This document discusses the controversial question of whether to support one view or another on a particular issue in a certain field. It presents two main bodies of arguments for one particular position. The first body provides two major reasons for this view, including that another incentive exists which therefore results in certain consequences. The second body agrees that it seems this position is correct, and provides further reasons for it through examples and how one reason relates to another. In conclusion, while a few negative effects may exist, the overall benefits mentioned outweigh them, supporting this perspective.
This document discusses the controversial question of whether to support one view or another on a particular issue in a certain field. It presents two main bodies of arguments for one particular position. The first body provides two major reasons for this view, including that another incentive exists which therefore results in certain consequences. The second body agrees that it seems this position is correct, and provides further reasons for it through examples and how one reason relates to another. In conclusion, while a few negative effects may exist, the overall benefits mentioned outweigh them, supporting this perspective.
This document discusses the controversial question of whether to support one view or another on a particular issue in a certain field. It presents two main bodies of arguments for one particular position. The first body provides two major reasons for this view, including that another incentive exists which therefore results in certain consequences. The second body agrees that it seems this position is correct, and provides further reasons for it through examples and how one reason relates to another. In conclusion, while a few negative effects may exist, the overall benefits mentioned outweigh them, supporting this perspective.
- the question of Whether to..or.. remains a source of controversy
today/in .. field/ - Personally, I advocate the view that/ am opposed to the idea that/ while I agree, I believe that Body 1 - There are two major reasons why… (topic sentence 1) - Foremostly, another incentive… + as a result, which, therefore…. - Secondly,… - For example Body 2(agree: it seems to me that) - Topic sentence 2 - The first reason - Another reason is that - For example In conclusion: it is true that sth may have a few deleterious effects, but my conviction is that they are eclipsed by the upsides mentioned above