UNIT 12 SPECIALIST STUDY

Peer Feedback Form

Overall rate the student’s documentary based on the following criteria
Comment on each
YOUR NAME: Caitlin Jones

STUDENT NAME: Leah- Marie King

DOCUMENTARY TITLE: PaRappa the Rapper Specialist Subject

WORD COUNT SHOULD TOTAL 1500 FOR BOTH DOCUMENTS

DOCUMENTARY STRUCTURE PRESENT
Introduction to the topic Y

Brief History of topic Y

Has technology has influenced your topic Y

Key people in the industry Y

Key techniques associated with the topic Y

Interviews with people discussing the topic Y

Conclusion that evaluates your chosen topic and why it is important to the esports Y
industry

PROPOSAL WORD COUNT: 596

TREATMENT WORD COUNT: 653

SCRIPT WORD COUNT: 1258

PASS / FAIL: Pass

Pacing and timing:
The timing of your piece is amazing, everything Is so in time. The way the voiceover matches
what’s going on screen wise is very smooth. I also like how to highlight certain pieces you
have added text. Well done 

Clarity of information:
There is so much content included in the whole of your piece, it feels very well researched
and executed. You also show proof of your statements between parts making everything fit
together perfectly.

THANK YOU FOR COMPLETING THIS FORM