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Thesis Bella Alma Elpira
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
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Bangko, 22 September 2021
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MOTTO
Education is the deadliest weapon in the world because with education
(Albert Einstein)
(Q.S.AL-QOLAM(29):1)
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DEDICATION
to my support system
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ABSTRACT
The purpose of this study was to describe the ability of students in writing
narrative texts in class IX students of SMP N 43 Merangin. The problem of this
research in class IXB students of SMP N 1 Merangin is caused by the relatively
low writing ability of students. This can be seen from the analysis of student
scores. The low score of students in writing is due to the lack of knowledge of
students about aspects that need to be considered in writing such as content,
organization, vocabulary, language use, mechanics. On this occasion the author
assesses students through the text, after knowing the abilities of students and
teachers can see which partsneedtobeimproved.
TheMethod was used a descriptive quantitative method. The population
in this study were grade IX students of SMP N 43 Merangin for the academic year
2020/2021. It consisted of 4 classes, the total population of the class was 120
students. The sample of this study was 30 students who were taken randomly from
4 classes. They are IX A, IXB, IXC, and IXD. The research instrument is a
student's ability test, quantitative analysis data analysis techniques.
Based on the result of the research , especially about narrative texts,
students of SMPN 43 Merangin collected data, research, it was found that the
highest total score was in the mechanic aspect, with a total score of 1060. It was
found that the results of this study revealed the scores obtained by students in the
mechanic aspect as many as 4 students or 40% who reached the KKM, the lowest
total score was obtained in the content aspect,with a total score of 951. From the
result of the study ,the lowest score was obtained by tudent in the content aspect
as many 3student or 17% who reached the KKM, has reached the KKM because
the KKM for English for SMP N 43 Merangin is 50. Because the average grade of
students is more than 75 so students' writing skills in narrative texts in class IX of
SMP N 43 Merangin for the 2020/2021 academic year Very low .
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TABLES OF CONTENTS
COVER
LOGO PAGE
TITLE PAGE ................................................................................................. i
SURAT PERNYATAAN ............................................................................... ii
ADVISORS AGREEMENT .......................................................................... iii
EXAMINERS’ AGREEMENT ..................................................................... iv
ACKNOWLEDGMENT ............................................................................... v
MOTO ............................................................................................................. vii
DEDICATION ................................................................................................ viii
ABSTRACT .................................................................................................... ix
TABLES OF CONTENTS ............................................................................ x
LIST OF TABLES ......................................................................................... xii
LIST OF APPENDICES ............................................................................... xiii
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION
A. Back groundof the Problem .................................................................... 1
B. Identification of the Problem .................................................................. 3
C. Limitation of the Problem ....................................................................... 4
D. Formulation of the Problem.................................................................... 4
E. Purpose of the Research .......................................................................... 4
F. Signitificance of the Research ................................................................. 4
CHAPTER II REVIEW OF THE RELATED LITERATURE
A. Review of the Related Theories ............................................................. 5
1. Writing ............................................................................................. 5
2. Narrative Text .................................................................................. 14
B. Relevant of the Research ........................................................................ 20
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design ..................................................................................... 22
B. Population and sample ............................................................................ 22
C. Technique of Collecting Data ................................................................. 24
D. Instrument of the Research .................................................................... 24
E. Technique of Analyzing Data ................................................................. 26
F. Research Schedule .................................................................................. 28
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CHAPTER IV FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION
A. Research Findings ................................................................................ 29
B. Discussion ............................................................................................ 52
CHAPTER V CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion ........................................................................................... 54
B. Suggestion ............................................................................................ 54
BIBLIOGRAPHY ......................................................................................... 55
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LIST OF TABLES
Table Page
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LIST OF APPENDICES
Appendix Page
Appendix 1 Syllabus ....................................................................................... 56
Appendix 2 Instrument of The Research ......................................................... 62
Appendix 3 Score List ...................................................................................... 63
Appendix 4 The Student score for Content ...................................................... 64
Appendix 5 The Student Score of Organization .............................................. 65
Appendix 6 The Student Score for Vocabulary ............................................... 66
Appendix 7 The Student Score for Language Use ........................................... 67
Appendix 8 The Student Score for Mechanics ................................................ 68
Appendix 9 The Letter of Research Permit...................................................... 69
Appendix 10 The Letter of School Research Permit Reply ............................. 70
Appendix 11Dokumtasi of The Research ........................................................ 71
Appendix 12 Dokumentation of The Guidance with English Teacher ............ 72
Appendix 13 Dokumentation of The Research Permit ................................... 74
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the problem
Learning English is nothing new for high school students. English
isn't new to high school students, they are still having a lot of difficultiesin
learning English. . Writing is a complex skill, in writing, a student needs to
concentrate to think what wants he or she write.In English, there are four
skills that should be mastered, they are listening,speaking, reading, and
writing. Writing skill becomes very important in education because the
student should study continuously about writing. The students need to have
writing skill in their daily life to report something. They have to put words on
the paper, to express and deliver their messages or ideas to other persons
freely, deeply and systematically. They need to write, to conduct and
accomplish the assignments given by their teacher or lecturer. In short, the
writing skill plays an important role in the students’ life.
Writing is the most difficult skill of English, it is veryessential to be
learnt. To create a good writing the students should consider several
components of writing, such as content , rheotoric , vocabulary, grammatical
stucture, and writing mechanics, such as punctuation and capitalization.
According to Dalman (2014:3) wrote very important because writing is a
process of expressing ideas in form of written language in the goal, for
exampletell, want, or cool.
According to Hyland (2003: 14), stated that writing is a way of
sharing personal meanings and emphasize the power of the individual to
construct their own views on a topic. In addition, Harmer (2004: 3) stated
that, being able to write is an important skill for speakers or foreign
languages.
From the definition above, it can seemastery of English competency is
not only focused on reading skills but also must be balanced with writing
skills. Writing is really important tool for human being. It is used for written
communication. On other hand, writing that learners write is an ideas they
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d. Mechanics
It’s about the punctuation, spelling, and all of the graphic
convention of the language. It’s about correctly using English
writing conventions; all needed capitals, paragraph intended,
using coma, full-stop, etc.
e. Vocabulary
It’s about style and quality of expression. How the writer use
precise vocabulary, parallel structures, word choosing, etc.
Based on statement above, researcher concludes that writing is
varied and there are several aspects in writing that have to be paid
attention in writing. By considering those aspects, students can
compose a perfect writing and understandable by the reader.
d) The Assessment of Writing
Teaching how to write effectively is one of the most important
life-long skills educators impart to their students. When teaching
writing, educators must be sure to select resources and support
materials that not only aid them in teaching how to write, but that will
also be the most effective in helping their students learn to write.
According to Duncan (2005: 2) “assessment is the primary
instrument you have to support the fact that teaching and learned by
strategic and intelligent people”. There are several ways to assess
writing. The most common method is to use some sort of rubric. Items
on the rubric range from state-mandated writing standards to individual
items specific to an assignment. Other forms of writing assessment use
checklists or rating scales.
According to Hughes (2003: 83) suggests that assessing writing
involves: 1) Writing tasks should be set that are properly representative
of the range of tasks we would expect students to be able to perform. 2)
The tasks should elicit writing that is truly representative of the
students’ writing ability. 3) The samples of writing can be appropriately
scored. Assessment in writing can be used for various suitable purpose,
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both inside and outside of the classroom, such as: providing assistance
to students, providing grades, knowing the extent to which students in
writing skills, knowing students’ writing abilities through course
assistance and evaluating program.
In giving scoring of students writing should use rubric to score
the format, punctuation and mechanic, content, organization and
grammar. It could be shown descriptively with scoring rubric of Jacob
(1981: 90), scoring rubric is encourages an evaluation of student
proficiency that is complex, perhaps recording a high accomplishment
in content, but low in mechanicsa complexity that befits writers who
often show uneven writing skills in a second language. In this scoring
rubric, it seems to contrast with holistic scoring methods, which erase
this possible unevenness of writing accomplishments in reporting a
single score. In addition, he states that the limited number of traits
allows comparison of group rating behavior, perhaps contrasting the
way native and non-native people evaluate ESL essays. The scaling of
traits and substrate allows study of rater reliability along with the
development of training methods that produce high interest reliability.
According to Brown (2004: 220-221), in assessing writing, there
are two skills that you will assist the procedure of assessment, namely
micro and macro skills. Where, micro skills apply more appropriately to
imitative and intensive types of writing task, while the macro skills are
essential for the successful mastery of responsive and extensive writing.
Table.2.1 Micro and macro Writing skills
Micro Skills Macro Skills
a. Produces graphemes a. Use the rhetorical forms and
and orthographic conventionsofwrittendiscours
patterns of English b. Appropriatelyaccomplish the
b. Produce writing at an communicative functions of
efficient rate of speed written texts according to forms
to suit the purpose and purpose
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2. Narrative Text
a) Definition of Narrative Text
A narrative is some kind of retelling, often in words (though it is
possible to mime a story), of something that happened (a story). The
narrative is not the story itself but rather the telling of the story, which
is why it is often used in phras- es such as written narrative, oral
narrative, etc.As Weigle(2002) stated that writing has received bigger
attention in principle of communicative language teaching both in
second and foreign language.
Narrative text can be said to be a form of discourse whose main
target is trying to be described as clearly as possible to the reader an
event that has occurred Keraf, (2007: 136). When reading a narrative
text, the reader seems to see or experience the event himselfthe. A
narrative text is made to provide entertainment and fun related to
factual events or past personal experiences that tell about problems or
conflicts that flow into a crisis and finally find problems Djatmika,
(2017: 139). Narrative canconvey an event in a certain time series.
Therefore, the most important element in the narrative is the action or
action and time. This is so that the reader is able to distinguishbetween
narrative and descriptive text.
Narrative text is one of various genres of text. It belongs to non-
factual text that is written or listened to entertain the reader or listener.
Anderson and Anderson (2003:8) mentioned that “narrative is a piece of
text which tells a story and, in doing so, entertains or informs the reader
or listener.” Narratives deal with problematic events which lead to a
crisis or turning point of some kind, which in turn finds a resolution.
Anderson and Anderson (2003:8) state that there are five parts of
generic structure of narrative. They are:
1) an orientation (can be a paragraph, a picture or opening chapter) in
which the narrators tells the audience about who is in the story,
when the story is taking place and where the action is happening
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4) Novel
A novel is a long and fictional narrative which describes
intimate human experiences and typically published as a book.
Examples of novelare Home, Divergent, Laskar Pelangi, etc.
5) Horror
A story in which the focus in on creating a feeling of fear. It
can feature supernatural elements such as ghosts, vampires, witches
or it canaddress more realistic psychological fears. The examples of
horror are theInsidious, Anabel, Red Room, etc.
Based on the definition above, narrative text does not only have
one type and has the goal of telling a story that has a series of connected
chronological events.
c) The Schematics of Narrative Text
The structure of narrative text based on Anderson and Anderson
(1998) are:
1) Orientation
Every story needs an orientation although how simple that
story. An orientation is an introduction of character, time and place
that will be told inthe story. It is impossible to tell a story without
knowing characters set up ina particular time and place.
2) Complication
In this part, crisis of the story arises. The story is pushed
along by a series of events which the reader aspects some problem to
arise. Thiscomplication will involve the main character and often
serve to(temporarily) toward them from reaching the goal.
3) Resolution
The complication that happened in the story will be resolved
for better or worse, but rarely the complication left completely
unresolved to leave thereader wondering how the end is.
Pardiyono (2007:97) states that narrative text has three
genericstructures. There are generic structure of narrative text:
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a. Orientation
Introduction of the story which involves thecharacters,
setting and time of the story are established. Usuallyanswer who ?
when ? where ? and it is stated in the beginning ofthe story.
Usually the first paragraph is the orientation where readerfinds
time and place set up and also the participants as thebackground
of the story. The starting point of a narrative story tomake readers
understand what the stories talking about. Thusorientation means
to introduce the participants or characters of thetext time, sets of
the scene, creating the picture of the setting andatmosphere.
b. Complication
It explores the conflict in the story. It will show thecrisis,
rising crisist, and climax of the story. This structure ofnarrative
text is to tell the event involving the main character :either the
character goes against tradition or does something
quiteunexpected. Complication is the problem raise. It is divided
intomajor and minor complication.
c. Resolution
It shows the situation which the problems have
beenresolved. It must be our note that “resolved” means
accomplishedwhether succed or fail.it means the complication
may be resolvedfor better or worse / happily or unhappily.
Sometimes there arenumber of complications that have to be
resolved. These add andsustain interest and suspense for the
reader. Resolution is the finalseries of the events which happen in
the story of the text. Likecomplication, resolution also devided
into major and minorresolution In conclusion, generic structure of
narrative text can beconcluded into three parts, such as:
orientation, complication, andresolution. First, orientation is the
paragraph that is contain aboutthe introduction of the character
involved in the story. Second,complication is the paragraph that is
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Snow white
Once upon a time there lived a little girl named Snow White. She lived
with
her Aunt and Uncle because her parents were dead. (Orientation)
One day she heard her Uncle and Aunt talking about leaving Snow White
in the castle because they both wanted to go to America and they didn’t have
enough money to take Snow White. Snow White did not want her Uncle and Aunt
to do this so she decided it would be best if she ran away. The next morning she
ran away from home when her Aunt and Uncle were having breakfast. She ran
away into the woods. (Complication)
Then she saw this little cottage. She knocked but no one answered so she
went inside and fell asleep. Meanwhile, the seven dwarfs were coming home from
work. They went inside. There they found snow white sleeping. Then Snow white
woke up. She saw the dwarfs. The dwarfs said, “what is your name?” Snow White
said. “My name is Snow White.”
One of the dwarfs, said, “If you wish, you may live here with us.” Snow
White said, “Oh could I? Thank you.” Then Snow White told the dwarfs the whole
story and finally Snow White and the 7 dwarfs lived happily ever after.
(Resolution)
B. Relevant Research
There are several related studies regarding the analysis of
students'narrative writing skills. The first research is conducted by Fauziatul
(2014), “The Analysis Of Students Writing Ability In A Narrative Text at
Senior HighSchool 3 Bukit Tinggi “, with result of analyzed students test
were found thatthe percentage of students got the criteria of each component
of ELScomposition Profile in content, 21, 74 % with good to average criteria
was 5students, 78,26 % with fair to poor criteria was 18 students, there is no
studentsgot excellent to very good and very poor. Organization, 17,40 % with
excellentto very good was 4 students, 78,26 % with good to average was 18
students, 4,34 % with fair to poor was 1 student, and there was no student got
very poor.Vocabulary, 8, 71% with excellent to very good criteria was 2
students, 86, 95% with good to average was 20 students, and 4, 34 % with
fair to poor was 1student and there is no students got very poor. Language
use, 21, 74 % with goodto average was 5 students,78, 26 % with fair to poor
was 18 students, and therewas no students got excellent to very good and very
poor. The last one, Mechanic52, 17 % with fair to poor was 12 students, 47,
83% with very poor and there isno students got good to average and excellent
to very good.
Second is the research of Hudri (2015) This study aims at observing
thestudents’ ability in writing narrative text at the second year of MTs Nurul
JannahNW Ampenan in Academic Year 2015/2016. Of 40 students, 20
students werechosen as the sample. The method used in this study was
descriptive research.Writing Narrative in terms of content, organization,
diction and sentencestructure . Content, there are13 students or 65% are
catagorized inadequate 2student or 10% categorized fair and 5 students or
25% are catagorized intoinacceptable . organization, there are 12 students or
60% are categorized intoinadequate category, 1 student or 5% are categorized
into fair category and 7students are classified into inacceptable catagory.
diction, there are 8 students or40% are catagorized into inacceptable category.
Then, 7 students or 35% arecatagorized inadequate and 5 students or 25% are
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classified into fair categoy.sentence structure, also found most of the students
are catagorized intoinadequate category 12 students or 60%. There are7
students or 35% categorizedinacceptable, and 1 students or 5% are classified
into faircatagory.The data werecollected through observation and writing test.
It was found that the ability ofthe students in writing narrative text was on fair
category. Based on the result,10 students (50%) got score 56 - 65 (fair), 5
students (25%) got score 0 - 45 (verypoor), 3 students (15%) got score 66 - 79
(good), and 2 students (10%) got score46 - 55 (poor). Almost of all students
are in between 56 - 65 (fair category).
Meanwhile, Having analyze the students’ ability in each of writing
aspects, itcan be said that they were in inadequate category because most of
them wereinadequate in content. In other words, it means that they have very
limited ofideas. The problems faced by the students were they made too
muchgrammatical and spelling errors, difficulties in using connectors, and
they havelimited vocabulary and unable to select the appropriate diction.
Both relevant studies above had different setting in place and period
of time, and different amount of sample and population with this research.
And the similarities with this research is writing of narrative text.
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design
The approach in this research is a quantitative approach, because
Thisresearch is presented with numbers. This is in accordance with the
opinion(Arikunto 2006: 12) which suggests that quantitative research is Many
research approaches are required to reveal numbers, starting from data
collection,interpretation of the data, and appearance the result. Before going
further to anyexplanation about the research design, it’s necessary to know
that this researchwas conducted to uncover the research problems proposed in
which the data studied were the students’ writing in narrative text such kinds
of data areclassified into qualitative ones, this study is categorized into a case
study byusing quantitave descriptive approach. A mixed method combines
quantitativeand qualitative methods in the same study in order to get a full
understanding ofthe phenomenon under study. Thus a mixed research method
usually results inprofounder research due to its “methodological pluralism or
eclecticism”(Johnson & Onwuegbuzie, 2004 : 14).
This research used descriptive quantitative design. The purpose is
toanalysis the students ability in writing narrative text. Research analysis of
thedocument/content is research that doing systematically to the records
ordocuments as data sources. The Quantitative data will be used to determine
thescore of the students in comprehending narrative text on the Nine Grade
SMP N 43 Merangin .
B. Popultion and Sample
1. Population
The research decided to conduct this research at SMPN 43
Merangin. There are some definitions of population. According to
Arikunto (2010: 237) states that population is the entire research’s object.
It means that population is a source that taken for the research. It can be
people, things, animals, plants,indications, or incidents. Population is
whole of the subject research that can be consist of people,things, animals,
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detailed feedback to help the student improve his or her writing, but it takes
considerably longer than does holistic scoring.
To know the students‟ score in writing narrative text, the reseacher
used scoring rubric.
Table.3.2 Writing Scoring Rubric
No Aspect Score Level/Criteria
1 CONTENT 30-27 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD :knowlaedgeable .
substantive . through development of thesis . relevant
to assigned topic
26-22 GOOD TO AVERAGE: some knowlaledge of subject .
adequate range . limited development of thesis , but
21-17 lacks detail
FAIR TO POOR: limited knowledge of subject . little
16-13 substance . inadequate development of topic
VERY POOR:does not show knowledge of subject .
non-subtantive.not pertinent.
OR not enough to evaluate.
2 ORGANIZATION 20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:fluent expression .
ideas clearly stated/suppoted . succinct . well-
organized.logical. sequencing. Cohensive
17-14 GOOD TO AVERAGE : SOMEWHAT CHOPPY .
lossely organized but main ideas stand out . limited
support . logical but incplete sequencing
13-10 FOR TO POOR:non-fluent . ideas confused or
disconnected . lacks logical sequencing and
9-7 development
VERY POOR:does not commucative . no organization
.OR not enough to evaluate
3 VOCABULARY 20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD:sophisticated range.
Affective word idiom choice and usage . word form
mastery . appropriate register
17-14 GOOD TO AVERAGE:adequate range . frequent
errors of word / idiom form ,choice , usage but
13-10 meaning liot obscuret
FAIR TO POOR:limited range . frequent errors of
9-7 word/idiom form, choice , usagr . meaning confused or
obscured
VERY POOR:essential translation . little knowledge of
English vocabulary , idioms, word form ,OR not
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enough to evaluate
Source: Weigle(2002:116)
Based on the explanation above, the researcher concludes that in
assessing students' writing, they consider every point for each aspect or
category, students' writing by referring to the column of assessment rubric
criteria. The final score of students' writing is the sum of the points for
writing so that it can be seen how far students are able to express their own
ideas in writing.
E. Data Analysis Techniques
For the percentage of student scores in the data from the tests that
have been given to students and to find out what percentage of students are
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F. Research Shhedule
Table .3.4. Research schedule
No Month and Week
Activities June July Aug Sept oct Nov Dec
1 Collection data √
4 Seminar Of Proposal √
5 Pepair of proposal √
6 Test
8 Thesis Completing √
9 Thesis doubling √
CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION
A. DATA DESCRIPTION
This research was conducted at SMP N 43 Merangin class IX B on 04
– 09 September 2021. SMP N 43 Merangin is located in Sungai.Ulak
Bangko, Nalotantan District, Merangin Regency. The number of students in
class IX B as many as 30 students followed by only 18 people, 4 people dont
attend school, and 8 students got a score of 0, because one of the questions
did not follow the instructions and there was also an unknown reason so they
did not submit assignments.
Researchers conducted an analysis of the ability to write narrative
texts. Data analysis used minimum completeness criteria (KKM). This study
uses data on student scores.
The test was conducted to create a narrative text. The test consists of 2
themes, namely (1) about personal experience, (2) about fairy tales. And the
most voted questions were personal experiences, there were 12 people who
voted. The reason is because personal experiences are easier to remember to
tell their own experiences. while fairy tales are only 8 people because they are
too difficult to know, not just stories but animations or films that have been
very rarely seen and heard since childhood. The results of the analysis are as
follows:
1. The Students Score Writing Narrative Text
Tabel 4.1. Achievements Writing Narrative Teks
KKM Criteria Total Percentage
Students
75-100 Complete 3 17%
0-74 Incomplete 15 83%
18 100%
Based on the table above, the researcher found that the results of
theanalysis of the studentsoverall abilities showed that a total of 3 students
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Like this is the result of the diagram if you look at it, there is a
score foreach student, the green one is marked complete and the blue one
is incomplete. There are 8 students who get a score above the KKM and 10
who not get the KKM.
2. The Students Score in Content
Table 4.2. The Students Score in Content Indicator
KKM Criteria Total Percentage
Students
75-100 Complete 3 17%
0-74 Incomplete 15 83%
18 100%
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (BA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(BA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (BA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 5 (DA) the score obtained is 46 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (DA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (DA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(DA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (DA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 6 (FAH) the score obtained is 75 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (FAH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (FAH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(FAH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (FAH)
is not good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 7 (HARI) the score obtained is 80 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (HARI) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (HARI) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(HARI) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing
(HARI) is quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 8 (IR) the score obtained is 85 in the
content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication and
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good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 12 (MH) the score obtained is 71 n
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (MH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(MH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (MH) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 13 (PA) the score obtained is 74 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (PA) words are not
good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (PA)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (PA) is quite
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 14 (PW) the score obtained is 88 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PW) is not well organized
or incomplete sequence. In English words (PW) the words are quite bad
because there is almost no mastery of sentences. The writing method (PW)
is not good because there are often spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
4. The Students Score in Vocabulary
Table 4.4. The Students Score in Vocabulary Indicator
KKM Criteria Total Percentage
Students
75-100 Complete 2 11%
0-74 Incpmplete 16 89%
18 100%
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there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 4 (BA) the score obtained is 62 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (BA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (BA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(BA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (BA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 5 (DA) the score obtained is 85 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (DA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (DA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(DA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (DA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 6 (FAH) the score obtained is 75 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (FAH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (FAH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(FAH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (FAH)
is not good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 7 (HARI) the score obtained is 80 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (HARI) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (HARI) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
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(HARI) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing
(HARI) is quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 8 (IR) the score obtained is 85 in the
content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication and
resolution). In the preparation of sentences (IR) it is not well organized or
the order is not logical. In English words (IR) words are quite good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (IR) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (IR) is quite good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 9 (KN) the score obtained is 61 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (KN) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (KN) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(KN) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (KN) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 10 (MAM) the score obtained is 83
in the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MAM) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (MAM) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(MAM) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing
(MAM) is quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 11 (MC) the score obtained is 90 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MC) it is well organized
or the order is not logical. In English words (MC) words are quite very
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good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (MC)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (MC) is quite
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 12 (MH) the score obtained is 76 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (MH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(MH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (MH) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 13 (PA) the score obtained is 74 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (PA) words are not
good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (PA)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (PA) is quite
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 14 (PW) the score obtained is 88 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PW) is not well organized
or incomplete sequence. In English words (PW) the words are quite bad
because there is almost no mastery of sentences. The writing method (PW)
is not good because there are often spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
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the order is not logical. In English words (B) words are quite good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (B) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (B) is quite good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 4 (BA) the score obtained is 62 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (BA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (BA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(BA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (BA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 5 (DA) the score obtained is 85 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (DA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (DA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(DA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (DA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 6 (FAH) the score obtained is 75 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (FAH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (FAH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(FAH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (FAH)
is not good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 7 (HARI) the score obtained is 80 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
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From the table above, the students ability in Mechanics shows that
0 students (0%) the criteria or complete. and 18 students (100%) the
criteria were incomplete.It is known that students based on the mechanic
score consist of 1 student getting a score of 40 and 17 student getting a
score of 60.
The writing ability of students 1 (Af) the score obtained is 61 in the
content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication and
resolution). In the preparation of sentences (AF) it is not well organized or
the order is not logical. In English words (AF) words are quite good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (AF) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (AF) is quite good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such
The writing ability of students 2 (AH) the score obtained is 55 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation and
complication ). In the preparation of sentences (AH) it is not well
organized or incomplete sequence. In English words (AH) the words are
quite bad because there is almost no mastery of sentences. In the way of
writing (AH) is not good there are often speling errors in sentence such
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 3 (B) the score obtained is 85 in the
content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication and
resolution). In the preparation of sentences (B) it is not well organized or
the order is not logical. In English words (B) words are quite good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (B) can
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understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (B) is quite good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 4 (BA) the score obtained is 62 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (BA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (BA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(BA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (BA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 5 (DA) the score obtained is 85 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (DA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (DA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(DA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (DA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 6 (FAH) the score obtained is 75 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (FAH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (FAH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(FAH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (FAH)
is not good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 7 (HARI) the score obtained is 80 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (HARI) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (HARI) words are
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quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(HARI) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing
(HARI) is quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 8 (IR) the score obtained is 85 in the
content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication and
resolution). In the preparation of sentences (IR) it is not well organized or
the order is not logical. In English words (IR) words are quite good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (IR) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (IR) is quite good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 9 (KN) the score obtained is 61 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (KN) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (KN) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(KN) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (KN) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 10 (MAM) the score obtained is 83
in the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MAM) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (MAM) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(MAM) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing
(MAM) is quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 11 (MC) the score obtained is 90 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MC) it is well organized
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or the order is not logical. In English words (MC) words are quite very
good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (MC)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (MC) is quite
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 12 (MH) the score obtained is 71 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (MH) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (MH) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(MH) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (MH) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 13 (PA) the score obtained is 74 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (PA) words are not
good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (PA)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (PA) is quite
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 14 (PW) the score obtained is 88 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (PW) is not well organized
or incomplete sequence. In English words (PW) the words are quite bad
because there is almost no mastery of sentences. The writing method (PW)
is not good because there are often spelling errors in sentences such as
capital letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 15 (SH) the score obtained is 72 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (SH) it is not well
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organized or the order is not logical. In English words (SH) words are not
good even though there are some wrong words In the language used (SH)
can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (SH) is not
good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 16 (SW) the score obtained is 74 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (SW) it is well organized
or the order is not logical. In English words (SW) words are not good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (SW) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (SW) is not good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 17 (SA) the score obtained is 76 in
the content of the story there are 3 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (SA) it is not well
organized or the order is not logical. In English words (SA) words are
quite good even though there are some wrong words In the language used
(SA) can understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (SA) is
quite good there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital
letters and punctuation marks.
The writing ability of students 18 (W) the score obtained is 69 in
the content of the story there are 2 paragraphs (orientation, complication
and resolution). In the preparation of sentences (W) it is not well organized
or the order is not logical. In English words (W) words are not good even
though there are some wrong words In the language used (W) can
understand the right words to use. In the way of writing (W) is not good
there are some spelling errors in sentences such as capital letters and
punctuation marks.
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B. Discusion
The purpose of this study was to find out and describe students'
writing skills in narrative texts in the ninth grade of SMP N 43 Merangin in
the 2020/2021 school year. The student's text about the test was read and
analyzed by the researcher. Based on the analysis of students' writing skills in
narrative texts in class IXB SMP N 43 Merangin. There are five aspects of
writing that are analyzed in this study such as: content, organization,
vocabulary, language use and mechanics. And from the data obtained after
the test was given to class IXB students of SMP N 43 Merangin.
The finding of this research was of students' writing ability in
narrative texts of class IXB students of SMPN 43 Merangin for the
2020/2021 academic year . was categoried as complete .in this relevant with
fauziatul (2014) .They found the averange score of the class IXB students
ability in narrative text was categorized as good level .The students still face
difficulties inwritinganarrative text. This research was aimed at describing the
ability of the grade IX in writing narrative text dealing with generic structure,
applying language feature of narrative text, vocabulary, and mechanics.
Thelowest analysis results are in the Mechanic aspect.Thedifference is that
the highest aspect of my research in the Language usesection, while in the
voabulary section .
The finding of this research was of students' writing ability in
narrative texts of class IXB students of SMPN 43 Merangin for the
2020/2021 academic year . was categoried as complete .in this relevant with
Hudri (2015) . He found the averange score students ability in narrative text
was on fair category .The students still face difficulties inwritinganarrative
text. This research was aimed at describing the ability of the grade IX in
writing narrative text dealing with generic structure, applying language
feature of narrative text, vocabulary, and mechanics. Another difference is
that ofHudri (2015), where none of the aspects are successful, all aspects and
overallvalues are under the KKM.
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APPENDIX 2
Name :
Class :
School : SMP N 43 Merangin
Introduction
APPENDIX 3
Criteria Of Writing
No. NAME Class Total
C O V L M
1 AF IX B 15 10 13 20 3 61
2 AH IX B 18 14 10 16 3 55
3 AM IX B - - - - - -
4 ASJ IX B A A A A A A
5 B IX B 15 9 9 10 3 46
6 BA IX B 22 10 7 11 3 73
7 CCS IX B S S S S S S
8 DA IX B 15 9 9 10 3 46
9 FAH IX B 24 13 13 22 3 75
10 GS IX B - - - - - -
11 HARI IX B 15 10 9 11 3 33
12 IR IX B 10 5 10 5 3 32
13 IW IX B A A A A A A
14 JK IX B - - - - - -
15 KN IX B 15 5 5 5 3 22
16 MAM IX B 20 15 17 17 3 77
17 M.M IX B - - - - - -
18 M.Z IX B - - - - - -
19 MC IX B 15 10 9 11 3 38
20 MH IX B 13 10 9 10 3 45
21 NS IX B - - - - - -
22 NFG IX B S S S S S S
23 PA IX B 13 10 11 15 53
24 PW IX B 27 20 18 20 3 88
25 SA IX B - - - - - -
26 SNR IX B - - - - - -
27 SH IX B 20 18 13 18 3 72
28 SW IX B 25 17 12 17 3 74
29 SA IX B 25 12 14 22 3 76
30 W IX B 20 14 14 18 3 69
Total 897
Average 49,83
Note :
C : Content O : Organization V : Vocabulary
L : Language M : Mechanish
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APPENDIX 4
Aspect Content
No. Student Name 30-27 26-22 21-17 16-13 Total Score
1 AF 15 15 50
2 AH 18 18 60
3 B 15 15 50
4 BA 22 22 73
5 DA 15 15 50
6 FAH 13 13 43
7 HARI 11 11 41
8 IR 29 20 67
9 KN 13 13 43
10 MAM 15 15 43
11 MC 13 13 43
12 MH 22 22 73
13 PA 22 22 73
14 PW 20 20 67
15 SH 20 20 67
16 SW 25 25 83
17 SA 25 25 83
18 W 20 20 67
Total 951
Average 31,70
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APPENDIX 5
Aspect Oganization
No. Student Name 20-18 17-14 13_10 09_7 Total Score
1 AF 10 10 50
2 AH 14 14 70
3 B 9 9 45
4 BA 10 10 50
5 DA 9 9 45
6 FAH 13 13 65
7 HARI 10 10 50
8 IR 15 15 75
9 KN 5 5 25
10 MAM 15 15 75
11 MC 10 19 50
12 MH 10 10 50
13 PA 10 10 50
14 PW 15 15 85
15 SH 15 15 50
16 SW 17 17 85
17 SA 12 12 60
18 W 14 14 70
Total 1050
Average 50,33
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APPENDIX 6
Aspect Vocabulary
No. Student Name 20-18 17-14 13-10 09-7 Total Score
1 AF 13 13 65
2 AH 10 10 50
3 B 9 9 45
4 BA 7 7 35
5 DA 9 9 45
6 FAH 13 13 65
7 HARI 5 5 25
8 IR 10 17 50
9 KN 17 10 50
10 MAM 9 9 45
11 MC 9 9 40
12 MH 13 13 65
13 PA 15 15 75
14 PW 15 15 75
15 SH 13 13 65
16 SW 12 12 60
17 SA 14 14 70
18 W 14 14 70
Total 985
Average 54,72
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APPENDIX 7
APPENDIX 8
Aspect Mechanics
No. Student Name 5 4 3 2 Total Score
1 AF 3 3 60
2 AH 3 3 60
3 B 3 3 60
4 BA 3 3 60
5 DA 3 5 60
6 FAH 3 3 60
7 HARI 3 4 60
8 IR 3 3 60
9 KN 3 3 60
10 MAM 3 3 60
11 MC 3 3 60
12 MH 3 3 60
13 PA 2 2 40
14 PW 3 3 60
15 SH 3 3 60
16 SW 3 3 60
17 SA 3 3 60
18 W 3 3 60
Total 1060
Average 58,88
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APPENDIX 9
APPENDIX 10
APPENDIX 11
APPENDIX 12
APPENDIX 13
CURRICULUM VITAE
Gender. : Female
Religion. : Islam
Addres. : Sei.ulak
Nationality. : Indonesia
Email. : bellalma007@gmail.com
EDUCATION BACKGROUND