UNIT 12 SPECIALIST STUDY

Peer Feedback Form

Overall rate the student’s documentary based on the following criteria
Comment on each
YOUR NAME: Fletcher Harries

STUDENT NAME: Leon Rodriguez Wyatt

DOCUMENTARY TITLE: The Development of Level Design over time

WORD COUNT SHOULD TOTAL 1500 FOR BOTH DOCUMENTS

DOCUMENTARY STRUCTURE PRESENT
Introduction to the topic yes

Brief History of topic yes

Has technology has influenced your topic yes

Key people in the industry yes

Key techniques associated with the topic yes

Interviews with people discussing the topic yes

Conclusion that evaluates your chosen topic and why it is important to the esports yes
industry

PROPOSAL WORD COUNT: 1132

TREATMENT WORD COUNT: 1132

SCRIPT WORD COUNT: 1202

PASS / FAIL: pass

 Pacing and timing: the pacing was good but I feel it could have been more organised as I felt
it was jumping all over and didn’t have the best transition through the points.

Clarity of information:
The clarity of information was good and the producer had clips and footage to show what
they were talking about. I would suggest as an improvement to add in a few screenshots of
documents or dates to help explain the point.

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