The student's documentary on character design in games received an overall rating of 5.5 out of 10. While the information provided was clear, the presenter could have been more passionate and the editing and resources could have been improved. Specifically, the pacing of the documentary was hurt by showing too much of the interview in one bulk section rather than spreading it out more evenly. Additionally, the documentary was missing discussion of key people in the industry and a conclusion evaluating the topic's importance.
The student's documentary on character design in games received an overall rating of 5.5 out of 10. While the information provided was clear, the presenter could have been more passionate and the editing and resources could have been improved. Specifically, the pacing of the documentary was hurt by showing too much of the interview in one bulk section rather than spreading it out more evenly. Additionally, the documentary was missing discussion of key people in the industry and a conclusion evaluating the topic's importance.
The student's documentary on character design in games received an overall rating of 5.5 out of 10. While the information provided was clear, the presenter could have been more passionate and the editing and resources could have been improved. Specifically, the pacing of the documentary was hurt by showing too much of the interview in one bulk section rather than spreading it out more evenly. Additionally, the documentary was missing discussion of key people in the industry and a conclusion evaluating the topic's importance.
Overall rate the student’s specialist subject documentary
Comment on each YOUR NAME: - William Price
DOCUMENTARY NAME: - Character Design In Games
RATING OUT OF 10: - 5.5
Presenter engagement: - Good info but could be more passionate/confident
Quality of audio and voice over: -
Music was unbalanced so that could be changed and focused on a bit more allowing us to hear her better
Quality of editing and resources: -
Editing was good as a basic edit but the title cards and such could be improved a whole lot more. She also shouldn’t mix lower quality videos with high quality as this can take away attention from the video. Pacing and timing of Documentary: - The interview was shown in a bulk which isn’t great as it ruins the pacing of the video so if it was cut up better and spread out the pacing would be a whole lot better.
Clarity of information: - The info was really clear and allowed time for the viewer to digest the information.
SECTION OF THE DOCUMENTARY PRESNET IN THE VIDEO (YES OR NO)
Introduction to the topic Y
Brief History of topic Y
Has technology has influenced your Y
topic
Key people in the industry N
Key techniques associated with the Y
topic
Interviews with people discussing the Y
topic
Conclusion that evaluates your N
chosen topic and why it is important to the esports industry