Does Not Meet the Standard CATEGORY Exceeds the Standard (A) Meets the Standard (B-C) (D-F) Purpose & The paper clearly compares The paper compares and The paper mostly compares Supporting and contrasts points that are contrasts points clearly, but and contrasts points clearly, Details sophisticated, offers specific the supporting information but the supporting examples to illustrate the is general, and/or the points information is incomplete or comparison, and includes are basic. The paper missing, and/or may include only the information includes only the information that is not relevant to the comparison. information relevant to the relevant to the comparison. comparison. Organization The paper breaks the The paper breaks the Organizational pattern not & Structure information into point-by- information into point-by- identifiable. Some details are point or block-by-block point structure or block-by- not in a logical or expected structure. It follows a block, but may not follow a order, and this distracts the consistent order when consistent order when reader. discussing the comparison. discussing the comparison. Transitions The paper moves smoothly The paper moves from one Transitions may be missing; from one idea to the next idea to the next, but may connections between ideas are and uses transition words lack or misuse transition fuzzy or illogical. and subtle transitions to words to show relationships show relationships between between ideas. ideas. Grammar & Writer makes no errors in Writer makes 1-2 errors in Writer makes several errors in Spelling grammar or spelling that grammar or spelling that grammar or spelling that (Conventions) distract the reader from the distract the reader from the distract the reader from the content. content. content.