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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people,
while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views
and give you own opinion.(3)

People have different views about the purpose of using museums that should be
enjoyable places to entertain people or to educate. While some people think that
museums are as a places for their amusement and recreation, I am in favor of the
idea that it’ is better if museums are encouraged to educate.

There are several reasons why some people would like to go to the museums to
relax. Firstly, I think it ’is totally free or cheaper to buy tickets to get museums in
instead of compared to they must pay too much money for a travelling packet or a
holiday. Secondly, the space at the museums is very spacious and airy, especially,
it is suitale for children to play. To take Ha Noi Museum as is an example, ….

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for people to go to museum
to study because museums are the places to keep kepp historical remains y of the
country. When parents and grandparents take their children to the museums, they
will share and exchange with their children about their favorite objects, pictures or
related historical events related/associated/involved. This is not only an exciting
time, but also an engaging way to learn, creating a special interest in history, art
and science. This means that museums are so good/educational places to inspire
learning for not only younger generation but also everyone. In this way, museums
play a very important role in encouraging people to learn about history to know
how to love and appreciate good historical values.

In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the museums
are considered as wonderful educational environment for everyone.
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