Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Examples
Location Summary
Table 5 shows the most common modes of computer infection for U.S. businesses.
Table 2 provides details of the fertilizer used
Figure 4.2 gives the results of the second experiment
Summary Location
The most common modes of infection are shown in Table 5.
Details of the fertilizers used are provided in Table 2.
The results of the second experiment are given in Figure 4.2.
Other examples
As shown in Table 1, home disks are the most frequent source of infection.
As can be seen in Figure 8, infant mortality is still high in urban areas.
As revealed by the graph, the defect rate has declined.
Practice
Highlighting Statements
Examples
Qualifying comparisons
Weak:
Fifty-six percent of girls reported restrictions on going out late at night as opposed to 35% of
boys.
Improved:
Twenty-one percent more girls reported restrictions on going out late at night.
Practice
Qualifications can be important in making highlighting statements. They can be even more so in
the concluding parts of a commentary.
Examples
1. The difference between expected and obtained results may be due to the incorrect
calibration of the instruments.
2. This discrepancy can be attributed to the small sample size.
3. The anomaly in the observations can probably be accounted for by a defect in the camera.
4. The lack of statistical significance is probably a consequence of weaknesses in the
experimental design.
5. The difficulty in dating this archeological site would seem to stem from the limited
amount of organic material available.
Source:
Swales, C. & Feak, C. (1994). Academic writing for graduate students: A course for non-native
speakers of English. Ann Arbor: University of Michigan Press.
Other Examples:
OPAC 84 1 Microfiche 10 1
Bibliography 80 4 Reserve 20 4
Circulation 69 5 Citation 25 5
Biography 49 10 Abstract 33 10
Presentation: Introducing what the table or figure is all about.
Table 1 shows the ranking of the most and least recognized terms and concepts by the
respondents.
Identified as the most recognized terms were OPAC (84%), copyright (81%), revised
edition (81%), bibliography (80%), and circulation (69%). Microfiche (10%), gazetteers (11%),
collection development (12%), reserve (20%), and citation (25%) were the least recognized
terms. The same terms have been revealed by the librarians interviewed to be either identified
easily or hardly by the library users.
The extent to which respondents recognized terms used in the library may be attributed to
the law of exercise which is concerned with the practice of a learning skill. Further, the more
frequently new learning is repeated, the better the learning. In library use and patronage, when
students are not expose to the use of available materials and other services offered by the library,
familiarity with terms is likely to be affected. According to the law of disuse, a skill that is not
practiced and knowledge that is not used are forgotten (Torres, 1994). This observation is very
much evident in the respondents’ low recognition level of the terms as indicated in table 1.
Scale of Qualification
Percentage Probability
100%
general(ly) likely
seldom unlikely
can not
If you are uncertain if a word is quantity or frequency you can normally check by seeing
if it can be used to answer the following questions:
25
20
15 Black
Yellow
10 Orange
0
Styrofoam Piece of Candy Plastic bag Any kind of
Paper wrappers metal