Writing assignment 2

Name: 郭愷 Ken class: 7111 ( # 31 ) score: ______________/10

Topic: Computer technologies

Computer makes a lot of effect in human society and daily life. For example, with

its help, people have more convenient life, traveling around by air plant, having efficient

traffic light, and lots of interesting video on YouTube all contribute to computer

technologies. Furthermore, it also connects people’s life together, we can see, chat with

our friend and family, unrestricted by space. Thirdly, people can calculate complicated and

difficult math, physics, and economics problem, and it also can simulate the weather and

what will it change. In this way, human have the chance to go into outer space, even

landing on Moon.

However, there are still some problems following the computer technologies. For

instance, computer reduce lots of employment opportunities when a new technology

released, although we all know that machine will replace labor or AI will make lots of jobs

lose, and we should learn another ability to prevent us losing job. Secondly, people care

too much on computer instead of the real human, landscape, and environment in the

reality life. Finally, people will get more and more rely on computer, living in this

convenient society, people gradually forget some comment abilities, such as that, with the

helping of calculator, people lose the ability to calculate an easy addition and subtraction

problems.

Computer technologies make a great impact in the society and daily life for

human. We should use its advantage and avoided those disadvantages by learning what
people become in history. In this way we can have a better life.

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