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If the government does not put this issue into perspective, it may negatively
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Source:
https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/writing/big-words-to-use-for-impressive-
speaking-and-writing.html
老師對學生揪出寫作三大問題(Sabrina)
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Over the past few decades, printed newspapers have been slowly supplanted by
online news sources.
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Over the past few decades, printed newspapers have been slowly supplanted by
online news sources. Instead of reading them, we ignore them, knowing that we
can read it freely online with just a few simple clicks on our smartphone . Unlike
those traditional ways to gain information, electronic sources are readily accessible
and quickly updated. Thus, ......
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直播講解講義
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People had many ways to connect with others because of the advances in
technology. Everything could advertise their products for sale on the Internet and so
do people show their expression on social media.
改成:
We now (現在式) can connect and communicate with others via various ways
because of the advances in technology (不加 the), Company can (現在式) now
advertise their products on the Internet and people can express their feelings and
sentiments via social media.
The Internet and social media (相同的東西) ----> The online world 就好
The online world becomes a place where teenagers like to share feelings with others
who may face the same or similar situations.
Besides, people “are” always busy “with” studying, job, or family. In such hustle and
bustle, people in fact do not have spare time to have some rest. Therefore,
technology comes in handy, and the Internet helps us keep in touch with our friends
who we may not have much opportunity to hang out with. On top of that, the Internet
also helps bonding in a relationship and it is much likely to keep the relationship
longer.
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