Professional Documents
Culture Documents
2017
ENGLISH
MINISTRY OF EDUCATION
EXAMINER’S REPORT
ENGLISH
Language Accuracy:
Limited use of appropriate vocabulary;
Grammatical errors of tense, spelling, word order, using wrong
words, preposition, pronouns, degree of comparison, non-
agreement of subject and verbs and punctuations.
Style:
Inappropriate sentence beginnings;
Lacking linkage of ideas and thoughts within each paragraph and
between paragraphs;
Limited use of figurative or idiomatic expressions;
Limited linking devices.
Passage 1
Q1. This was well attempted as 85% chose the correct answer [D]
Q2. Well answered as more than 85% chose the correct answer. [D]
Q3. This was fairly done. About 75% chose the correct answer, [B]
Q4. Well attempted. 80% chose the correct choice [D]
Q5. Very well attempted as 90% got the correct answer [C]
Passage 2
Q6. Very well answered. 90% of the students chose the correct answer
[A]
Q7. Well attempted. 80% chose the correct answer. [C]
Q8. This question was well answered as 85% chose the correct answer
[D]
Q9. Well attempted. 90% chose the correct answer [C]
Q10. Well answered. Most (80%) chose [C]
Q1. About 70% of the students chose the correct answer. [B]
Agreement is an important concept that needs to be taught
well.
Q2. About 70% of the students chose the correct answer [A]
The difference between its/it’s needs to be taught well.
Q3. Well attempted as 90% chose the correct answer [C].
Q4. Well answered as 80% of the students chose the correct answer.[D]
Q5. Fairly attempted. 65% of the students chose the correct answer [A]
The concept of question tags needs a revisit. ‘Isn’t it’ is only
used when the statement uses ‘is’ after which the question
tag will use ‘isn’t it’.
Q6. This question was fairly answered [A] .
Titles are singular when used in a sentence testing Agreement.
A singular subject takes a singular verb.
Q7. This was fairly done. 70% of the students chose the correct
answer. [B]
Q8. This question was fairly done. 65% chose the correct answer.
While reported speech has always been a challenge for
students, consistent revision and writing will assist the
students.
4.
5.1 Dictionary
This question was answered well as 75% of the students were able to get
the correct answer.
It would be wise to teach students to write the full word as an answer
where parts of speech is concerned while the question uses symbols
such as adv/adj. It would assist them in lower secondary exams
where the dictionary exercise develops further into other aspects such
as pronunciation, syllables and many more for their knowledge.
5.2 Library
(1) About 65% of the students answered this correctly. Students need
to know the parts of a book. The spelling of Spine needs to be
revisited. Students in Year 8 are expected to be familiar with and
know the spellings of various terms associated with Parts of a
Book.
(2) This question was also poorly done. 40% of the students wrote all
kinds of incorrect answers on why Reference Books cannot be
taken out of the library.
This raises the notion of whether students are in reality having
their important library classes and are shown the various parts
of the library.
5.
6.0 USAGE
This particular section was very poorly attempted. Students were not
able to write a sentence beginning with ‘If’- they rewrote the question and
added ‘if’ to it! The ones who managed to write it correctly were the high
achievers since they will have it coming naturally to them.
7.0 LITERATURE
7.1 Novel
Most of the students did exceptionally well in answering all the questions
on Short Stories. However, questions that were worth 2 or 3 marks
needed factual answers with examples from the stories. Writing the
title correctly was highly important.
6.
Some students attempted only the first part of this question and totally
ignored the second part of the question. It is vital that both parts of the
question are answered since Literature can be a scoring section.
7.3 Poetry
More than 75% of the students were able to correctly identify the title of
the poem: Students’ Plea
Please take note of the apostrophe after the letter ‘s’ in Students. That
cost half the mark for students.
The questions based on the list of poems was done well.
7.4 Drama
This section was done well. Approximately 80% of the students passed
this section of the paper. Students wrote their letter using the block
format and teachers are commended for teaching them well.
A few exceptions were seen where punctuation was still being used in
the four parts of the address and the use of ‘Re’ was mostly only
evident in high scorers’ scripts.
Planning can be in the form of the four parts in the question(i-iv) –
students need not waste their time writing half the letter.
When marking in the classroom, teachers must show the breakdown
of the various sections rather than place a blanket mark out of 15 in
the margin.
Mechanics/Style errors need to be circled and correlated against the
Marking Scheme so that students are aware where to improve.
7.
Most students did extremely well in this section while the remaining ones
could have done well had they been practising on it as a weekly activity
in class or as homework.
9.1 Plan
85% of the students were able to write their plan. Students followed their
plan when writing their composition thus making it focused and
organised. Teachers need to continue to guide students in this area so
that they can write even better plans in future.
9.2 Introduction
This part of the essay was fairly done. About 50% of the students did not
attempt this part of the essay but went straight in writing the content
of the essay especially those who were writing on the importance of
having balanced diet.
9.3 Content
Topic 2: This question provided a narrative line but students missed out
on providing a suitable title. But those who chose this topic expressed
themselves well and creatively drew from past experience and books they
had read.
10.0 CONCLUSION
While analyzing the entire paper, evidence showed that there is always
room for improvement. Teachers need to take extra time and effort to
improve children’s learning through a variety of strategies and
techniques and cater for all the different learning abilities in their
classroom. The transition into lower secondary (Years 9 and 10) to do
even better as a consequence of a great Upper Primary foundation will be
easier for the students you have taught. What greater satisfaction does
one need than this? That onus is on you.
THE END