UPM-CALC/LPE2501/SEM 1/2022-23/WP/TASK 2

WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 2

PARAPHRASE AND SUMMARY FORM (DRAFT)

NAME: __________CHANG ZEYU______________ GROUP: _99___

MATRIC No.: _________209624___________

Transfer your topic, thesis statement and supporting sentences in Task 1 into this form.
Paraphrase and/or summarise your selected excerpts to be used as supporting details.
Include in-text citations according to APA style.

You MUST have a total of 2 paraphrases and 2 summaries.

(Example: SD 1- Paraphrase, SD 2- Summary, SD 3 – Summary, SD 4 – Paraphrase)

Topic:

Air pollution plague industrialised cities

Thesis Statement:

Why do industrial cities have air pollution?

Why does environmental pollution exist in industrial cities for a long time?

Body Paragraph 1:

Topic Sentence:

There are a lot of factories in industrial cities, and the gas from the factories will
cause air pollution.

Supporting Sentence 1:

Unplanned industrial growth is one of the major causes of industrial pollution.

Supporting Detail 1:
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Unplanned industrial growth is one of the major causes of industrial pollution. In most of
the industrial areas, the factories have ignored the standard rules and regulations for
industrial setup. As a result, these industries have end-up polluting the air, water, and
soil by releasing contaminants.

[Copy/Paste Your Excerpt Here]

Method: Paraphrase / Summary

Based on your excerpt, underline the following:

a. type of supporting detail: Example/ Statistic/ Quotation/ Fact
b. method to use: Paraphrase / Summarise

Reference:
https://www.earthreminder.com/industrial-pollution causes-effects-prevention/
Industrial Pollution – Causes, Effects and Prevention(June 14,2020)

Supporting Sentence 2:
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Supporting Detail 2:

Industrial pollution mainly pollutes the air where we breathe. The industries emit a huge
amount of harmful gases into the atmosphere daily. The process of emission will
continue as these factories are running to fulfill our needs that are increasing rapidly
every year.

[Copy/Paste Your Excerpt Here]

Method: Paraphrase / Summary

Based on your excerpt, underline the following:

a. type of supporting detail: Example/ Statistic/ Quotation/ Fact
b. method to use: Paraphrase / Summarise

Reference:
https://www.earthreminder.com/industrial-pollution causes-effects-prevention/
Industrial Pollution – Causes, Effects and Prevention(June 14,2020)

Body Paragraph 2
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Topic Sentence:

People don’t have environment protection awareness in industrial cities.

Supporting Sentence 1:

Lack of policies and implementation also trigger industrial pollution.

Supporting Detail 1:

Lack of policies and implementation also trigger industrial pollution. It allows many
factories to ignore the laws enforced by the pollution control board. It increases
industrial pollution to worst level imposing direct effects on the lives of plants, animals,
and humans.

[Copy/Paste Your Excerpt Here]

Method: Paraphrase / Summary

Based on your excerpt, underline the following:

a. type of supporting detail: Example/ Statistic/ Quotation/ Fact
b. method to use: Paraphrase / Summarise

Reference:
https://www.earthreminder.com/industrial-pollution causes-effects-prevention/
Industrial Pollution – Causes, Effects and Prevention(June 14,2020)

Supporting Sentence 2:

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Due to the lack of environmental awareness, the factory did not deal with the
pollutants.

Supporting Detail 2

These industrial products become out-dated after a while, and they piled up to make
massive landfills. Sometimes people dump this waste in water bodies causing
contamination of water. These consumer products also contain harmful chemicals that
may cause adverse effects on human health as well as plant and animal health.

[Copy/Paste Your Excerpt Here]

Method: Paraphrase / Summary

Based on your excerpt, underline the following:

a. type of supporting detail: Example/ Statistic/ Quotation/ Fact
b. method to use: Paraphrase / Summarise

Reference:
https://www.earthreminder.com/industrial-pollution causes-effects-prevention/
Industrial Pollution – Causes, Effects and Prevention(June 14,2020)

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