes”
“the characters work very well, having the girl take her neighbour’s
dog on a walk was a very good touch”
“all characters add to the story, I like”