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“It Will Be Hard, But It Will Be Worth the Fight”: Narratives of Preschool Teachers on
Teaching for Social Justice
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Full Title: “It Will Be Hard, But It Will Be Worth the Fight”: Narratives of Preschool Teachers on
Teaching for Social Justice
Keywords: culturally relevant pedagogy, social justice, Montessori, early childhood, teachers'
narratives, teachers' beliefs
Abstract: Ladson-Billings (2014) asserts educators often fail to carry out a critical form of
culturally relevant pedagogy (CRP) by neglecting the development of sociopolitical
consciousness and attending to limited understandings of “culture.” Using narrative
inquiry, this study explored preschool teachers’ narratives on various factors which
influenced their implementation of CRP with an emphasis on sociopolitical
consciousness development by engaging young children in lessons on racism and
racial justice. Our findings indicate that teachers’ beliefs and commitments, social
justice driven school culture, and a flexible Montessori curriculum contributed to their
implementation of CRP in order to teach for social justice.
Reviewer #1: This was a very interesting study. It is a subject that is on everybody's
mind in today's society. It would be interesting to explore generational gaps on social
justice and see how it affects the older preschool teachers as opposed to the younger
preschool teachers’ perspectives.
-Thank you for the suggestion. We will consider this topic for future publication.
Reviewer #2: This article addresses an important area of early childhood education.
The paper is clearly written (although there are a few small errors in the text - see copy
attached). There is a clear overview of the theoretical framework being used and the
context for the study. The literature is relevant to the study. The methodology is
explained clearly.
-Thank you for your insights. We have corrected the errors in the text.
It is not clear why Montessori classrooms were selected, rather than other early
childhood classrooms. There was a comparison made between Montessori and
traditional education. It was not clear if traditional education referred to traditional
elementary school. Early childhood education focuses on students' strengths and
interests, and is individualised so it was not clear why Montessori in particular was
selected as the focus.
-We further explained our project on pp. 6-7 in the revised version.
The description of what happened in the classrooms, based on observations, was fairly
general. The narratives provided richer data. The data reported focused on very
traditional, teacher-directed lessons using books to build students' cultural
consciousness and understandings of racism and social justice. It was not clear
whether the lessons were the only time that teachers addressed issues of social justice
with students, or if it was decided to only focus on this time. It is not clear if the
teachers used other, less teacher-directed approaches, such as teachers intervening in
students interactions and play to point out and talk about racist language and
behaviours, the use of personna dolls to explore issues of racism through narratives
drawing on classroom observations, dramatic play with teachers participating in the
play and having critical discussions with children, creating classroom books using
photographs of the children in the class and so on.
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implemented in these classrooms by using several examples gathered from our data.
We moved this part to the Methods section for this reason. We also extended this
section to provide more detail along with the dates the data were gathered.
Reviewer #3: In this paper, the author(s) share preschool teachers' narratives on
various factors that influenced their implementation of CRP, emphasizing sociopolitical
consciousness development by engaging young children in lessons on racism and
racial justice. Since preschool teachers' critical voices and practices about teaching
children race and racism are absent in the literature, this paper's results give us the
preschool teachers' effort to incorporate CRP and social justice into Montessori
Education. I think this study could make an essential contribution to the Early
Childhood Education Journal. However, some methodological and literature issues
need to be addressed before it would be ready for publication.
Literature Review:
1. The author(s) explained the needs of this study very well. But the author(s) needs
to provide more details about culturally relevant pedagogy (CRP) and why Montessori
education needs to be incorporated with the CRP. Moreover, theoretical background
and the importance of the preschool teachers' responses need to be addressed.
-CRP and its sociopolitical consciousness component along with relevant literature
were discussed in pp. 3-6. We specifically addressed why Montessori education needs
to incorporate CRP on p. 6. We could not further elaborate on this (we actually had to
cut down the size as compared to our original manuscript) due to the space limit.
Method:
1. Page 7, line 8-9: For the participant section, the author(s) mentioned the school
population, but the number of children in these two classrooms and their background
information is needed.
-Addressed on p. 7.
2. Page 7, line 31: "The focal teachers received Montessori training and
credentialing and worked as co-educators who collaborated to create and prepare for
lessons." Did they receive the training from the American Montessori Association, or
did one of the researchers train them?
-Addressed on p. 7.
3. In the method section, there is no information about whether the ethics review
committee approved the study, how the center, teachers, and parents were contacted,
and how/where the interviews were completed.
-Addressed on p. 9.
Data Sources and Analysis
1. Page 8, lines 24-34: The author(s) needs to describe the observation period
broadly. What time of the day did they observe the classrooms? Were these
observations participant observations or non-participant observations?
-Addressed on p. 8.
2. Page 8, line 31: The author(s) wrote about the implementation, but there was no
'process' section about how this implementation was taking place. The implementation
needs to be explained. What kind of activities are used in CRP? Two paragraphs
showed the examples, but I think the process section provides a better understanding
of how the implementation went.
-Addressed on p. 10 in the overview section.
3. Page8, line 41: Typo. The period is missing after "CRP."
-Resolved.
4. Some example items/questions of interviews can be meaningful for the readers.
-Addressed on p. 9.
Findings
1. Page 10, lines 7-14: The authors mentioned the curriculum with the materials.
Some lesson examples could be meaningful for the readers, too.
-We intended to provide an overview of how culturally relevant pedagogy was
implemented in these classrooms by using several examples gathered from our data.
We moved this part to the Methods section for this reason. We also extended this
section to provide more detail along with the dates the data were gathered.
Reviewer #4: There were no examples of dialogue between teachers and students.
The conclusion makes reference to interactions, but these were not discussed in the
findings. The were a few examples of children's language in the teacher's narratives,
but no examples of exchanges between teachers and students. It would have been
useful to see examples of dialogue to show how the teachers explored issues with
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children, how they challenged children's thinking and how children responded. The
data indicating that some biracial children identified as white and some children made
racist comments was very interesting but was not explored in any detail. There was a
claim that children changed in their language and behaviour but no evidence was
provided. It would be useful to include the relevant data to support this claim. Some
implications for early childhood educators are included
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